必修二写作指导.docx

必修二写作指导
GUIDED WRITING(unit 5 music)
如何写征求意见信
征求意见信一般包括以下三个部分：首先点明写信的目的是征求意见，然后讲清楚自己遇到的困难或麻烦，最后提出请求，希望对方能提出好的意见，并礼貌地结束全文。
常用表达
1. I’m writing to ask your advice on... 2. Things go on like this.
3. I ... for the following reasons. 4. Now I have no choice but to...
5. How would you like it to be if you were in my shoes?
6. If you were me, would you agree to ...？
7. I’d like to hear your opinion about it.
8. I will be very grateful if you can give me some suggestions.
9. I’d appreciate it if you can give me some advice on...
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to ask your advice on _______.
Things go on like this, _______. Now I have no choice but to ______.
I’d appreciate it if you can give me some advice on _______.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
范文欣赏
Dear Mary,
I’m writing to ask your advice on how to get along with my roommate. To be honest, I find it hard to live with her in the same dormitory for the following reasons.
First, she is really noisy. She speaks loudly, makes much noise while eating and walks heavily. Worse still, she often chats on the telephone while I’m sleeping. Moreover, she throws rubbish everywhere in the room.
I’ve talked about this with her many times. Every time she promises to get rid of these bad habits, but she behaves in the same way as before. I’ve no choice but to consider reporting it to our teacher and ask for a change. Before doing this, I’d like to hear your opinion about it.
I’d appreciate it if you can give me some advice on how to improve my miserable situation.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Lily
GUIDED WRITING(unit 4 wildlife protection)
如何写建议信
首先点明写信的目的是提建议，然后讲清楚提建议的理由及应采取的具体措施，最后指出所提建议的意义，并发出号召或提出希望，礼貌结束全文。
常用句型
1. I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving...
2. I suggest / propose that... 3. If I were you, I would...
4. First and foremost ... Equally important ... Last but not least...
5. These are my suggestions.
6. I would be grateful if you can take my suggestions into consideration.
7. I hope they could mean something for a better future of...
8. It is time we put all our great plans into practice!
9. We should be part of the great event of... 10. We shall spare no effort to... 11. For the benefits of ... we should...
12. Though I am an ordinary person, I feel it my responsibility to call on all people to... 13. I hope they will be helpful. 14. Looking forward to your reply.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving ______.
First, ______. Second, ______. Last but not least, ______.
These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of _______.
Looking forward to your reply.
实战演练
假如你是李明，请根据下表内容，给你们学校的校长写一封建议信。（可适当增加细节。）

理由
吃饭时人太多，要排很长时间的队；还有不少同学占位，这使很多同学没有吃饭的座位。
措施
禁止占位；
各年级轮流吃饭，如：可以让高年级的同学晚十分钟去吃饭；
有条件的话，再建一个食堂。
范文欣赏
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving the dining conditions of our school. Because too many students have lunch in the dining room and therefore it takes quite a long time to queue. Worse still, some even occupy seats for their friends or classmates, which makes quite a few students unable to find tables to sit at.
Immediate measures must be taken to solve the problem. First, it must be forbidden to occupy seats. Second, students in different grades can take turns to have lunch. For example, those in higher grades can have lunch 10 minutes late. Anyway, the best way is to build a new dining room, if possible.
These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of our dining conditions.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
GUIDED WRITING(unit 5 computers)
放飞想象的翅膀
——— 描述自己理想中的未来机器人
参考表达
1. Robots are supposed to do boring and difficult jobs that humans can not do or don’t want to do. 2. Robots may be dangerous...
3. A robot is ... that knows ... or perhaps ... like a remote-controlled machine.
4. A robot is a very human-like servant and it cares for us.
5. It is quite possible that robots will turn out to be not slave labor.
6. Robots in the future can provide companionship.
7. We can imagine a future in which robots will care for our children and develop friendships with us.
实战演练
请以“My favorite robot of the future”为题，写一篇英语短文。
范文欣赏
My favorite robot of the future
My favorite robot of the future is a handsome boy named Jack who has a square face, two big eyes, a big mouth and very smooth skin. He not only can sing well but also is good at basketball. He is intelligent and can speak both Chinese and English.
Jack is my best friend. He understands me and cares for me. He provides me with companionship when I am lonely, encourages me when I am frustrated, listens to me when I want to talk, and teaches me to stay modest when I make great progress. He shares my joys and sorrows as well. He can even help me with my studies. We often sing together and play basketball together. He always reminds me to cherish what I have and learn to lead a happy, balanced and meaningful life.

