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1、 课程大纲课程大纲Introductiongeneral writing improvement strategies Logic strategies 议论文议论文:各类高端国内外考试各类高端国内外考试说明文:部门高端国内外考试说明文:部门高端国内外考试应用文:生活及部门考试应用文:生活及部门考试记叙文:生活及部门考试记叙文:生活及部门考试1 Introduction1.1what is advanced writing1.2abilities measuredVocabulary,sentence-basicparagraph,article-logic1.3mistakes2 gener
2、al writing improvement strategies2.1 Vocabulary building 炼词炼词2.2 Sentence building 炼句炼句2.3 Paragraph building 炼段炼段2.1 vocabulary buildingRequirement:variety and diversity 多样性多样性appropriate word choice 合适合理合适合理idiomatic expression 习惯表达习惯表达Vocabulary building methods:同义词及区别同义词及区别上义词上义词意译词意译词习惯修辞及横线构词习
3、惯修辞及横线构词同义词及区别同义词及区别重要、导致、促进、大的、剧烈地、重要、导致、促进、大的、剧烈地、迷恋迷恋程度副词程度副词 剧烈类:剧烈类:greatly/enormously/sharply/steeply/suddenly/alarmingly/amazingly/massively/rapidly/dramatically/considerably/significantly/incredibly/Substantially.缓慢类:缓慢类:gradually/gently/steadily/slightly/slowly/marginally/in a moderate way/
4、by the least amount/moderately 选择中名词优先原则选择中名词优先原则坐落坐落蜿蜒蜿蜒盘亘盘亘好奇好奇提升品位提升品位自恋自恋女神女神杯具杯具Snake nestDragon overCrane forLadder upnarcissusMussOedipusRocket upApolloSisyphus 经典名著例子经典名著例子有钱男人需要找老婆有钱男人需要找老婆A man in possession of a great fortune must be in want of a wife.人们对此议论纷呈人们对此议论纷呈Ideas on this issue k
5、eep at constant variance.如何用名词表达?如何用名词表达?重要、导致、促进、大的、迷恋、剧烈的重要、导致、促进、大的、迷恋、剧烈的Of importance=importantResult in=have result in.Have Contribution toAdvance=have advancement toHave a fancy on you/sth strike my fancy exert peculiar fascination on nose dive TIPSRecite words per dayScan web per dayWrite do
6、wn the new and interesting words and their none.上义词-where to use Restrict/limit-?Regulation/law-?countryAnimal experiment Books/TV/ad.Computer Teacher 意译词 写作初级阶段:写作初级阶段:=翻译翻译常见意译错误常见意译错误:Please give me a reply if you are convenient.My MP3 can not listen even though it has much electricity.People now
7、 have condition to eat good things.I want to learn more about the garden knowledge.生活中经常出现的意译错误送朋友回家送朋友回家对不起,没座了对不起,没座了Sorry,no seats available 网站暂时无法访问网站暂时无法访问 Website Temporarily Unavailable.英语水平英语水平 English skills 谢谢你的好意,不过我可以走回去谢谢你的好意,不过我可以走回去 Thanks for your offer,but I can walk home 伸出了援助之手伸出了
8、援助之手 offering helping hands 他给了一件工作给我。他给了一件工作给我。这种产品效果绝对不一样这种产品效果绝对不一样 It will make a great difference.对于我来说,吃什么都一样。对于我来说,吃什么都一样。It makes no difference to have this or that你这样做是什么意思你这样做是什么意思 Whats your point 做做没什么意思?没什么意思?Pointless to do.Makes no sense to do我邮箱打不开了我邮箱打不开了 I can not access my mail bo
9、x today在城里孩子们有渠道去看各种演出。在城里孩子们有渠道去看各种演出。关于动物意译关于动物意译天涯何处无芳草天涯何处无芳草 fish 好兔不吃窝边草好兔不吃窝边草 Do not fish in your neighbors pool 老鼠爱大米老鼠爱大米 cheese 力壮如牛力壮如牛.as strong as a horse/willing horse黑马黑马Dark horse胆小如鼠胆小如鼠As timid as a chicken 习惯修辞习惯修辞 比喻比喻Dabble 浅涉水浅涉水v-涉猎涉猎明眸善睐明眸善睐 社会像是?社会像是?A dyeing pot/salad pot阿
10、甘正传阿甘正传 beans carrots Narcissus拟人拟人Facelift 拉皮拉皮 n.The restaurant has,with its new boss hailing from New York,had a new facelift recently.Feed up the machine/vendor 门开不了门开不了灯怒气冲冲地闪烁着灯怒气冲冲地闪烁着Sparks were emitted from small black boxes and red lamps flashed on and off angrily.一股怪味袭来,使他相信了我说的是真话一股怪味袭来,
11、使他相信了我说的是真话 He was greeted by an unpleasant smell which convinced him that I was telling the truth.借代借代In the least developed countries in Africa,all fur and feather are hunted for food.Creature/species Our hotel is short of hands Wall has ears.Great minds think alike.China is suffering brain loss/d
12、rain.Highbrow/lowbrow high/low pitch/key-夸张夸张She has the heart in her mouth.She went home in a flood of tears.(Laughter.)押韵押韵:smile a smile dream a little dream Talk the talk/Walk the walk Better city,better lifeInterior.exterior.双关双关A very dear cat for meApril is coming after a long march.TIPSEcono
13、mist New YorkerWiki Urban dictionary MOREHANGZHOU2.2 sentence buildingRequirement:Complication 英语重结构,汉语重语义英语重结构,汉语重语义 syntactic variety 英语多变化,汉语多重复英语多变化,汉语多重复 length英语多长句,汉语多短句英语多长句,汉语多短句 Sentence building methods:横向变换句型横向变换句型1 basic sentence writing 结构写作结构写作2 basic variety principles 基本基本5变化法变化法 3
