M5Unit1劝说性的书信写作省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

英语写作专题一英语写作专题一说服性议论文说服性议论文第1页说服性信函说服性信函 说服性信函指以信件形式表示自己观点说服性信函指以信件形式表示自己观点或立场，并期待对方认同或接收。在写作或立场，并期待对方认同或接收。在写作过程中，要以合理语气和口吻为基调，用过程中，要以合理语气和口吻为基调，用有说服力素材来支撑自己观点，以说明阐有说服力素材来支撑自己观点，以说明阐述为主，以理感人，以理服人。述为主，以理感人，以理服人。第2页【写作指导】【写作指导】我们能够经过以下三个部分来进行写作：我们能够经过以下三个部分来进行写作：第一部分：第一部分：引入。写信人首先需要引入。写信人首先需要简明说明简明说明写信主要目标。写信主要目标。假如需要话，也能够大致作个自我介绍。假如需要话，也能够大致作个自我介绍。第二部分：第二部分：阐述。这是说服性信函阐述。这是说服性信函主体和关键主体和关键部分。写信人部分。写信人需要在这个部分需要在这个部分有条理地有条理地列出自己理由。列出自己理由。理由要力争客观、真实、有说服力，要理由要力争客观、真实、有说服力，要重点突出、层次分明重点突出、层次分明。同。同时，要注意适当时，要注意适当提升语言力度，发挥语言功力提升语言力度，发挥语言功力，以更加好地展现，以更加好地展现自己立场。阐述部分决定了说服性信函成败，需要写信人精心策自己立场。阐述部分决定了说服性信函成败，需要写信人精心策划、布局，以到达最正确效果。划、布局，以到达最正确效果。第三部分：第三部分：总结。能够用生动语言重申自己关键观点，或以总结。能够用生动语言重申自己关键观点，或以情感人、引发共鸣，或升华延伸、画龙点睛。这部分应该注意语情感人、引发共鸣，或升华延伸、画龙点睛。这部分应该注意语言言简练和冲击力简练和冲击力，切忌冗杂拖拉切忌冗杂拖拉表示。表示。第3页写作时应注意以下几点：写作时应注意以下几点：1.要注意英文书信格式，兼顾文化差异，同时要要注意英文书信格式，兼顾文化差异，同时要注意防止语法错误；注意防止语法错误；2.第一和第三部分重视简练，而第二部分作为信第一和第三部分重视简练，而第二部分作为信函主体，要重视条理和说服力；函主体，要重视条理和说服力；3.要注意提升自己语言表示层级，尝试使用较高要注意提升自己语言表示层级，尝试使用较高级别词汇、句型或结构。级别词汇、句型或结构。第4页 1.覆盖了全部覆盖了全部关键点关键点 2.应用了较多语法结构和词汇应用了较多语法结构和词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间连接成份，使全有效地使用了语句间连接成份，使全 文结构紧凑文结构紧凑词汇词汇,句型句型,语法多样化语法多样化关关键键点点全全连连接接词词怎样算是一篇好文章？怎样算是一篇好文章？第5页【惯用表示】【惯用表示】引入：引入：I am writing to.I hope that.That is to say.As far as I am concerned.In my opinion.Personally.第6页阐述：阐述：Here are my reasons.First of all,I think it would be better if.Second,.Third,.Moreover.Whats more.However.Instead.Here Id like to give my advice on.I would like to suggest that.If I were you,I would.第7页总结：总结：In short.All things considered.To sum up.In brief.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.第8页1.(因为因为)_ his help,I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing to Due to 因为因为Because of /with第9页2.More roads will have to be built with more cars,_（所以）（所以）well have less field to grow rice.thereforeSo as a result/consequence thus 结果结果第10页3.The rent is reasonable,_,the location is perfect.房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。whats moremoreover/furthermorein addition besides 另外另外(递进）递进）第11页4.The young man didnt enjoy his old job._(相反相反)he finds the new job very interesting.On the contrary,However,转折转折But/yet/while第12页5._(总之总之),we should make good use of computer.In generalIn a word/all in all总结总结In short/briefGenerally speaking第13页6._(我认为我认为),students had better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things.As far as Im concernedIn my opinion/its my opinion that个人观点个人观点I think/believe第14页 劝说性书信写作劝说性书信写作文体分析文体分析 劝说性书信写作目标写作目标是向某个组织或个人提出劝提出劝说性提议说性提议一个应用文体。先提出提议先提出提议，随即给出充分充分理由劝说对方接收你提议理由劝说对方接收你提议，提出理由要合情合理，用词要恰当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。基本结构和内容基本结构和内容 首先点明写信目标是提劝说性提议点明写信目标是提劝说性提议，然后讲清楚讲清楚提议事项、理由、详细提议和办法提议事项、理由、详细提议和办法，最终再一次提出再一次提出希望，礼貌结束全文。希望，礼貌结束全文。第15页惯用句型惯用句型1.Im writing to persuade you to.2.First of all,I think it would be better if.3.Here Id like to give my advice on./I would like to suggest that.4.If I were you,I would.5.I strongly hope that you can6.In my opinion,you should7.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.8.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.第16页黄金模板黄金模板Dear _,Glad to hear from you.Im sorry to hear that you_.Im writing to persuade you to _.First of all,I think it would be better if _.Secondly,_.Last but not least,_.I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.Looking forward to your quick reply.Yours,Li Hua第17页范例范例 假如你是李华，你一个美国读书笔友假如你是李华，你一个美国读书笔友John给给你写信，向你诉说他最近因身体不好而影响学习，你写信，向你诉说他最近因身体不好而影响学习，并坦言自己平时学习忙，极少锻炼。请依据这一并坦言自己平时学习忙，极少锻炼。请依据这一情况给他写一封提议信，勉励他主动锻炼身体，情况给他写一封提议信，勉励他主动锻炼身体，从而为更加好地学习打下基础从而为更加好地学习打下基础。第18页Dear John,Glad to hear from you!I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.Im writing to persuade you to take more exercise after class.You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise.But it is really harmful to your health.First of all,exercise can improve your physical condition and refresh your mind.Secondly,after one or two hours of exercise you can study better than now.I think only have a strong body,you can keep on studying without feeling bad or ill.Otherwise,your study will be interrupted from time to time by sickness.I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.Looking forward to your quick reply.Yours,Li Hua第19页第20页