高考英语写作专题辅导课件基础写作项目描述.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,高考英语写作专题辅导课件基础写作项目描述,晨读背诵,相关短语,1.originate as.,以,出现,/,起源,2.a means of survival,一种生存手段,3.develop into,发展成为,4.be allowed to,被允许,5.grow steadily,稳定增长,6.twice in history,历史上两次,7.participate in,参加；参与,8.is considered to be(as),被认为是,9.what is more,此外,10.offer sb.help,给某人提供帮助,11.be similar to,与,相似,12.choose two subjects out of.,从,中选,择两个科目,13.earn its status as a sport,作为一项运动,取得它的地位,14.related reading materials,相关的阅读材料,15.broaden ones horizons,开阔视野,16.provide sb.with a platform,给某人提供,一个平台,相关句式,1.Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into,a sport only in the late 19th century.,射击,原先是一种生存手段,只是到了十九世纪晚期才发展成一种运动项目。,2.,Women were first allowed to,compete in the Olympic shooting only in 1968.,到了,1968,年才允许女子参加奥运射击项目。,3.The iPhone 4,a,touch-screen smart,phone,is the fifth generation of the iPhone.,苹果,4,即触屏智能手机,是苹果的第五代产品。,4.,What is most amazing is that,you can order it to do things like sending messages with your voice.,最令人称奇的是,你可以利用声音命令它发出信息。,5.Students,are encouraged to do,a lot of,related reading,which,provides us with,a platform for development.,鼓励学生阅读相关的读物,提供他们一个发展的平台。,6.Every student can,choose two subjects out of,20,according to their own interests.,根据自己的兴趣,每个学生可以从,20,名课程中选两门。,技巧点拨,1.,项目描写一般是对某个事物、某项活动、某种风俗习惯等的描写,考生平时应多阅读英语报刊杂志,了解最新的技术发展,掌握一些相关的地道英语,如“畅销书”可以翻译为,best sellers,，“卖断货”可以翻译为“,sell out of stock”,。,2.,考生在项目描写的作文中需要特别注意词性,比如说“这个产品是高质量的”,考生容易错翻译为“,This product is high quality”,这就是考生直接按照字面翻译,没有注意到,quality,是个名词而不是形容词,所以考生应该翻译为“,This product is of high quality”,。,典型例题,你很荣幸地成为,2008,北京奥运会的一名志愿者,负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。,写作内容,请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：,背景：射击最初只是生存工具,19,世纪末,才发展成为一项体育运动,1896,：第一次成为奥运项目,1904,：中断,1928,：中断,1932,：重回奥运会,1968,：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛,现状：稳步发展，,1896,奥运会只有三项射,击项目,现今有,17,项,例题导写,1.,首先,认真审题,归纳信息。对于事物的描写和说明,考生可以根据事物的性质、特点划分信息。本题目里对奥运射击的项目的陈述,是按照时间顺序排列,因此在信息点的划分这步相对容易。射击的背景和现状分别是第一句和第五句,射击的发展中,1896-1932,年的变化可以用两句话表述,1968,年妇女第一次获得参加奥运会的权利可以放在第四句描述。,2.,接着,词汇整理,草拟提纲。项目描写的文章考生要注意使用正确、地道的语言把句子组织在一起。,词汇整理 翻译或完成下列单词或短语。,句,1,：,(1),射击,_,(2),生存工具,_,(3),直到,才,_,means of survival/means of making a living,shooting,not.until.,句,2,句,3,：,(4)(,运动,),项目,_,(5),中断,_,(6),重回奥运会,_,The sport returned to the,Olympics/The Olympics were restarted.,sports event,be suspended/be paused,句,4,：,(7),允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛,_,_,_,_,句,5,(8),稳步发展,_,allow/permit women to take part in/join in/compete in/participate in the Olympics,或,women are admitted as competitors in the Olympics,develop steadily,3.,难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。,句,1,：,(1),射击最初只是生存工具。,(1)Shooting originated as a means of survival.,(2)19,世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。,(2)Shooting developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,合并：,Version 1:Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport in the late 19th century.(,并列句,)/Shooting,(which was)originated as a means of survival,didnt develop into a sport only until the late 19th century./It was not until the late 19th century that shooting,(which was originated as a means of survival),developed into a sport.(,定语从句,not.until,的句型,),句,2,句,3,：,(1)1896,：第一次成为奥运项目,(1)Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896.,(2)1904,：中断,;(3)1928,：中断,(2-3)Shooting was suspended in 1904 and 1928.,(4)1932,：重回奥运会,(4)It returned to the Games in 1932.,合并：,Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896,but it was suspended in 1904 and 1928.It didnt return to the Games until 1932./Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896.Then,it was suspended in 1904 and 1928 but finally returned to the Games in 1932.,参考范文,Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into,a sport only in the late 19th century.The sport first appeared in 1896,but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games.The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932.,Women were first allowed to,compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.The sport has,grown steadily,from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,4.,连句成文。考生在写作过程中不要被中文提示限制了思路。