高考英语写作指导课课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,近几年来，在新课标 中，书面表达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可说，有利于考生的自由发挥。,高考英语评分原则：,1.本题总分为25分，按,5个档次,给分。,2.评分时，先根据文章的,内容和语言,初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。,少于80,和,多于120,的，从总分中,减去2,分。,4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：,内容要点,，,应用词汇,和,语法结构,的,丰富性,和,准确性,及上下文的,连贯性,。,高考英语评分原则：,5.,拼写与标点符号,是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。,6.如,书写较差,以至影响交际，将其,分数降低一个档次,。,7.语言首先要求准确通顺。,8.鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。,总结,：什么样的作文是一篇好作文,无遗漏信息点，即要点全面,篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词,句式复杂多样,地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组,接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。,A good,composition,c,ontent,structure,language,be attractive,beautiful,completed,in a limited time!,What is a good writing？,Structure:,*Good beginning and ending(,好的开头结尾,),*Well organized and smoothly developed,(,结构合理,行文流畅,),Language:,*No Chinglish(,避免中文式英文,),*No Grammatical mistakes(,没有语法错误,),*With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns,(,词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化,),明确写作步骤,1.,Cross-question(,审题,),Main idea Style,Verb tense Person,2.Seize the major points/key words(,抓要点,)figure out the outline(,提纲,),4.Ensure the fluency,(,添加过渡，确保连贯）,Conjunctions/conjunctive adverbs,passage,5.,Error correcting,(,查错改错,),3.,Sentences connection,(,连句成文,),Words/phrases Sentences,passage,高考作文高分卷的特点,外在美,：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。,结构美,：有合理的段落层次，多为,3,段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。,词汇美,：,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,like,be fond of,be addicted to/help,do sb a favor,句式美,：,运用得当的,高级句式结构,可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。,衔接美,：,使用恰当的,连接词,，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。,卷面篇,养眼的,Different people have different opinions about it.,He came here yesterday afternoon.,自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns,_,_,Many boys learn to smoke,_,It does harm to their health.,*No Chinglish(避免中文式英文),C)Compound sentence B（复合句）:,有没有用好词好句?用了哪些?,_,Structure:,_,as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.,In the opinion of 60of the students,people can enter parks for free,我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了,I couldnt have passed,当批到下午两点看到了它们,太挤了,What I learnconclude from the story is that,4)I forgot my dictionary at home.,_,you will do better in the exam next time.,their health.,No matter how many difficulties there,They totally ignored the noticeable sign No littering nearby.,_,we should learn to overcome them independently.,重要的是我们要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到考试作文中去。,如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things,about different people have different opinions.,It does harm to their health.,1)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.,_,太乱了,太空了,太潦草了,太没谱了,老师最恨的作文,大锅，标点呢？段呢？,神，你别抄阅读理解行不？俺们也会看 的！,老师最喜欢的作文,Great minds think alike!,作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）,漂漂亮亮（,2125,分）,有模有样（,1620,分）,马马虎虎（,1115,分）,稀里糊涂（,610,分）,一塌糊涂 （,05,分）,Three Rules:,1.You learn to write by writing.,2.There is no good writing;only good rewriting.,3.When in dout,refer to Rule No.1 and 2.,二、感知典型范例,词汇层面,1,a,dj.,聪明的、脑筋好的,clever,wise,smart,bright,intelligent,他昨天下午来的。,1.,He came here yesterday afternoon.,2.,He,didnt,come here,until,yesterday afternoon.,3.,Not until,yesterday afternoon,did,he come here.,4.,It was,yesterday afternoon,that,he came here.,二、感知典型范例,句型层面,1,令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。,1,.He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things.,2,.,To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.,3.,What surprises him,is that the little girl knows so many things.,二、感知典型范例,句型层面,2,二、感知典型范例,段落层面,1,This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.,This village is very small,，,which,has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.,However,it has changed a lot since 1978.People here,are leading a richer and happier life,than before.Now it is taking on a new look.,二、感知典型范例,篇章层面,1,DISCUSSION:,What is a good writing？,How to catch the experts eye,s?,DISCUSSION:,What is a good writing？,Content:,E,verything which is related to your view need,s,to,includ.(内容要完整),（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）,1)Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded.,2)There has a highway connected with Beijing.,3)Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete.,4)I forgot my dictionary at home.,5)It will cost us much money to buy one.,Language,heavy.,left,is,take,Avoid Chinglish!,改错,1.,I cant understand them when I meet new words,so I have to refer to them in the dictionary.,2.,The ability to read English passages is slowly.,3.,There is no doubt that English Study need,s,lots,of time and efforts.,4.,Only by this way,can we keep up with other,students.,5.,Im LiHua,a new student of you.,meet with,look up,low,learning,in,Li Hua,yours,6.,My English level is common and I cant speak very,well.,7.,I believe we can get alone well with each other.,8.,Besides,I think speaking English is as important as,writing English.,9.,I study English for 12 years so I think I know English,very well.,10.,There are some advice in teaching English.,average,it,along,spoken,written,have studied,is,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns,使用较丰富的句式,1.They even threw rubbish into the lake.They totally ignored the noticeable sign No littering nearby.