通用版高考英语大一轮复习第3部分写作基础训练七提升档次的非谓语动词及建议信.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,学案七提升档次的非谓语动词及建议信,众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词不仅使句型多样，而且使习作结构紧凑。,写作运用探究,一、非谓语动词的分类,1.,不定式,高考佳句,Im sorry,to say,that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.,(2016,全国,，标准范文,),我抱歉地说，我不能和你一起在星期五下午去书店了。,We should take pains,to improve ourselves,through learning and get prepared for the future.,(2015,福建，标准范文,),我们应当通过学习尽力提升自己，为未来做好准备。,2.,动名词,高考佳句,Doing the same sports,on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship.,(2016,天津，标准范文,),在操场上做同样的运动给了我们机会促进我们的友谊。,Questioning,can lead to searching for an answer.,质疑能够寻求到答案。,(2015,湖北，满分作文,),3.,现在分词,高考佳句,A week before Earth Day,，,posters were put up around our school,，,calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.,(2016,北京，标准范文,),一周前的世界地球日我们的学校张贴了海报，呼吁我们参加一个绿色的地球的行动。,In the picture,，,we can see a boy in worn clothes,，,sitting,at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.,(2015,福建，标准范文,),在这幅画中，我们可以看到一个穿着破旧衣服的男孩，坐在一张放着一摞书的旧木桌旁。,4.,过去分词,高考佳句,It carries articles,written,by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.,(2015,全国,，标准范文,),它刊登了由外国朋友写的有关他们国家的文章。,Compared,with the escaped driver,，,I am proud of what I did.,(2014,湖北，满分作文,),与那些逃逸的司机相比，我为自己做的事感到自豪。,【即时演练】,完成句子,1._,，,we are all filled with joy and cheer.,(2014,浙江，满分作文,),听说你将成为我们的一名新成员，我们心里充满了兴奋和快乐。,2.Another suggestion is _.,(2015,四川，满分作文,),还有一项建议是练习说的能力。,3.Hopefully,，,these books will help the students _.,(2015,天津，满分作文,),让人满怀希望的是，这些书籍将有助于学生更好地了解和学习汉语。,4._ your temper in this way can avoid hurting others.,(2014,安徽，满分作文,),用这种方式释放自己的情绪能避免伤害别人。,5._,，,we will go for an outing tomorrow.,天气允许的话，我们明天去郊游。,答案,1.Hearing youll be a new member of us,2.to practice speaking,3.(to)know and learn Chinese better 4.Letting out,5.Weather permitting,写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换，使其成为较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用,“,三步法,”,：,第一步：写出两个简单句。,第二步：找准两个简单句的对接点，让一个句子作为主干，另一个句子用非谓语动词进行改写。,第三步：判断应用何种非谓语动词，把握好时态和语态，最后连接起来。,二、运用非谓语动词转换简单句,示例,第一步：写出两个简单句。,In the newspaper of our school there is a column called“Foreign Culture”,.,It aims to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.,第二步：让句,作主句，用非谓语动词改写句,。,第三步：让句,作定语，由于其动词,aim,与主语,it,之间为主谓关系，故用现在分词短语作定语。,In the newspaper of our school there is a column called“Foreign Culture”,，,aiming,to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.,(2015,全国,，满分作文,),【即时演练】,用非谓语动词进行句型转换,6.All the people here like the,novel.It,is written by Tom.(,用过去分词作定语,),_,7.The boy came to school late,again.This,made the teacher very angry.(,用动名词作主语,),_,8.The boys were making the most of,time.They,wanted to finish the work earlier.(,用不定式作目的状语,),_,答案,6.All the people here like the novel written by Tom.,7.The boys coming to school late again made the teacher very angry.,8.The boys were making the most of time so as to finish the work earlier.,用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可，所以只需两步。,三、运用非谓语动词转换复合句,示例,第一步：写出复合句。,Since you have realized that your time is limited,，,youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.,第二步：把,since,引导的原因状语从句转换为非谓语动词，,realize,与,you,之间为主谓关系，且表示完成，故用现在分词的完成式作状语。,Having realized,that your time is limited,，,youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.,(2014,安徽，满分作文,),【即时演练】,用非谓语动词进行句型转换,9.When we are faced with difficulties,，,we need friends to give us comfort and help.,_,，,we need friends to give us comfort and help.,10.When I saw a car running towards her,，,I reached my hand out and pulled her back.,_,，,I reached my hand out and pulled her back.,11.After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months,，,we strongly desired to be the winner.,_,，,we strongly desired to be the winner.,答案,9.Faced with difficulties,10.Seeing a car running towards her,11.Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months,用非谓语动词进行句型转换,1.We were touched by the teachers,words.We,decided to work hard.,_,2.I feel quite sorry for,that.I,begin to think about what to do to help.,_,3.Because I was amazed at how skillful they were,，,I determined to be just as good.,_,单句跟踪演练,4.Because I had paid a visit to the place,，,I will go somewhere else this year to spend my summer vacation.,_,5.As the society develops rapidly,，,its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.,_,答案,1.Touched by the teachers words,，,we decided to work hard.,2.Feeling quite sorry for that,，,I begin to think about what to do to help.,3.Amazed at how skillful they were,，,I determined to be just as good.,4.Having paid a visit to the place,，,I will go somewhere else this year to spend my summer vacation.,5.With the society developing rapidly,，,its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.,建议信常用词汇,1._,adj,.,有益的,2._,adj,.,明智的,3._,n,.,建议,4._,v,.,推荐,5._,adj,.,实用的,6._,v,.,关心；涉及,7.may/might _ well,不妨,8.make a _,重要,9.make _ of,理解,10.with regard _/as for/as to,关于,答案,1.beneficial,2.advisable,3.proposal/suggestion/advice,4.recommend,5.practical,6.concern 7.as,8.difference,9.sense,10.to,1.,段首常用语：,(1)I am writing to express my views concerning.,(2)You have asked for my advice about.and I will try to make some suggestions.,建议信常用句式,2.,表达建议常用语：,(1)I think the most suitable.for you is.,(2)I would like to suggest that.,(3)Youd better./Its better to.,(4)As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.,(5)For one thing.,；,for another.,(6)If I were you,，,I would.,(7)It seems to me that you could.,3.,段尾常用语：,(1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could.,(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.,(3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.,(4)I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.,建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构。信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是,“,三段式,”,，通常以,firstly,，,secondly,，,thirdly,或,to begin/start with,，,then,，,later,，,last but not least,等依次陈述建议，具体为：,建议信常用方法技巧与注意事项,第一段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。,第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让对方认为是投诉，而不是提建议。,第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使对方容易接受。,假定你是李海，你的堂兄李华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信：,1.,建议他回国；,2.,你的理由是：,(1),学有所用，就业容易；,(2),照顾父母。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,行文应连贯，内容应完整；,3.,开头语与落款已为你写好，不计入总词数。,【模拟训练】,Dear Li,Hua,，,Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago,._,Yours,，,Li,Hai,【参考范文】,Dear Li,Hua,，,Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks,ago.,Ive,been thinking about the question you asked,me.In,my opinion,，,you should come back after you finish your studies,abroad.For,one reason,，,what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in,China.It,will be quite easy for you to find a good,job.In,fact,，,I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like,you.For,another reason,，,I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting,old.Therefore,，,I think its a good idea for you to,return.So,what are you waiting for?,Best wishes.,Yours,，,Li,Hai,