中考英语书面表达章末测试13.doc

中考英语书面体现 章末测试经典1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．亲爱同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有诸多感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右短文。
提醒：
1.个人基本状况简介
2.校园（校园洁净而漂亮，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,常常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
3.对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。
规定：
1. 文章包含以上提醒内容，合适发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介我初中生活。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我个人状况，接下来简介我们校园，老师和同学，最终对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面体现
根据如下提醒，写一篇简介我朋友张阳短文。
基本状况
张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生
爱好爱好
1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读多种类型书，由于……
2.喜欢观鸟。每年记录两次鸟儿数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面变化。
优秀事迹
上个月把零花钱捐给了但愿工程
未来梦想
1. 但愿成为连接家乡到上海路段高铁总工程师
2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做某些变化。如：…….（举1例）

规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有有关信息，并合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.
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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句构造综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．书面体现
伴随电子时代到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国老式文化传承面临着巨大挑战。有人认为学校应当开设老式文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设老式文化课见解。
Your opinion
necessary or unnecessary
Your reasons
the root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,
spread, develop
Your suggestion
…

Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Mike
【答案】Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.
First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.
All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!
Yours,
Mike
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设老式文化课见解。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了中国老式文化面对问题，接下来简介我认为开设老式文化课必要性原因，最终号召更多学校开设老式文化课。此处because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面体现
初中毕业在即, 回忆三年学习生活, 你一定有成功体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次演出......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。
提醒：（1）What was the event?
（2）How did you make it?
（3）What’s your feeling?
规定：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提醒内容, 可合适发挥。
（2）发言稿中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。
Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题形式给出了提醒，审题可知，文章应包括如下内容：首先论述你生活中遇到一件困难事；然后简介你是怎样克服了这个困难，最终获得成功；最终说一下你自已感受。写作时学生们应根据这几种内容提要，发挥自已想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用对英语体现出来。短文应以一般目前时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提醒内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据体现需要合适发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。另一方面要注意英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子整体构造出发，选择合适句型、短语、词汇进行体现。句式构造可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提高文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂构造使用。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有如下几种长处：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中规定所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。短文重要提成三段，每一段主题都很明确，论述详细、清晰。另一方面短文使用了对时态和人称，短文重要使用了一般目前时和一般过去时，动词形式变化精确，尤其注意了不规则动词过去式形式，语法规范，用词精确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章体现力。短文中使用了较丰富句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

5．书面体现
根据下列表格提醒，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
过去
目前
1旧房
1高楼
2河水肮脏
2河水清澈（clean and clear）．
3步行、骑自行车上班
3乘公交车、小汽车上班
4道路狭窄（narrow）．
4街道宽阔（wide），洁净整洁
5居住条件（living conditions）差
5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适．

6你感想…（写两到三句）

Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．

【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生到处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信重要性，分享一次使你愈加自信经历，并说说我们怎样愈加自信。
提醒词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提醒问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供所有信息。灵活运用多种句式，采用不一样体现方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力争精确，简洁。最终必须认真查验与否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等运用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同步语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错范文。

7．题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做，以及你感受。
提醒词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提醒问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提醒写一篇自已在初中生活中坚持做事；文中写明自已是怎么做并谈谈自已感受。
【详解】
1.本篇规定根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自已坚持做一件事，根据提醒，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般目前时。书写时要紧紧围绕主题，文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自已坚持做事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自已起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到目前比此前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自已影响；文章构造清晰，前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了诸多短语和重点句型。例如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句体现多样。

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8．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应当读什么样书，以及读书意义。
提醒词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提醒问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua

【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生倡议。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，写是阅读好处，时态采用是一般目前时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

9．中学生在成长过程中常常会碰到某些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提醒，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到烦恼以及你自已做法。
你烦恼

你做法

个头不高，相貌平常

不必在意，相信自已

父母不理解，朋友少

学会沟通，友善待人

学习压力大，课外活动少

……（自主发挥，至少两点）

规定：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有信息，并作合适发挥。
3. 不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等有关信息。
Hello everyone,
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.

That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.
My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，规定用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到烦恼以及你自已做法。规定从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有信息，并作合适发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般目前时态。
写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我烦恼及怎样处理他们；背面三段分别从外貌上烦恼、与父母交流上障碍、学习上压力几方面分别谈论自已烦恼及处理方式，生动详细，条理分明。文中不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得精确恰当；and连接并列句、并列谓语等等都使短