雅思写作A类图表作文讲义Academic-Task.ppt

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Academic Writing Task 1,宁柏宇,北京新东方学校,国外考试部英联邦项目,2,IELTS Writing,Saturday/Thursday Morning,3rd paper Test,3,Question Booklet,Task 1,Report(,A,cademic),/,Letter(General),150w,20m,Task 2,Essay,250w,40m,4,Writing Booklet,Writing Booklet,ningboyu_nosyahoo,Password:ieltswriting,Pencil and Eraser,5,Scoring,Examiner,Task 1 and 2:0-9,Writing Band,T1 *,1/3,+T2*,2/3,6,Overall Band,6,Requirement,Academic Overall Score,Language School,Undergraduate,6,Graduate,Famous Universities,Popular Majors,7,8,testing whether that nation,or any nation so conceived and so dedicated.,We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live.,for the people.,Between paragraphs,passive voice&compound sentence,Bigger,bigger and bigger,ascend:decline,Undergraduate 6,Structure Variety,CET-4600or CET-6 425,paragraph 2,Here comes a new challenger.,rocket:collapse,10-12 w/line,billions of,10 million/millions,No reference,Comment Script Corresponding,9,Registration,Objective,An acceptable score within the shortest time,The earlier,the more choices!,No deadline,no completion!,10,Registration,Self-Analysis,NCEE,100,NCEE,130or,CET-4,425,CET-4,600or,CET-6,425,CET-6,600or,NETEM,70,4hrs/day,1 point/per 2 months,11,Considerate IELTS,Test as often as possible,Reschedule(+500 RMB),Refund(-750 RMB),Teaching Material,雅思写作胜经,、群言出版社,12,13,Task 1-Question Grouping,Figure(75%Q1),Multiple/Single,Non-Figure(25%Q1),Flow chart/Map,14,Writing Procedure,Read+Plan(3 mins),Write(16 mins),Check(1 mins),15,Read,Words:,paragraph 2,Pictures:,Words(title,legend,axis),Number(unit,digit),Make notes on the question booklet!,Numbers,10,million,/,millions,thousands of,millions of,billions of,17,Scoring Criterion,TA:Content,CC:Structure,LR:Words,GRA:Sentences,18,Marking Criterion,UNDERLENGTH,NO OF WORDS,PENALTY,OFF-TOPIC,MEMORISED,ILLEGIBLE,19,Plan-Content,Summarize,Features,not list,data,a1,a2,a3,an,Trend,Max/Min,Slope,A,B,C,Max/Min,20,Paragraph 3,Comparisons,within the chart or between the charts,Select,Main Features,(recreates the picture in the examiners mind),Supporting,Data,Report,facts,not,opinions,21,Plan-Structure,Paragraph,or not?,reader friendly,How to Paragraph?,A new idea,a new paragraph,Introduction /Conclusion(if needed),22,Thinking Style,23,Paragraphs,Multiple Charts,Introduction,Chart 1,Chart 2,Comparison,Single Chart,Introduction,Feature 1,Feature 2,Conclusion(if needed),24,Plan-Structure,Linking Devices(LD),Between paragraphs,Between features,Within sentences,25,Language Requirement,Word,Correct spelling,enviroment,/environment,Word Level,get,/achieve,a band 8,Word Variety(Avoid repetition),a,good,/well-paid/satisfactory/decent,job,26,Sentence,Grammatical Accuracy,There,is,a boy,asks,you out.,Sentence Length,Band 9:20+,Band 7:15,Structure Variety,A new challenger comes here.,Here comes a new challenger.,27,Word&Time,Multiple /Single Charts,Intro./Intro.(,30w,1s,),Chart 1 /Feature 1(,50w,4s,),Chart 2 /Feature 2(,50w,4s,),Comparison/Conclusion(,30w,1s,),Paragraph 2,Copied phrases will not be counted,Paraphrase the rubric,Introduction,chart=graph=diagram,line,curve,bar,column,pie,table=figures=statistics,Save,below,Word(B-78),give information about,reveal,indicate,demonstrate,Simple Present Tense,Word,the UK,Britain,most popular,favorite/fashionable/stylish,country,nation,Word,UK residents to visit,UK travelers/visitors/tourists,Specific,in 1999,Passive Voice,The chart,shows,A.(do),A,is shown,by the chart.(be done),The line chart,reveals,visits to and from the UK.,Visits to and from the UK,are revealed,in the line chart.,Structure Variety,The line chart reveals ,and,the bar graph indicates,The line chart reveals,and,are indicated,in the bar graph.,Compound Sentence,Introduction,The line chart,reveals,visits to and from Britain,and,UK travelers top 5 favorite nations in 1999,are indicated,in the bar graph.,Linking Devices,Between paragraphs(B-78),According to the,chart,line chart,upper/lower chart,chart 1,chart of visits to and from the UK,Between Features(B-51),also/besides/on the other hand,but/however/conversely,while/in particular,Basic Structure 1,The visits,increased,greatly,(1)(2)(3),from about 12 to 57 million,(4),from 1979 to 1999,.,(5),(1)Subjects,Legend,visits abroad by UK residents,Paragraph 2,travel from the UK,Synonyms,UK visitors/travelers/tourists,(1)Subjects,it/they,The visits increased from 1979 to 1999.,In particular,they,increased most quickly from 1985 to 1988.,(2)Verbs,increase:decrease/rise:fall,go up:come down,climb:slide,ascend:decline,rocket:collapse,(2)Verbs,Tense,increased,increase,is,expected/predicted,to increase,(3)Adverbs,sharply/rapidly/swiftly,slowly/gradually/tardily,greatly/vastly/considerably,slightly/marginally/minutely,(3)Adverbs&(4)Numbers,about/around/roughly/more or less,from about 12 to 53 