英语中高考写作.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,中考英语写作技巧指导,Lets go for it!,英语记叙文的写作的方式,Beginning,Body,Ending,Concluding sentence,结论句,Supporting sentence,支持句,（例子、实事、数据或引文）,topic sentence,主题句,warming-up,记叙文写作方法：,采用“,总分总,”的写作方式 即先概括总述，再分述,最后再总述。,总述,写作注意“四定”,1.,定内容,不折不扣。,2.,定时态，时态前后呼应。记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用般将来时。,3.,定人称，用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。,4.,定句型、定词语；应依据内容。应该先定句型后定词语。,写作注意的几个问题,：,尽量使用简单句，如果复合句用不好就不要用，文章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记“避繁就简”原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。,把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。,注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：,and,so,or,but,become,Whats more;What worse,not onlybut also,neithernor,等等。,再有学生语文水平的滑坡，使得英语老师不得不带领学生完成写作内容的挖掘。,写作注意的几个问题,：,选词：,普通的叙述文或短文，应该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众化词语，避免使用矫饰、复杂、故弄玄虚的词，并尽可能挑选积极的动词。,写作注意的几个问题,：,措辞：,能写出树的具体名称,an apple tree,就不要使用,tree;,能说清具体数字时，就不要使用,some;,知道是某种专门的活动，就不要使用,do,去描述，词意越具体，越能给读者鲜明的印象。,写作注意的几个问题,：,你如何写开头,1.,开头常用词语：,as far as we know,据我们所知,as everybody knows,众所周知,at present,目前,first of all,首先,To tell the truth,老实说,1.,结尾常用词语：,after all,毕竟,at last,最后,in a word,总而言之,finally,最后,we hope that,我们希望,In short,简言之,clearly,显然,你如何写结尾,如何添加过度句、连接词,补充说明,for example,besides,，,In addition(,此外），,Whats worse!Whats more!Worst of all.,转折,however,yet,but,原因,thanks to,because of,结果,as result of,so,，,sothat,范文,2,：,I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study.,First,，,some of us arent interested in English.They think studying English is such a boring thing to do.,And then,Its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.,So,lots of us,作文如何添加过度句、连接词,作文如何添加过度句、连接词,dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.,And,we are always afraid to join in the group discussion.,Whats more,there are so many new words we hadnt meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.,Sometimes,we cant understand the main idea,let alone,作文如何添加过度句、连接词,answer the questions about them.,But,the most difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentences.Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Please give us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Write to me soon.Yours Fang,Hua,信息点与承接词的关系,信息点是珠子，承接词是线，用线把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链。单独看某一方就成为一条破绳子，一堆烂珠子。,如何写好好人好事的结尾,be proud of,speak highly of,follow ones example,come true,你如何写结尾,Which is better?,1,我们很累。,A We were very tired.,B We were really exhausted.,2,他们在海滩上听音乐。,A They listened to the music on the beach.,B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,Which is better?,3,我希望你能帮助我。,A I hope you can help me.,B Im looking forward to your help.,4,我们应该努力取得好成绩。,A We should work hard to get good grades.,B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.,Which is better?,5,我不吃垃圾食品。,A I dont eat junk food.,B I stay away from junk food.,6,他们很早就到了。,A They arrived early.,B They arrived as early as they could.,Which is better?,8,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。,A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.,B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.,7,我们在海里游泳，很开心。,A We swam in the sea.We were happy.,B We had fun swimming in the sea.,Writing skills,方法一,:,善用高级词汇,Which is better?,2,雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。,A It rained heavily.So he didnt catch the school bus.,B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.,missed,because of,1,我喜欢轻音乐，它可以使我放松。,A I like quiet music.It can make me relaxed.,B I prefer gentle music that can make me relaxed.,prefer,that,Which is better?,3,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young.She cant carry the heavy box.,B She is too young to carry the heavy box.,4,我们必须采取措施来拯救地球，这样才能过上更好的生活。,A We must do something to help save the earth.Then we will have a better life.,B The more we do to help save our planet,the better life we will have.,too,to,The more,the better,Which is better?,5,我认为学英语很有趣。,A I think learning English is interesting.,B I find it really fun to learn English.,6,我们应该在英语课上记笔记。,A We should take notes in English classes.,B Taking notes in English classes is necessary.,find it to,Taking,necessary,Which is better?,7,小组合作学习可以帮助你学得更好。,A Working in groups can help you learn better.,B Work in groups,and you will learn better.,8,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment.,B Its our duty to protect the environment.,Work and,方法二,:,活用多种句型,Writing skills,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审,(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,牛刀小试,如何度假,调查报告,倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列,(list),根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。,A lot of people travel.,Some people stay at home.,Some other people visit friends or parents.,A few people work.,Enjoy your vacation.,列,(list),How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,（,the beginning,）,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,（,the ending,）,加,(add),加首尾,，使结构完整。