14、Module choice 7 模块认知和选择模块认知和选择 高级变化高级变化 4 module synthesis 模块合成长句模块合成长句basic sentence writingbasic sentence writing 结构写作结构写作基本结构和常见错误基本结构和常见错误S V OS be Cbasic variety principles 基本基本5变化法变化法 Basic variety 5 principles法则法则1 主语变化:主语变化:英语多被动,汉语多主动英语多被动,汉语多主动 众所周知众所周知 We all known that Its known to all t
15、hat.It must be pointed out thatIt must be admitted that.It is imagined that.It can not be denied that.It will be seen from this that.It should be realized that.It is(always)stressed that.It may be said without fear of exaggeration that人们对此意见不一。人们对此意见不一。Different people have different ideas about thi
16、s.Ideas on this issue/topic vary from person to person.variousIdeas on this issue keep at constant variance.法则法则2 动宾结构变化为副词加形容词:动宾结构变化为副词加形容词:do harm to the body/spirit-physically/mentally harmful/detrimental Financially supportive/stressedhave great benefit to the environmentenvironmentally friendl
17、y/beneficial 法则法则3 倒装句倒装句介宾短语前置倒装:介宾短语前置倒装:杭州位于中国东部,是一个天堂城市。杭州位于中国东部,是一个天堂城市。Hz nests in the east of C.In the.Nests HZ,A beautiful city.Only 介宾短语、从句介宾短语、从句+系动词助动词系动词助动词+句子:句子:Only in this way can we solve the problem.只有在孩子完成作业以后才能被允许看电视。只有在孩子完成作业以后才能被允许看电视。只有大家充分认识到这个问题以后问题才能只有大家充分认识到这个问题以后问题才能真正得以解
18、决。真正得以解决。Only after/when everyday realize the problem can it be worked outNot only but also 倒装倒装:Not only can.,it also大学教育大学教育政府设施政府设施奉献奉献scarificationSuch.that 倒装:经典引入句倒装:经典引入句Such is human nature thatSuch is a common phenomenon that.Never倒装倒装 经典引入句经典引入句Never has the public witnessed/seen such a ph
19、enomenon that.法则法则4 强调句强调句It is+强调部分强调部分+that剩余部分剩余部分炼句中几种其他强调1.用形容词用形容词“very”,“single”等表示强等表示强调调 Not a single person has been in the office this afternoon 2.用反身代词表示强调用反身代词表示强调 He himself come to visit the patient.3.用助词用助词“do”表示强调表示强调 4.用短语用短语“in every way”,“in no way”,“by all means”,“by no means”他的
20、举止确实无可挑剔。他的举止确实无可挑剔。你一定要把儿子带来。你一定要把儿子带来。托福考试托福考试 5用倒装句表示强调用倒装句表示强调 法则法则5 双重否定句双重否定句双重否定为了强调,也有的是为了使语气委双重否定为了强调,也有的是为了使语气委婉婉1、否定词否定词缀、否定词否定词缀我们经常出国。我们经常出国。We do not infrequently go abroad.天下无难事,只怕有心人。天下无难事,只怕有心人。Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.已经做了的事后悔也无用已经做了的事后悔也无用。Whats done can not be undo
21、ne.考试经典句型It is not uncommonIt is not undeniable.2、否定词含有否定意义的词(各类)、否定词含有否定意义的词(各类)There is no doubt that.never fail to do.There is no denying that.It not seldom happens that.There are few people who dont like to。No gains without pains.There is no smoke without fire.模仿模仿没没.没没无无.无无.3、否定词否定词、否定词否定词Nothi
22、ng venture,nothing gain.凡是地球人都无一不认识凡是地球人都无一不认识TA。There is no one who lives in the world who doesnt know her.模仿模仿 凡是生活在城市的人没有一个不知道现在城市的污凡是生活在城市的人没有一个不知道现在城市的污染问题染问题 Module choice 7 模块认知和选择模块认知和选择 高级变化高级变化 Module choice外增高外增高1-6,内增高,内增高7模块模块1 介宾短语介宾短语-With替代动词替代动词,前置平衡结构西雅图气候宜人是一个花园城市。西雅图气候宜人是一个花园城市。T
23、he climate in Seattle is agreeable and is a garden city.Seattle is a garden city with the most delightful climate in the world.Seattle,with the most delightful climate in the world,is a garden city.当老罗用那低沉的调子和诡异的表情讲出当老罗用那低沉的调子和诡异的表情讲出那个笑话的时候整个教室爆发出爆笑。那个笑话的时候整个教室爆发出爆笑。The whole class burst out laughi
24、ng/broke into/burst into a great laughter when Laoluo,with his low tone and weird Look,told the story当城市化的脚步当城市化的脚步在高楼林立工业扩展中在高楼林立工业扩展中进进入农村,农村的宁静正在慢慢地被打破。入农村,农村的宁静正在慢慢地被打破。The peace of village is being broken slowly,When the pace of urbanizationSprawl/spread into the countryside with skyscrapers st
25、anding up and industry roaring everyday甘霖在新东方四国混血,资历最老,在学甘霖在新东方四国混血,资历最老,在学生中享有很高声望。生中享有很高声望。GL,with 3 foreign origins and most experience/experienced resume/application,enjoys a high fame/reputation among students 功夫总是吸引成千上万的迷们因为它以它那些功夫总是吸引成千上万的迷们因为它以它那些.的绝招把人们带入了一个刀光剑影的江湖世界。的绝招把人们带入了一个刀光剑影的江湖世界。Ku
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