(使用V-ing形式),They even threw rubbish into the lake,_ the noticeable sign No littering nearby.,totally ignoring,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns,使用较丰富的句式,Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_in our school.(12 山东),held,2.Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest.It was held in our school.(使用过去分词),3.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(,使用名词性从句,),4.People suggest that the conference be,put off.(,改被动语态,),_,the little girl knows so many things.,What,surprises him is that,_,the conference be put off.,It is suggested that,5.He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(,使用强调句型,),6.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(,用虚拟语气）,_,he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened.,_,the physics exam _your help.,It,was,not,until,I couldnt have passed,that,but for/without,7.I wont believe what he says.(,使用状语 从句,),8.The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(,用定语从句,),_,he says,I wont believe.,The girl_,is spoken highly of.,No matter what/Whatever,whose composition was well written,9,.,If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.,（用并列句）,10.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(,使用倒装句,),_he come back from Beijing _he was sent abroad.,_,make rapid progress.,Study,hard,and,youll,No sooner had,Hardly,/scarcely.,.when.,.,than,四、明确写作步骤,抄,改,连,扩,抓,审,书面,表达,assess,Please learn to,Your composition,when you finish it from now.,书面表达评价表,项目 自评 他评,1.,书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划,?,2.,句子开头注意大小写了吗,?,3.,有没有注意标点符号,?,4,将文章分段了吗,?,分成了几段,?,5,有单词拼写错误吗,?,几个,?,6.,有时态错误吗,?,误用了哪种时态,?,7.,注意主谓一致了吗,?,8.,有没有语态的错误,?,9.,有没有使用关联词,?,使用得当吗,?,10.,有没有词性的错误,?,哪一种,?,11.,简单句表达正确吗,?,12.,是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构,?,13.,表达方式是否多样化,?,注意长短句搭配了吗,?,14.,有没有用好词好句,?,用了哪些,?,五、培养几种技能,Simple sentence(,简单句,):,Hearing the news,he was happy.,B)Compound sentence A,（并列句）,:,He gave me a book,but,I forgot to bring it back home.,C)Compound sentence B,（复合句）,:,What he is doing,has nothing to do with me.,“规范的英语句子”,就是我们经常讲的三种句子：,1.,学会使用规范的英语句子,Here are 3 ways to make sentences:,I.,巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1),借助名词短语做同位语,如：,李立，男，,19,岁，,1991,年生；籍贯：广东。,Li Li,a boy of 19,was born in Guangdong in 1991.,2),借助介词短语做定语,如：,李飞,男，,10,岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。,Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy,with short brown hair and in a white jacket,.,如：,有了,Tom,的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。,With the help of Tom,we soon found their village.,4),借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语,如：,他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,They were standing under the big tree,waiting for the president,.,Standing under the,big tree,they were waiting for the President.,3),借助介词短语做状语,II.,巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：,如：,他给我很多钱，我不要。,I was just walking down the street corner,when,I saw you.,如：,我刚走到拐角处，就见到你了。,He gave me a lot of money,but,I refused.,III.,用好从句和引导词写出规范的复合句：,1),名词性从句,如：,老师生气。原因：王力迟到。,That Wang Li came late to school,made the teacher very angry.,2),定语从句,如：,中国,地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。,China,which lies in the east of Asia,is a great country,with,a large area and population,as well as,rich natural resources.,I was deeply moved by this,because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts,.,3),状语从句,如：,雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。,2,、灵活运用九种句式,有意识的将下列句式结构运用到作文中去，可以迅速地让我们的作文靓起来。重要的是我们要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到考试作文中去。,1.,People grow rice in the south of China.,Rice is grown in the south of China.,2.They have printed one and a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986.,One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.,一、主动句与被动句的互换。,二、将陈述句改为倒装句。,I could,hardly,understand the importance of English at that time.,Hardly could I,understand the importance of English at that time.,2.We did,not,realize our mistakes,until,at that time.,Not until at that time did we,realize our mistakes.,三、将简单句改为强调句,Smoking,did great harm to his health.,It was,smoking,that,did great harm to his health.,2.Our money is earned,through hard work,by our parents.,It is,through hard work,that,our money is earned by our parents.,3.He went there yesterday.,He,did go,there yesterday.,四、将两个简单句合并为并列句,1.You can do it.I can do it.One of us must do it.,you,I must do it.,2.I want to buy this bike.I dont have enough money.,I want to buy this bike,I dont have enough money.,Either,or,but,五、将两个简单句合并为复合句,1.,同位语和同位语从句,Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete.He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.,_,_,won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.,2)The word is true.The president will give our school a speech.,_ is true,_,the president will give our school a speech.,Liu Xiang,an excellent athlete,It,that,2.