million,(5)Time,from,1979,to,1999,between,1979,and,1999,during,the,20 years/two decades,starting from,1979,Chart 1(Band 6.5),According to the line chart,visits abroad by UK residents increased from about 12 to 57 million from 1979 to 1999.,While,overseas travelers to Britain went up from about 10 to 27 million.,It is obvious that,UK tourists were more and climbed faster than overseas ones during the period.,Basic Structure 2,There was a,sharp,increase,in,the visits,(3)(2)(1),from about 12 to 53 million,(4),from 1979 to 1999,.,(5),Basic Structure 3,A,sharp,increase,was,seen,in,(3)(2)(6),the visits,from about 12 to 53 million,(1)(4),from 1979 to 1999,.,(5),48,A sharp increase(2)&(1),(6),a,sharp/slow/great/slight,increase,an,upward/rising/increasing,tendency,a,downward/falling/decreasing,trend,show/prove/witness,(2)Verb,keep/remain,unchanged/constant/stable,fluctuate,upward/downward,double/triple/quadruple,Chart 1,According to the line chart,both UK tourists abroad and overseas ones to the UK went up from 1979 to 1999 and the former climbed more markedly than the latter.In 1979,UK visitors were only around 2 million more than their overseas,counterparts,being approximately 12 and 10 million respectively,.,However,two decades later,they almost doubled the foreign travelers to Britain,(roughly 53 and 27 million separately),.,Chart 2(Band 6.5),The bar graph demonstrates that,the most UK visitors went to France and Spain,which were 11.0 and 9.5 million.,Also,many British travelers were attracted by the USA(4.0 million),Greece(3.5 million)and Turkey(2.0 million).,Chart 2,The bar graph demonstrates that,France and Spain were the favorite countries for UK tourists in 1999,which attracted around,million UK visitors,respectively.Remotely following were,the USA,Greece and Turkey with 4.0,3.5 and 2.0 million travelers,separately,.,Comparison(band 6.5),What is also worth mentioning is that,almost 40%UK tourists selected France and Spain in 1999,if the two diagrams are considered as a whole,.,Comparison,What is also worth mentioning is that,France and Spain alone accounted for almost 40 percent of UK tourists abroad in 1999,if the two diagrams are considered as a whole,.,Professional English,economist,ftchinese,www n,thestreet,thestreet TV,Check,Sample Answer(I4-168),Script,Comment Script Corresponding,Comment,TA,Under length,&dollar,No comparison,CC,No reference,LR&GRA,Narrow sentence type,Basic errors,I4-54,demand,used/need/requirement/consumption,typical,average/representative,use,consume,home,household/family,passive voice&compound sentence,Introduction,The curve chart,reveals,electricity used in England during average days in winter and summer,and,how electricity is consumed in a typical English household,is indicated,in the pie graph.,Read Chart 1,Unit,hrs/yrs,oclock,:,Number,38,000,units,Read Chart 2,Everyday words,kettle,microwave oven,range hood,Plan,Winter summer,Numbers:Max&Min/Average,Winter,Summer:,Numbers:Max&Min,Words,peak/summit/highest point,nadir/touch the bottom/lowest point,unchanged/constant/stable/stationary phase,Chart 1(Band 6.5),According to the curve chart,daily electricity need is higher in winter(38,000 units on average)than in summer(18,000 units on average).In winter,electricity consumption,peaks,at 2:00 am and 10:00 pm while it,touches the bottom,at 0:00 am and 8:00 am.,On the other hand,in summer,it,summits,at 2:00 pm and 11:00 pm,but has a,nadir,at 9:00 am and a,lower stationary phase,from 4:00 pm to 9:00 pm.,Chart 1,According to the curve chart,daily electricity need is higher in winter(38,000 units on average)than in summer(18,000 units on average),although both of them are uneven during the day.In winter,electricity consumption peaks at 2:00 am and 10:00 pm while it touches the bottom at 0:00 am and 8:00 am.,In contrast,the summer summits come later than winter ones at 2:00 pm and 11:00 pm.A nadir is seen nearly 9:00 am and a lower stationary phase is witnessed from 4:00pm to 9:00pm.,occupy,be shared by,account for,be responsible for,be in charge of,be in the charge of,Percentage,a small percentage of (20%),a quarter of,the minority of (40%),half of,the majority of (60%),three quarters of,most of (80%),one-fifth/one-third,Language School,Winter summer,y%of A is shared by/is in the charge of 2.,Chart 2(Band 6.,Multiple Charts,Linking Device-Time,an upward/rising/increasing tendency,Multiple /Single Charts,A,with/at,Lighting,TV,radio and vacuum cleaners,food mixers,electric tools are responsible for the rest,with 15%each.,reader friendly,A new supermarket(S)is planned for the town.,Remotely following were the USA,Greece and Turkey with 4.,Under length,CET-6 600or NETEM 70,Plan-Structure,Structures,1,occupies/accounts for,the majority of A(x%).,y%of A,is shared by/is in the charge of,2.,3 and 4,are,responsible for/in charge of,the rest,with z%and