作文训练1.ppt

,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,作文讲解,各类作文训练,一、议论文,一）,we learn that nowadays,_,总述社会现象或社会事实,_,which has aroused the great/common concern.What impresses us most is _,社会突出现象,_,_.There are many reasons accounting for _,现象或变化,_,_.,First of all,_,原因一,_.What is more,_,原因二,_.For example,_,举例说明原因二,_.In addition,_,原因三,_.Therefore,总结原因导致的结果,_.,As far as I am concerned,我的观点,.For one thing/on one hand,理由一,.For another/on the other hand,理由二,.In brief,段落总结句,.,二）,According to the chart/graph/table/picture,it is clear that,图表,/,画内容总概括,.The chart/graph/table/picture show,具体描述图表,/,图画内容一,，,while,具体描述图表,/,图画内容二,.Many reasons contribute to,现象概括。,To begin with,原因一,。,进一步阐述原因一,。,Moreover,原因二,。,In addition,原因三,。,As a result,段落总结句。,As to me,我的观点,/,态度,/,建议,。,First of all,理由一,。,Besides,理由二,。,To conclude,段落总结句,。,1.,Student Use of Computers.,1.,上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间,:1990,年（,2 hours,）、,1995,年,(4 hours),、,2000,年,(14 hours),，请描述其变化；,2.,请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；,3.,你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。,Student Use of Computers,From the chart,we learn that nowadays,student use of computers had grown sharply,which has aroused the greatest concern,.The chart shows from 1990 to 1995,the average hours that students spent on computers in every week were only doubled,while,in 2000,college students averagely spent 14 hours per week on computer,which is seven times as large as that of 1990.There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon.,To begin with,the low price of computer allows many students to have one in university.That is to say,the price of PC is becoming so cheap that many students can have their own computers.,Moreover,many net bars can provide students convenient access to computers.,In addition,internet provides people an amazing world to explore.,As a result,computers have an irresistible attraction to them.,As to me,I think there are still problems in student use of computers.,First of all,students dont have enough skills to command computers,which limits them to the full use of computers.,Besides,students who are short of self-disciplines may forget their main task of study.,To conclude,we still need to take effective measures to make progress in student use of computers.,1.,作文训练：,Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write an essay on the topic,Craze for Civil Service Examinations,.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:,现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员；,引起此现象的原因；,你的看法。,Some mistakes:,Crazy,craze,therefor,graduater,Competition,compete for one position/post,competitor,servant,nowdays,to be a civil service,They will never lost the job.,Graduates find work very hard and to be a servant is a good work.,Graduates are very hard to get a job.,We learn that,nowdays,more and more graduate become crazy for civil service examinations has aroused the common concern.,The treatment is very well.,The civil servant has very well material benefits.,well salary,What impress us most is that,People should choose the job which you like.,We should choose the job which you like.,For one thing,.On the other hand,.,For one hand,.For the other hand,.,For one thing,.For another hand,.,For one hand,.On the other hand,.,They usually need to work too tired.,Their wage is large/big.,One Example:,From the daily news,we learn that nowadays there are more and more graduates participating in civil service examination,which has arouse the great concern.What impresses us most is that the amount of competitors has increased to such a crazy extent that about 4000 persons competed with one position in the last few years.There are many reasons accounting for the phenomenon.,First of all,as you know,graduation means unemployment.,Whats more,because of lack of working experience,the jobs they could find give them less income than ordinary workers.,In addition,for graduates,they can improve their present condition by means of becoming government employees.,As far as Im concerned,its clear that this kind of phenomenon is an extremely terrible cycle.,On one hand,the demand of positions in government system is less than the supply of graduates participating in civil service examination.,One the other hand,graduates should seek other methods to solve the problems about employment,like to be a post-graduate to,improve,themselves,.,In brief,I may reasonably conclude that under-graduates should begin to consider their future before graduation.,2.The Popularity of Micro-blogging,1,近年来“微博”越来越流行，许多人利用“微博”来表达心声、交流想法。