第四篇：批驳篇.doc

四．批驳篇
要求学生对有争议的问题上所反映出来一种不正确的看法进行批评，然后阐述自己在这方面的看法和观点.
一．基本结构如下：
P1: topic: the issue to be argued about
my opinion of the issue
P2: Other's arguments about the issue
Detail I Detail II
Writer's objection
Writer's own arguments
Detail I Detail II
P3: conclusion
二．常用句型可列出如下：
In recent / the past few years, there is a remarkable increase in / growing demand for / marked change in attitudes towards…
…play an important part in / become indispensable to / make an great contribution to
But not everyone shares / agrees with the idea / view and it is argued that .., and that …
It seems reasonable to assume that…, / There may be some truth / wisdom in it, but a close examination / careful analysis of the argument reveals / indicates / discloses how fallacious it is / it is not borne out by facts..
There is no valid / sufficient / statistical evidence to show that… To say … is close to suggest that / to amount to… And nothing is so foolish / absurd / untrue as the view that… The truth / fact is that… / Rather, the reverse is true: / Just the opposite is true…
Anyone with the least common sense / modest knowledge of… knows that can tell..
In summary / conclusion…
三．见如下范文：
If There Were No Advertisements
1.有的人认为广告完全没有必要
2.有的人认为我们社会离不开广告
3.我的观点
Nowadays, advertisements can be found everywhere in a big city such as Shanghai. They shout at us from the television screen and radio loudspeakers, wave to us from every page of the newspaper, signal to us from the roadside billboards all day and flash messages to us in colored lights all night.(以拟人化手段引出主题)
Faced with a flood of advertisements, some people wonder (先陈述一种看法;暗喻)whether it is necessary to have such huge sums spent on advertising. They often cite in illustration of it the attractive, but false and deceptive advertisements to which many consumers fall victim. They suggest that since advertising is an entirely unproductive industry and may even harm the customers’ interest, why don’t we stop advertising and use the money to reduce the price of goods? It sounds like a good idea, but they fail to notice the contribution advertising makes to our society. (予以驳斥正面阐述)(观点一)Because the production of a better product to compete for customers’ money is the goal of advertisers, customers are thus given a chance to compare their products and get the best and cheapest one. (观点二)Besides, as the advertisement can provide people with a lot of immediate and detailed information as to the availability of a certain product, or a service or a job, it makes life much more convenient. And another thing we mustn’t forget:(冒号引出具体内容) the fact that we pay so little for our daily newspapers and TV programmes is due entirely to the money spent by advertisers.
(总结全文,点破题目)Advertising performs such a useful service to our society that we can’t imagine what would happen if there were no advertisements.
四．小试牛刀:
批驳篇（第一篇）Is Stress a Bad Thing?
1．有的人害怕压力
2．有的人认为压力并不是一件坏事
3．我的看法
批驳篇（第二篇）Has Science Made Us Lazy?
1．科学技术的发展对现代人生活产生了巨大的影响
2．有人认为科学使人变懒了
3．你的观点