2025年中考英语书面表达点+例题全面解析.doc

-中考英语书面体现点+例题_全面解析

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1． 如今，诸多都市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环境保护、便捷而备受青睐，但同步也引起了某些问题。请你根据提醒以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，体现自已见解和提议。
要点提醒：
Advantages
Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）
Take exercise…
Problems
Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen…
Advice
Civilized（文明）, follow the rules, take good care of…

注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可合适发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（提议）
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富，体现了所有要点，语言体现精确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。
【点睛】
本文规定以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格内容提醒，写一篇短文，体现自已对共享单车见解和提议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中三个要点：首先，论述共享单车长处；另一方面，列举共享单车带来问题；最终，根据问题给出个人提议。

2．近年来，各大都市雾霾（haze）状况越来越严重，整个国家空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气污染。
要点提醒：
（1）我国空气污染现象。（至少写2点）
（2） 空气污染产生原因。（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染措施。（至少写2点）
规定：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（2） 文中不能出现自已姓名和所在学校名称。
Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中有关信息简介一下整个国家空气污染状况。所提供材料中列举了近年来，各大都市雾霾（haze）状况越来越严重，重要从空气污染现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去简介。时态为一般目前时。注意作文中必须包含材料上所有信息，并合适发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用我们熟悉句子或短语。语法要对，体现要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系，体现具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最佳步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表达最佳，背面跟动词原形，take a bus表达乘公共汽车。
【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用是动词ing形式。

3．书面体现
我英语学习
初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多经验与措施，请你向你表弟简介你做法，根据下面表格中内容，按规定用英语写一篇短文，
多听
听收音机，听音乐等，可以放松......
多说
运用英语，增强能力与信心......
多读书
开阔视野，理解英语文化......
语法规则
更好地理解与运用......
写作
写写平常生活......
其他
......

规定：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法对，书写规范；
2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作合适发挥
3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数80－100。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。而感慨句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句构造Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4．每一次变化都伴伴随我们成长，作为初中生你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显变化。
要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?
2. 变化是怎样发生?
3. 变化后有什么感受?
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.
Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介我比起小时候有了哪些变化。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我最大个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来简介我小时候不喜欢读书，最终指出目前书籍是我朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

5．书面体现
每年4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日意义在于推进更多人去阅读。假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动主题，向全校同学发出倡议。
读书意义
1. 获取知识，开阔视野
2. 使人愉悦，益于学习
3. ……（自由发挥）
现实状况
1. 作业多，无良好读书习惯
2. 不懂得读什么书，不会选择
倡议
……（至少两点）

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Dear classmates,
Reading is very important in our daily life.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s start reading now!
【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life．
First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful．
However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet．
In my opinion，our school can have a"Reading Week"once a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future．
Let's start reading now!
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。同步First of all，/ Second，/ Third等时间副词和However/ Moreover / As a result等构造副词运用，既使文章思绪清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．书面体现
伴随电子时代到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国老式文化传承面临着巨大挑战。有人认为学校应当开设老式文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设老式文化课见解。
Your opinion
necessary or unnecessary
Your reasons
the root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,
spread, develop
Your suggestion
…

Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Mike
【答案】Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.
First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.
All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!
Yours,
Mike
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设老式文化课见解。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了中国老式文化面对问题，接下来简介我认为开设老式文化课必要性原因，最终号召更多学校开设老式文化课。此处because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

7．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据如下信息内容提醒，写一篇有关校园安全英语小短文。
提醒：1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
规定： 1. 语句通顺，体现精确，内容连贯；
2．短文可以合适发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提醒，可知本文重要从三个方面进行论述，注意围绕要点组织材料，合适发挥。根据材料内容确定重要句子时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。

8．（B）根据规定完毕大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生共同爱好.请根据下面提醒写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 短文,应当包含如下要点:
1,学生参与体育运动爱好不一样,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自已.
3.男孩参与各项体育运动,但愿运动能使自已更强健.
4.女孩也喜欢运动，但愿运动使自已减肥和保持健康,苗条.
5.你对运动观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自已名字和学校名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.
8.参照词语:keep slim （保持苗条）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作重要是谈论自已对运动观点和见解，应当用一般目前时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动不一样见解及原因。2.详细分析（多数学生观点、男生观点、女生观点）。3.提出自已对运动观点。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好地完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

9． 书面体现
请将短文写在答题卡对应位置上。
一直以来，同学们对作业持有不一样观点。在你班主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”讨论，请你根据提醒和规定，并结合自已实际经验，刊登你观点。
Yes
No

Help us understand what we have learned；
Practice makes prefect；...

Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...

Your opinion：

规定：
1．80词以上。
2．文中不得出现真实人名、校名。
【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can impr