GUIDED WRITING(unit 2 The Olympic games)
如何描写最喜欢的一项运动
常用句型
1. There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as ... However, my favorite sport is...
2. Sports make us healthy, happy and efficient. So I pay special attention to games, especially...
3. I am interested in many sports, such as ... But I always prefer ... and I enjoy it for many years.
4. .. is a very good sport, and I like it most.5. When I was ... I started to...6. I watch ... games as much as I can.
7. I play ... three times a week. Most often I play it in my school.
8. ... is a very good kind of sport, and that is because...
9. ... is considered an all-around sport which can exercise all parts of our body.
10. ... is quite a good sport in helping me improve my health.
11. Also it keeps me fit.12. ... is very cheap and it is a good sport for our health.13. The key reason I prefer it is that...
14. Therefore, ... is a very good sport. I think, you can play ..., can’t you?
15. ... has given me the most wonderful time in my life. Thus, it is my favorite sport.
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There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as ______. However, my favorite sport is ______, which requires ______.
When I was ______, I started to play ______. At that time, ______. Now, ______.
______ is an ideal game for us because ______. Besides, ______. In addition, ______. ______ has given me the most wonderful time in my life. Thus, it is my favorite sport.
范文欣赏
My favorite sport
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy. However, my favorite sport is playing table tennis, which requires great strength in the arms and legs as well as a great deal of concentration.
When I was in Grade 4, I started to play table tennis. At that time, I fell in love with this sport deeply. Now, I play table tennis with my classmates almost every day.
Table tennis is an ideal game for us because it brings the whole body into action. It strengthens our muscles, expands our lungs, and promotes the circulation of the blood. Besides, it is very amusing and does not cost us much money. In addition, it is an indoor game which can be played even on rainy days. Playing table tennis makes me healthy, happy and efficient. Thus, it is my favorite sport.
GUIDED WRITING(Unit 1 cultural relics)
如何写辩论报告
3. 结构：文章一般分四部分：第一部分：开门见山，说明辩论的主题（what）、参与者（who）等。第二部分：列举正方观点及其理由。第三部分：列举反方观点及其理由。第四部分：得出结论或给出自己的观点。
常用句型
1. We had a heated discussion about...2. Opinions about ... are divided.3. Different people have different ideas / opinions.
4. Opinions vary from person to person.5. Every coin has two sides.
6. Some / Others think / believe / claim that...7. 50% of the students are for it. 8. Most of them support it. 9. Some are in favor of...
10. Others are against it. 11. Half of them hold a different view.
12. Some object to...13. Some argue against...
14. Some / Others hold the view that...15. Those who are in favor of ... claim that...16. Those who are opposed to ... hold that...
17. Firstly ... Secondly ... Thirdly...18. Foremost ... Moreover ... Last but not least...19. All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that...
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We had a heated discussion about _________. Opinions are divided.
Some students think that _________. Foremost, _________. Moreover, _________. Last but not least, _________.
However, others don’t hold the same view. Firstly, _________. Secondly, _________. Thirdly, _________.
All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that _________. / In my opinion, _________.
实战演练
假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生。你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生坐同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了极大的反响，大家就此进行了讨论。请你根据下表内容把讨论结果向班主任李老师写一封信汇报一下，并说出你的观点。

赞同原因
反对原因
你的观点
1. 人人都有长处和不足，成绩差的学生也有可取之处；
2. 让成绩差的学生获得自信；
3. 相互学习，加深友谊。
1. 部分成绩差的学生常常违反校规校纪，担心自己会受影响，养成坏习惯；
2. 一些成绩差的学生很难相处；
3. 老是问问题，使自己不能专心学习。
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注意：1. 词数：120左右（信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2． 短文须包括表中所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3． 参考词汇：成绩差的学生slower students
Dear Mr. Li,
We have held a heated discussion about whether it is good or not for an excellent student to share a desk with a slower student. Opinions are divided.
...
Yours,
Li Ping
范文欣赏
Dear Mr. Li,
We have held a heated discussion about whether it is good or not for an excellent student to share a desk with a slower student. Opinions are divided.
Some are for the idea. Everyone has his own strengths as well as weaknesses. Although slower students are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields. In addition, only by helping them with their lessons will they gain more self-confidence. At the same time excellent students and slower students can deepen their friendship and learn from each other.
However, others don’t hold the same view. They think some slower students are always breaking school rules, which may cause them to form bad habits too. Besides, some of the slower students are hard to get along with. What’s worse, their asking questions often make the excellent students unable to study attentively.
In my opinion, I’d like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together.
Yours,
Li Ping