定语从句,1)The Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,and its slogan is One World,One Dream,The Olympic Games,_,_,2)In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.,In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace,_,3)Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a lot of clothes.,Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,_,_,One Dream,will be held in Beijing.,are the two places which are well worth visiting.,where we bought a,Whose slogan is One World,lot of clothes.,3.,主语从句,1)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.,most was his wonderful performance on the stage.,2)It satisfied me.The dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.,the dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.,3)I learned from the story that as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.,as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.,What impressed me,What satisfied me is that,What I have learnt from the story is that,推荐句型,What surprises astonished satisfied impressed me is that,What I would like to suggest advise put forward is that,What matters most is that,What I learnconclude from the story is that,4.,表语从句,推荐句型：,is no longer what it used to be.,1),我的家乡不再像以前那样了。,My hometown is no longer what it used to be.,2),他不再是以前那样了。,He is no longer what he used to be.,5.,状语从句,结果、程度,sothat;such that,让步,no matter how what when where.=whatever,however,whenever,wherever,时间,was doingwhen,as soon as,the moment,the next time,every time,1),不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。,_,_,we should learn to overcome them independently.,2),我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。,I _ along the road _,suddenly I heard my name called.,No matter how many difficulties there,was walking,when,are ahead of us,六、将两个简单句合并为一个由,which,引导的非限制性定语从句,1.Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things.Different people have different opinions about it.,Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things,about,different people have different opinions.,2.Many boys learn to smoke.It does harm to their health.,Many boys learn to smoke,_,_,which,which does harm to,their health.,七、,it,作形式主语或形式宾语句型,1.You pretend to know what you dont know.Its no good.,Its no good pretending to know what you dont know.,2.It is easy to get on with Pam.I find,.,I find it easy to get on with Pam.,八、分词结构代替状语从句,If you work harder,you will do better in the exam next time.,_,you will do better in the exam next time.,2.Because my friend was frightened of losing his job,he said nothing to the police.,_,my friend said nothing to the police.,Working hard,Frightened of losing his job,九、将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成,with,引导的短语或者复合结构。,With+,宾语,+adj./adv./,介词短语,/to dodoingdone,常用句型,with a population of.,with a total area of,with a long history of years,1)这个地区占地2000平方千米，人口10万。,This area covers an area of 2000 square kilometers,_,2)我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参观。,_,it attracts a large number of people.,3)我们学校是一所有100多年 的名校。,Our school is a famous one _,_,with a population of 100,000.,With many flowers surrounding our school,with a history of over 100 years.,4,）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。,_,the,boy dared not go to school.,5),这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。,The two men went to bed early,_,_.,6),他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。,He sleep _.,with candles burning a night long,With homework not finished,with his mouth wide open,七、实战演练巩固,实战演练巩固,1,请根据以下的情景说明,使用,5,个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。,标题为 “,My English Learning”,注：所给情景有时是中文要点，有时是表格。,我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了,一定的进步，但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是,英语中的一些习惯用法。自己今后一定要努,力学习这门有用的外语，争取早日掌握这门,语言。,我学英语已经六年了,I have been learning English for over 6 years.,在英语学习上有了一定的进步,I have made some progress in my English,.,但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。,But I always feel English is hard to learn,especially some English idioms are difficult.,自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语,I will work hard at this useful foreign language.,争取早日掌握这门语言。,I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.,My English Learning,I have been learning English for over 6 years.,It is six years since,I began to learn English.,I have made some progress in my English.,With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have,made progress,in my English.,Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English.,But I always feel English is hard to learn,especially some English idioms are difficult,.,But I still,find it hard to learn,English,such as,some difficult idioms,.,I will try hard to master this foreign language.,Difficult as it is,I have,made up my mind,to master this useful language by my hard work.,My English Learning,It is six years since,I began to learn English.,With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have,made progress,in my English.,Now Im,doing well,both,in,writing and reading in English.,But I still find,it,hard,to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.,Difficult as it is,I have,made up my mind,to master this useful language by my hard work.,实战操练：,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。,注意：,1,、信的开头已为你写好,2,、参考词汇：门票：,entrance fee,实战演练巩固,2,1,60,的同学,认为,公园,不应该,收费。,Sixty percent of the students,think,that the park should not charge entrance fees,Sixty percent of the students,hold the view that,entrance fees,shoul