w%respectively.,Chart 2(Band 6.5),The pie graph demonstrates that,heating rooms and water,occupies,the majority of electricity consumption(52.5%).,Then,17.5%of the electricity demand,is shared by,ovens,kettles and washing machines.Lighting,TV,radio and vacuum cleaners,food mixers,electric tools,are responsible for,the rest,with 15%each.,Chart 2,The pie graph demonstrates that,the majority of electricity consumption(52.5%)is shared by heating rooms and water.,Then,ovens,kettles and washing machines occupy 17.5%of the electricity demand.,The rest is,in the charge of lighting,TV,radio and vacuum cleaners,food mixers,electric tools,with 15%each.,Comparison(Band 6.5),What is also worth mentioning is that,heating rooms and water is the reason for the higher electricity demand in winter than in summer,if the two diagrams are considered as a whole,.,Comparison,What is also worth mentioning is that,electricity for heating rooms and water is probably the major cause for the higher electricity demand in winter than in summer,if the two diagrams are considered as a whole,.,I4 164,TA,Comparison within/between the charts,Confusing time expressions,CC,Poor paragraphing,LR&GRA,Spelling errors(5),I4-31,proportion,percentage/share/figures,category,type/kind/group,family,household,Plan,aged vs not aged,single vs double,with vs without children,I4 162,give a breakdown of,How to include numbers?,A(11%),A,which is,A,with/at,A,comprising/consisting of,Model Answer,It is noticeable that (,word filler,),It is obvious that,It is easy to see that,Overall,the table suggests that,2003,年,9,月,20,日,The diagram below shows the method of obtaining water outdoors.,Object,Content,Understand the important stages,Find a place to start,Structure,Introduction,Preparation,Procedure(Time/Sequence),Conclusion(if needed),Linking Device-Time,To begin with,Next,Then,Later,Finally,At the same time/Meanwhile,Sequence,the first stage involves,in the next stage,in the following stage,in the last stage,Purpose,in order that,so that,in order to/in order not to,so as to/so as not to,Language,Opening Sentences,Varying vocabulary,Present simple/Passive Voice,Opening Sentences,The picture,illustrates,The whole procedure can be divided into stages.,Varying Vocabulary,obtain,accumulate,collect,gather,vapor,The water turns into gas,rises and turns back into liquid when it accumulates on the sheet of plastic.,2006,年,1,月,14,日,The diagram below shows the process of glass recycling.,Flow Chart,When,the,cleaning,is done,the bottles are,transported,to a glass factory,where,they are,broke into,glass pieces,which,are then,poured,into a furnace.,2003,年,9,月,20,日,The map below is of the town of Garlsdon.A new supermarket(S)is planned for the town.The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.,Content,Transportation,Parking,90,Site Selection,Introduction,S1(Varying Vocabulary),S2,Conclusion,91,Development(080329 Bridgetown),Introduction,Map 1,Map 2,Relationship between development,92,93,Writing Rules,No Title,Bigger,bigger and bigger,10-12 w/line,94,Four score and seven years ago,our fathers brought forth upon this continent a new nation:conceived in liberty,and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.,Now we are engaged in a great civil war.testing whether that nation,or any nation so conceived and so dedicated.can long endure.We are met on a great battlefield of that war.,We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live.It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.,But,in a larger sense,we cannot dedicate.we cannot consecrate.we cannot hallow this ground.The brave men,living and dead,who struggled here have consecrated it,far above our poor power to add or detract.The world will little note,nor long remember,what we say here,but it can never forget what they did here.,It is for us the living,rather,to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced.It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us.that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion.that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain.that this nation,under God,shall have a new birth of freedom.and that government of the people.by the people.for the people.shall not perish from the earth.,95,Four score and seven years ago,our fathers brought forth upon this continent a new nation:conceived in liberty,and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.,Now we are engaged in a great civil war.testing whether that nation,or any nation so conceived and so dedicated.can long endure.We are met on a great battlefield of that war.,We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live.It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.,But,in a larger sense,we cannot dedicate.we cannot consecrate.we cannot hallow this ground.The brave men,living and dead,who struggled here have conse