,2,微博流行的原因。,3,我的看法。,Some useful expressions:,is very convenient for people to express,release their inner stress,Reveal their heartfelt emotions on the micro-blogging,offer in-time comfort,Net citizen=,netizen,Some mistakes:,It is convenient for,netizens,to,expres,.,we can revealing our feelings.,Reveal/let out ones privacy/private information,net citizen,to open the micro-blogging,One example by one classmate:,From the newspaper,we learn that nowadays micro-blogging becomes more and more popular,which has aroused the great concern.What impresses us most is that a large amount of people make full use of micro-blogging to express their own mind and to communicate with each other.There are many reasons accounting for the phenomenon.,First of all,It,is greatly convenient for people to express their inner emotions on the micro-blogging.,What is more,people can also release their inner stress by means of micro-blogging.,For example,when we are faced with great pressure for the sake of our future life,we can write down our feelings and,consult for others,.,In addition,we have more convenient tools to write blogs in the fast,developing,society such as,cellphones,computers and so on.,Therefore,more and more people pay attention to the micro-blogging.,As far as I am concerned,every coin has two sides,although micro-blogging brings us lots of,convenience,in our life,it may have a bad influence on us,for example,it can,spread bad thoughts,.,So I may,resonably,conclude that,we should take micro-blogging seriously.,(To conclude,we should have/take a positive attitude toward the micro-blogging and make use of it properly.),二对比选择型,基本方法为：,阐述一种观点或态度并表明这种观点或态度正确的理由；,阐述第二种（相对或相反的）观点或态度并说明这种观点或态度正确的理由；,表明个人支持或反对以上观点或态度，并说明原因。,For example:,The Future of Our World,一些人对人类社会的未来持乐观态度，因为,另一些人则持悲观态度（如：污染、战争、自然灾害等对人类的威胁,）,我的看法,一）,Different people have different views on,看法,/,问题,。,Some people consider,一种看法,/,观点,.,However,others think that,另一种看法,/,观点,.,Some people may say,观点一的理由,.,They,hold this opinion because,深入阐述观点一的理由,.,However,others believe,观点二的理由,.,They argue that,深入阐述观点二的理由,.,Personally,I am in favorof the,我的观点或看法,.,Firstly,个人看法的依据一,.,Secondly,个人看法的依据二,.,Most important of all,个人看法的依据三,.,Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration,I may reasonably conclude that,重申观点,。,二）,There is no complete agreement among people as to,问题,/,事物,.,Some people prefer,一种看法,/,观点,.,Others tend to,另一种看法,/,观点,.,As to me,I agree with/to the first/second one,.,Of course,我不赞同的观点的合理性,.,Forexample,支持其合理性的例子,.,But,我不赞同的观点的不足,.,The following reasons can account formy preference for,我赞同的观点,。,The main reason is,支持观点的理由一,.,A good example to illustrate is,支持理由一的例子,.For another,支持观点的理由二,.,In the long run,重申观点,。,One example:,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?,1.,很多认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是,.,2.,也有人持不同意见，,.,3.,我的看法和打算,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?,Different people have different views on,the necessity of a test of spoken English.,Some people consider that,it is necessary for college students to have such a test.,However,others think that,it is useless to emphasize the importance of spoken English.,Some people may say that,a test of spoken English is very important.,They hold this opinion because,they maintain that such a test can stimulate college students to have conversation practice.,However,others believe that,taking such a test is a waste of time.They argue that it is reading,translating and writing skills that really matter.,Personally,I am in favor of the former opinion.,Firstly,spoken English is becoming more and more important in global communication.,Secondly,such a test can strengthen students awareness of the importance of spoken English.,Most important of all,if we cant speak fluently,we will not achieve the ultimate purpose of learning English:to communicate with foreigners.,Taking the above mentioned factors into consideration,we may reasonably conclude that,it is necessary for college students to take a test of spoken English.,1.The Future of Our World,一些人对人类社会的未来持乐观态度，因为,另一些人则持悲观态度（如：污染、战争、自然灾害等对人类的威胁,）,我的看法,Some useful expressions:,Optimistic,pessimistic,Fukushima of Japan,leaking of nuclear power,nuclear station,Some natural disasters:,2.On the Spring Festival Gala,1.,许多人喜欢观看中央台的春节晚会；,2.,但有些人更喜欢地方台的春晚和各个网络春晚；,3.,我的看法。,Some useful expressions:,the Spring Festival Gala,involve all kinds of programs,Cross talks and other comic performances,adds up more fun and excitement,lack of originality,its dominant status,have a strong feeling for,catering to the change of the audiences taste,