如第一个信息点的“生存工具”,考生容易翻译为“,the tool of survival”,但在这里用,tool,是不贴切的,射击不是实物,应该是指“生存的方式”,所以考生应该用“,the means of survival/the means of making a living”,更贴切。又如最后的一个信息点“稳步发展,1896,奥运会只有三项射击项目,现今有,17,项。”看上去似乎有三个分句,但其实通过逻辑分析，这个句子用一个简单句就可以表示出来,(“,奥运会从只用三项射击项目稳步发展到现今的,17,项”,),也就是学生只需要使用,develop steadily from.to.,这个词组就可以把这个句子表述清楚了。,能力提高,1.,短语翻译,(1),我很荣幸,_,(2),有超过十年的历史,_,(3),高的品质,_,of high quality,I am honored to do,has a history of over 10 years,(4),不但,而且,_,(5),国内外,_,(6),良好的售后服务,_,(7),团圆、运气、财富的象征,_,a symbol of reunion,luck and fortune,Not only.but also,at home and abroad,good after-sale service,(8),表达祝福,_,(9),家庭聚会,_,(10),完善的功能,_,complete functions,express best wishes,have a family reunion,2.,作文填空,(1),I am honored to introduce one kind of laptop Venus laptop produced by our company which(1)_ _(,有生产手提电脑十年以上的历史,).Our product,Venus laptop,with a charming appearance,is,(2)_(,高的品质,)and has(3)_(,完善的功能,).,complete functions,laptops for over 10 years,has a history of producing,of high quality,Not only is it easy to operate and carry but also the price of the product is reasonable.Whats more,it was once awarded the first prize in a provincial laptop appraisal.It sells well at home and abroad and has a good(4)_ _(,售后服务,).,service,after-sale,(2),The Mid-autumn Festival,which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China,falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year.(5)_(,不仅仅,)is it popular in China _it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries.,but,Not only,People believe that the moon is(6)_ _(,团圆、运气、财富的象征,),and it is a custom to(7)_ _(,表达祝福,)to the beloved ones at this particular time.On that day people usually go back home to(8)_ _(,家庭聚会,),enjoying a large meal with their family.They will also eat moon cakes,which are round cakes with meat,eggs,nuts and other things inside.,of reunion,luck and fortune,a symbol,best wishes,express,have a family,reunion,课堂练习,假设你想说服你爸爸给你购买最新的一款手机,iphone 4,请你根据以下写作内容给他描述,iphone 4,的情况。,写作内容,介绍,1.,触摸屏,第五代,iphone,2.,独创的,被认为世界上最好的智能机,外型,与,iphone 3,相似,黑白两种颜色,功能,1.,电池功能强大,支持,200,小时待机时间,(standly time),8,小时,3G,通话时间,2.,照相系统提高,3.,用声音指示手机发短信等,4.,它能理解你说的话,给你帮助,参考范文,The iPhone 4,a,touch-screen smart,phone,which,is the fifth generation of the iPhone,is,considered,ground-breaking and the best smart phone in the world.,Coming,in two colors,black and white,it,retains,(,保留,)almost all of the same design features,as,its predecessor(,前身,),the iPhone 3.,However,with more powerful battery,it has 200 hours standby time and 8 hours talk time on 3G.,What is more,the camera inside it is greatly developed.,What is most amazing is that not only,can you order it to do things like sending messages with your voice,but also,it can understand what you say and,offer you help,.,精华点评,这是对一个新的电子产品的描述,考生可以使用生动的语言描述,避免文章枯燥无味。如表示“突破性的”,考生可以使用形容词,ground-breaking,或者名词,breakthrough;,表示外形与,iphone 3,相似的时候,很多考生可以考虑到,be similar to iphone 3 in appearance,但范文中使用了,retain almost all of the same design features as,这个短语，使文章的语言更加高级和生动。,最后两句是表现,iphone 4,改善了的和新的功能,因此范文中补充了两个细节,with more powerful battery(,第四句,),和,What is most amazing is that.(,第五句,),使整个描述更有吸引力。,课外作业,最近,你的英国笔友,Jack,的学校开展了选修课,他来信询问你校选修课的开展情况。请你根据以下提示,写一封回信介绍你校选修课情况。包括以下内容要点：,开展时间,每周三下午,4,：,00-5,：,00,，一个学期,科目,1.20,门课程可供选择，包括中国文学简介，电影鉴赏，书法等课程,2.,每学生可以报两门,作业,没有作业，鼓励学生大量阅读相关书籍,考试,论文方式,体会,有趣，开拓眼界，有意义,参考词汇：选修课,elective course,书法,calligraphy,参考范文,Dear Bob,，,I,am pleased to,introduce to you the,elective courses,of our school.The elective courses are held from 4:00 to 5:00 in the afternoon every Wednesday,lasting a term,.Every student can,choose two subjects out of,20,according to their own interests,such as the Brief Introduction of Chinese Literature,the Appreciation of Movies,and Calligraphy.,There is no homework for the elective courses,but students,are encouraged to do,a lot of,related reading,which,provides us with,a platform for our development.No exams will be taken and instead students,are required to,write an essay.,I like our selective courses because they are not only interesting and meaningful but also help to,broaden my horizons,.,Yours,，,Li Hua,精华点评,这篇文章的写作内容是以表格形式呈现,表格的内容都是片段而不是完整的句子,因此往往省略主语,考生在写作时候要注意避免句子不完整。因此,考生可以考虑使用被动语态,如范文中使用了“,The elective courses are held.”,“students are encouraged to do.”,“No exams will be taken.students are required to.”,等。,Thank you!,谢谢！,