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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,议论文写作练习,阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇,150,词左右的英语短文。,You must have heard stress contributes to 80%of major illness and is responsible for 75%to 90%of doctors visits.But thats not stress;its distress.“Stress is the only anti-aging agent we know of the exact opposite of what we think,”says psychologist James E.,Loehr,.,What really brings happiness is meeting obstacles and overcoming them.The damage occurs when stress levels never go down.A recent study showed it took nine days longer for the constantly stressed family caregivers of chronically(,慢性地,)ill patients to heal from wounds than it took other people the same age.Stress is essential.Life without it would be like having a brand-new cherry-red Porsche and driving it only in the driveway.,写作内容,1),以约,30,个词概括短文的要点；,2),然后以约,120,个词就“你如何看待压力”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：,a),你是如何看待压力的？,b),在你的学习或生活中压力是否大？如何正视压力？,写作指导,(1),扼要概括：本文的论点、论据、结论。,论点,Stress is the only anti-aging agent we know of,论据,Distress contributes to 80%of major illness and is responsible for 75%to 90%of doctors visits.,结论,Stress would bring you happiness.,用自己的话表达：,论点,stress is not an obstacle but a power in our life,it is good for us to stay young.,论据和结论,According to the study,we know that stress is necessary in our life,which can motivate us to go ahead.,范文,The passage tells us that stress is not an obstacle but a power of success in your life.Whats more,it is good for us to stay young.According to the study,we know that stress is necessary in our life,which can motivate us to go ahead.,Everyone is affected by stressful situations.How to manage your stress?I hold the same view with the author:stress is essential and we should be lucky to be together with it.As for me,I am keen on studying and enjoy the stress from study now.Once upon a time,I was discouraged because of too much stress from heavy study task.Later,I found the key to taking stress head-on is being relaxed.The better you relax,the better mood you can get from study.Dont be pessimistic when stress comes into view,maybe its a turning point in your life.,阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇,150,词左右的英语短文。,There are two factors which determine an individuals intelligence.The first is sort of brain he is born with.Human brains differ considerable,some being more capable than others.But no matter how good a brain he has to begin with,an individual will have a low intelligence unless he has opportunities to learn.So the second factor is what happens to the individualthe sort of the environment in which he is brought up.If an individual is handicapped(,受阻碍,)environmentally,it is likely that his brain will stop to develop and he will never attain the level of intelligence of which he is capable.,The importance of environment in determining an individuals intelligence can be proved by the identical twins,Peter and John.When the twins were three months old,their parents died,and they were placed in separate foster(,寄养,)homes.Peter was reared by parents of low intelligence in an isolated community with poor educational opportunities.John,however,was educated in the home well-to-do parents who had been to college.This environmental difference continued until the twins were in their late teens,when they were given tests to measure their intelligence.Johns IQ was 125,twenty-five points higher than the average and fully forty points higher than his brother.,写作内容,1),以约,30,个词概括短文的要点；,2),然后以约,120,个词就“环境与人的智力发展”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：,a),你是否赞同“环境决定智力的发展”这一观点？为什么？,b),请举出具体事例说明你的观点；,c),你认为如何才能最大限度地发展智力？,写作指导,(1),扼要概括：找出并转述议论文的基本要素。,论点,观点,The importance of environment in determining an individuals intelligence,论证,理由,If an individual is handicapped environmentally,it is likely that his brain will stop to develop and he will never attain the level of intelligence of which he is capable.,论据,事例,the identical twins brought up in separate environment.,(2),确立观点，实施论证：首先要定好自己的观点，然后也可以按上面的表格去构思。现以“环境决定人的智力发展”这一观点为例：,论点,观点,Environment is a key factor to the development of a persons intelligence,论证,理由,Environment can offer more opportunities to increase his knowledge and broaden the horizons as well as the chances to,practise,.,论据,事例,Zhongyong,（中国古代故事,-,伤仲永,）,范文,The writer argues in support of the importance of environment in terms of the development of a persons intelligence by giving an example of a twin brothers,who were brought up in different environment.,Personally,I believe environment is crucial to an individual intelligence,as a good environment can offer more opportunities to increase his knowledge and broaden the horizons as well as the chances to,practise,.,There was such a famous example in Chinese history.,Zhongyong,born with a high IQ,distinguished himself by reciting and even writing poems as a child,which astonished others.Unfortunately,his father didnt offer him a good environment to foster him but instead,he often took him everywhere to show off his intelligence.Gradually,Zhongyong,became an ordinary person.,Thus,I think we,including our parents,our teacher,even the whole society,should try to create a good environment for the children to fully develop their intelligence,and for the children,they should also learn to exploit everything available to develop themselves.,阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇,150,词左右的英语短文。,When we meet with difficulties in life,we notice that some of us choose to bury heads in the sand.Unfortunately,however,this attitude will do you no good,because if you have no courage to face them,how can you conquer them?Thus,be optimistic;as it can give you confidence and help you see yourself through the hard times.,Keeping optimistic,you will be able to realize,in spite of some hardship,theres always hope waiting for you,which will lead you to the ultimate success.Thomas Edison is optimistic;if not,the light of hope in his heart could not give light to the whole world.Alfred Nobel is optimistic;if not,the explosives and the Nobel Prize would not have come into being.,A rose may be beautiful,or may be not.That depends on your attitude only.So does success,and so does life.Difficulties do exist,but if you are optimistic,then they are only episodes(,插曲,)on your long way to success;there are more bridges than obstacles!The great British poet Shelleys lines say,“If winter comes,can spring be far behind?,写作内容,1),以约,30,个词概括短文的要点；,2),然后以约,120,个词就“人为什么要乐观？”的主题发表看法，并以自己的亲身体验为例，说明乐观至少有下列好处：,a),使人身心健康；,b),使人每天心情愉悦，开心度过每一天；,c),使我们能够勇敢地面对学习中所遇到的挫折；,d),使人性格随和，能与他人和谐相处。,范文,We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them,and we will succeed in the end.,In my study,I will get discouraged when I fail in an exam.I think Im hopeless and cant go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood,my teachers,especially my homeroom teacher,encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb“Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.”They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.Im grateful to them and agree with them.From now on,Ill no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary,I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I dont lose heart and work hard,Im sure Ill succeed in the end.,