雅思写作双饼图写法介绍——pie-chart(课堂PPT).ppt

How to write pie chart?amy 2015/3/201review 35%30%15%15%5%1.ReadthetitleandAnalyzethenumber2.OrganizethearticleIntroductionBodyConclusion the biggest one 最大的the smallest one 最小的the same two 数量一样的阅读题目和分析数据阅读题目和分析数据文章组织文章组织2占多少比例占多少比例：occupy,represent,constitute,make up,take up,account for,1.Malesaccountedfor10%ofthewholeworkforce.2.Studentsmakeup/takeuproughly20%ofthegroup.words today表示剩余：表示剩余：名词：名词：therest=theremainder1.Duringtheremainderofthemorning,hehelpedhisauntwithsomehousework.形容词：形容词：remaining2.Theremaining18%wastakenupbythecostofmedicalcare.3be made up of,be composed of,consist of 1.Society is made up of people with different abilities.2.The workforce of Great Britain is composed of five partsrocket-up obvious traditional sector distribution population tremendous aggressiveshrink收缩的收缩的department of agriculture industrial sector 由由组成组成（整体）由（部分）组成（整体）由（部分）组成words today农业部门农业部门飞涨飞涨明显的明显的传统部门传统部门分布分布劳动力分布劳动力分布Distribution of workforce人口人口巨大的巨大的进攻的，进攻的，巨大的巨大的shrankshrunk工业部门工业部门4The two pie charts below show the distribution of workforce from 16 years old to 65 in Great Britain in 1932 and 19925P1标题改写标题改写（替换、添加与变换）（替换、添加与变换）vThetwopiechartsillustratethedistributional situation of labor forcebetween the ages of 16 and 65 in twodifferentyearsinUK.The two pie charts below show the distribution of workforce from 16 years old to 65 in Great Britain in 1932 and 19926In 1932,25%of the people between 16 and 65 were unemployed.Of those who had a job,the largest percentage of the population(45%)chose to work in the industrial sector Only 3%of the workers were employed by the government.(被动句),which was followed by those in the service sector(15%)and the department of agriculture and fishing(12%).P2 P2:针对图一，进行排序描写针对图一，进行排序描写7vCompared with the year 1932,1992 witnessed tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors.v The proportion of the unemployed significantly shrank to only 10%.P3开头部分开头部分P3的开头部分：概括说明变化的开头部分：概括说明变化8As for the employed,dramatic expansion took place in the sector of government and service industry to about 52%and 15%respectively.Noticeably,government workforce witnessed the most obvious change,which is 5 times that of the previous 3%in 1932.However,for the more traditional sectors,there was a considerable decrease from 15%to 8%in agriculture and fishing ，and a more aggressive deduction can be detected(被动)in the sector of industry from 42%to about 15%.P3对比图一，描写图二上升情况对比图一，描写图二上升情况P3对比图一，描写图二下降情况对比图一，描写图二下降情况P3P3剩余部分剩余部分 学会用插入语学会用插入语9vIn conclusion,during the 60 years chosen,the number of the unemployed and the amount of labor force in the traditional sectors like agriculture and industry declined,while government employee and workforce in the service industry saw a rocket-up.P4总结特点总结特点P4开头部分开头部分体会如何写长句：体会如何写长句：v插入语插入语vLike结构结构v非谓语非谓语vWhile表对表对比结构比结构v从句从句10summary写作思路vP1:改写改写标题标题vP2:排序排序（图一）（图一）vP3：对比对比（结合图一对比，写出（结合图一对比，写出图二变化情况）图二变化情况）vP4：结尾结尾11homework1.Write words and recite those words（抄写并记忆）2.翻译下面翻译下面2个句子个句子（为不局限思维，题目只给出了词组，（为不局限思维，题目只给出了词组，可根据你的理解去翻译，每题至少翻译两个版本，可根据你的理解去翻译，每题至少翻译两个版本，多种翻译多种翻译的途径通常是通过采用不同主语，或者主动、被动，或者从的途径通常是通过采用不同主语，或者主动、被动，或者从句，非谓语等实现的句，非谓语等实现的）1)1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多，占了占了42%2)与与1932年相比，在年相比，在1992年，很多部门都有年，很多部门都有明显的变化明显的变化12饼图句型分析饼图句型分析1v表达：1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多，42%（1）In 1932,most of the people(42%)worked in the industrial sector.（2）There were 42%of the people(largest portion)working in the industrial sector.（3）Thepeople working in the industrial sector occupied 42%of the total labor force,which was the most significant part of all.（4）The people who worked in the industrial sector made up 42%of the total labor force,which was the most significant of all.非谓语非谓语现在分词现在分词非谓语非谓语定语从句定语从句1：多句式结合：基本句型：多句式结合：基本句型/there be/非谓语非谓语/从句从句基本句式基本句式therebe13句式分析句式分析2主动被动主动被动v In 1932,42%of the people worked in the industrial sector,which was the largest portion of the total labor force.v42%of the people working in the industrial sector was the largest portion of the total labor force.v 42%of the people(largest portion)were employed in theindustrial sector.v The people employed in the industrial sector covered 42%of the total.主动2：主动被动交互使用：主动被动交互使用被动分词表被动非谓语现在分词表主动14句式分析句式分析3多样化主语多样化主语v42%of the people worked in the industrial sector,which was the largest portion of the total labor force.vRelatively,the industrial sector attracted the largest amount of workforce(42%)in 1932.vComparatively,working in the industrial sector would be most peoples choice(42%)among all the sectors in 1932.v1932 witnessed the fact that working in the industrial sector became most peoples choice(42%).动作发出者做主语某个对象做主语非谓语做主语时间做主语15比较中必写句型比较中必写句型v与1932年相比，在1992年，很多部门都有明显的变化。vCompared with the year 1932,there were tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors.vCompared with the year 1932,1992 saw tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors.16