2025年中考英语书面表达单元测试题含答案4.doc

《中考英语书面体现》单元测试题(含答案) （word）

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班外教David对此很感爱好。请你根据如下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论状况及你自已本人计划及原因。
比例
计划
原因
50%
去国内外旅游
1.放松;2.欣赏美景
30%
多读某些书
1.增长知识；2.培养爱好
20%
参与社会实践
1.锻炼自已;2.认识朋友
你计划
? （至少一种）
？（请你补充）

注意：
（1）邮件应包含所有要点
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
注：社会实践 social practice activities
Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
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Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非谓语动词构造The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．书面体现
同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华，请根据如下内容提醒用英语向同学们汇报一下你计划。
内容提醒：
暑假计划
学习
博览群书；学习技能 （或自拟一点）
生活
健康饮食；坚持锻炼 （或自拟一点）
其他
热爱公益；亲近自然 （或自拟一点）

注意：
1. 体现中必须包括所给要点，可以合适发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 体现中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
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I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.
Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.
Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.
I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如I'd like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表次序词和综合句式运用，既使短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据如下信息内容提醒，写一篇有关校园安全英语小短文。
提醒：1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
规定： 1. 语句通顺，体现精确，内容连贯；
2．短文可以合适发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提醒，可知本文重要从三个方面进行论述，注意围绕要点组织材料，合适发挥。根据材料内容确定重要句子时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。

4．　　近年来雾霾天气在中国许多都市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：
1. 雾霾危害 2. 雾霾产生原因（2个） 3. 应对雾霾措施（3个）
提醒：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒
注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以合适增长细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
　　How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们根据提醒来简介有关雾霾状况，题目中给出了写作内容，我们应将这些内容用对英语体现出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意体现层次和条理。另一方面要注意使用对时态和人称，通过度析可知，这篇短文应使用一般目前时态，谓语动词用原形，尤其要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一种写作难点。最终要注意英语体现习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上使用是不一样，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇和句型来体现，语法规范。还应使用某些很好句型或者短语，增强文章体现力。

5．书面体现
根据下列表格提醒，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
过去
目前
1旧房
1高楼
2河水肮脏
2河水清澈（clean and clear）．
3步行、骑自行车上班
3乘公交车、小汽车上班
4道路狭窄（narrow）．
4街道宽阔（wide），洁净整洁
5居住条件（living conditions）差
5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适．

6你感想…（写两到三句）

Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．

【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现实状况进行分析并提出提议。
要点：

不重视课外阅读原因

1. 作业太多
2. 没有读书习惯
3. 时间花在电脑或网络上

课外阅读好处

1. 更多地理解世界
2. 学会怎样思考
3. 生活愈加丰富多彩

对学校或同学提议

……（至少一点）

注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中要点，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清晰、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【解析】
略

7．根据规定完毕大作文，词数：80-100词．
丰富校本课程可以让你生活更精彩．请根据下图示中所提供特色课程，按内容及规定，用英文完毕写作．
内容包括：
1．Which course（s）do you like？
2．Why do you like it/them？
3．What can you learn from it/them？
写作规定：
1．根据你爱好选择课程（数量不限）；
2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实校名及姓名．

    Of all the courses，I like __________
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【答案】例文
Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.
I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.
I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.
I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读。本题属于材料作文，重要讲述你喜欢学科、原因以及你从你选择学科中学到了什么。注意时态运用，灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。牢记不要遗漏要点。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀文章，很好地完毕了试题中所规定内容。条理清晰。前三段分别讲述他所喜欢学科（体育、剪纸和厨艺），并解释乐意以及收获，最终一段讲述这些学科对他生活意义。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放背面。
高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引导表语从句。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放背面等；然后紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间过渡，必要时可合适运用表达转折、因果、并列、比较等关系连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最终，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

8．书面体现
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”
----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”
----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克救赎》
“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”
----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。因此在学习和生活中，我们要满怀但愿、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自已观点。
要点提醒：
1.有自已目，并努力让它成为现实；
2.勤奋学习，使自已不停强大；
3.对面对困难，积极参与社会活动；
4.补充自已观点。
写作规定：
1.文中必须包含所有提醒要点，可合适发挥使行文连贯；
2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等有关信息。
Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
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【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to