,可以采取,总分总,结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,According to it,a lot of people travel.,And,some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.,Also,some,other people visit friends or parents.,However,a few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,连,(connect),方法三,:,妙用关联词,Writing skills,1.,表示并列或递进,:and,as well as,bothand,whats more,not onlybut also,neithernor,2.,表示选择,:or,eitheror,3.,表示转折,:,but,however,althoughthough,after,all,anyway,4.,表示因果,:because,so,therefore,since,for,as,a result,5.,表示条件,:if,unless,6.,表示对比,:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand,7.,表示解释,:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other,words,to,tell the truth,8.,表示顺序,:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly,),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end,9.,表示强调,:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact,10.,表示结论,:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short,关联词,(connection words),Lets try,_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.,He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.,We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking.,_,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.,Though,Although,instead,like,First,Next,Finally,At last,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,According to it,a lot of people travel.,And,some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.,Also,some,other people visit friends or parents.,However,a few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,连,(connect),美,(beautify),We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.,According to it,most people,choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays,.,Then,some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest,.,And,to visit friends or parents,also,makes them relaxed,.,However,a few people,have to,work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,美,(beautify),According to it,most people,choose to travel to,get away from the busy world during the holidays,.,Then,some people like to stay at home,watching TV,or surfing the Internet to have a good rest,.,However,a few people,have to,work.,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes,Jack a dull boy.”,Come and enjoy your vacation.People,who relax well work well.,美,(beautify),And,to,visit friends or parents,also,makes them relaxed,.,Proverb,（谚语）,方法四,:,妙用引文和例子,Writing skills,writing steps,审,列,加,连,美,首,尾,necessary,If possible,加谚语,(Proverb),锻炼对学生有好处,It is good for us students to take exercise,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”,It is good for us students to take exercise.,加谚语,(Proverb),集中注意力于学习,We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”,We should concentrate on our studies.,.,加谚语,(Proverb),加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”,So,joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,Enjoy some proverbs,1.Practice makes perfect.,2.Think twice before you do.,4.Do as the Romans do.,7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.,8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.,9.All roads lead to Rome.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入乡随俗。,早起的鸟儿有虫吃。,失败是成功之母。,覆水难收。,5.The early bird catches the worm.,一天一个苹果，医生远离我。,条条大路通罗马。,3.Where there is a will,there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。,I often help my parents do housework,such as,washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.,结尾提出倡议或号召,As students,we should start from ourselves.,Dont wait.Join us now!,Start to join us now!,Dont put it off!Become a volunteer today!,How amazing!I cant wait!,Save animals!Save Ourselves!Save our planet!,Dont hesitate(,犹豫,).It will be great fun!,高分作文技巧,技巧,1.,善用高级词汇,2.,活用多种句型,3.,巧用关联词,4.,妙用引文和例子,Dear,Mr,Know,，,I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell you,some problems we meet in English study.,First,，,some of us arent interested in English.We think,studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so,difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots,of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.,And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.,Whats more,there are so many new words we havent,meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.,Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone,(,更不用说,),answer the questions about them.But the most,difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and,sentences.,Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Please,give us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Write to,me soon.,Lets go for it!,Mary,(the beginning),(the ending),the body,First,，,some of us arent interested in English.,We think studying English is such a boring thing.,And then,its so difficult for us to remember all,the words in the texts.,So,lots of us dont have,enough confidence to keep up English study.,And,we are always afraid to join the group discussion.,Whats more,there are so many new words we,havent met before in the passage.I dont know,what to do.,Sometimes,we cant understand the,main idea,let alone,(,更不用说,),answer the questions,about them.,But,the most difficult thing is to write.,We often use wrong words and sentences.,Lets go for it!,1,2,3,4,6,5,Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.,Yours,_,I think reading English every day and listening,to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.,You know,“Practice makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you,to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your,listening skill.,_,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have,said is helpful for you.,Your turn to go for it!,Your turn to go for it!,Good words:,Good sentences:,Connection words:,Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.,Yours,_,I think reading English every day and listening,to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.,You know,“Practice makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you,to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your,listening skill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope,what I have said is helpful for you.,To begin with,Of course,In fact,Then,Your turn to go for it!,1,2,3,The Life as a Grade 9 Student,How time flies!Now Im in Grade Nine.Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be.Now Im as busy as a bee.Theres a lot of homework and exams.The only feeling I have is:The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging!,Theres an old saying:He who fails to plan plans to fail.I dont want to fail,so I create a plan for the following days.,Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it,I will change my attitude towards,maths,and physics which I am poor at now.,Ill spend the rest time efficiently.As theres no elevator to success,Ill try my best to,do everything step by step!I believe that I can do it!,Its your turn!,随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀,所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。,请根据上述内容写一篇不少于,80,词的英语短文。,要求：,1.,语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；,2.,提示的内容要全部用上。,Its your turn!,Lets Help Our Friends,With the increasing population,human needs more places to live in and more food to eat.As a result,we change the forests into farmland.More and more new cities and roads are built on animals habitat.A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur.There used to be lots of animals,but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior.For example,there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now.Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear?Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future?Dont you think animals are our lovely friends?I know your answer is“No”.So its our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.,Dont put it off,！,Lets try our best to help our friends today!,Your turn to go for it!,Good words:,Good sentences:,Connection words:,写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,首,尾,巧用关联词,善用高级词汇,活用多种句型,necessary,If possible,妙用引文和例子,Summary,Lets enjoy writing!,仔细检查，认真抄写,抓住主题，描写细节,开门见山,发表己见，画龙点睛,收集信息，列出提纲,结尾有力,The writing strategies on composition,Practice makes perfect,外教,Joyce,刚到你们学校不久，感觉紧张。请你根据上述情况以“,How can she be healthy,”,为题，写一篇怎样保持健康为主题的文章。,要求：,1.,字数不少于,80,字。,2.,文中不得出现你的真实姓名以及你所在的学校、班级等有关情况。,3.,注意紧扣主题、意思连贯、语义通顺、书写规范。,参考词汇：,have,healthy food,do more exercise,enough sleep,，,keep healthy,How to write opinions?,She can,She had better,She is supposed to ,is helpful,It s adj.for sb.to,She should,Learn to use the,key words,学会使用,提示词,！,Could you give her some advice?,She should,She can,She had better,She is supposed to ,is helpful,It s,adj,for sb.to,Opinions,She should listen to music.,listen to music,read books,have enough sleep,relax herself,.,Learn to use the key words,Writing strategies,(,写作策略,),要紧扣中考的作文评分标准！,第五档（,13,分）包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表述顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚,第四档（分）基本包含要点。遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。,第三档（分）包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。,第二档（分）语言错误较多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。,第一档（分）白卷或文不对题；只抄写了提示词。,How can we be healthy,These day,Health is important.I am tell you some ways to be health.,We should have healthy food,.For example,vegetables and fruits.We d better to have,enogh,sleep.,As you know,health is pretty important in our life.,Here are some of my advice about how to keep healthy.,First,a balanced diet is helpful.Please take some healthy food like vegetables and fruits,do drink milk everyday.Second,Its a good way for you to do more