漫画作文课件..ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing based on a cartoon,Problems:,1.wrong structures,2.improper description,3.misunderstanding what the picture,shows,Step I,Lead in,Tasks:,1.To deal with,problems,in writing based on a cartoon,2.To learn the basic,structure,of cartoon writing,Step II An example,How can we write a composition based on a cartoon?,Writing,:,目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“,Health Care,”,为题写一篇短文，,简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。,A.Make an outline of the writing,1.,漫画内容,Writing,:,目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“,Health Care,”,为题写一篇短文，,简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。,2.,现象,后果,3.,你的观点,1.Description,:,1.An old man was,in hospital,for his heart attack.2.Three weeks later,he paid his medical fee before he,left hospital,.3.The bill with$5,0000,shocked,him.4.He nearly,fell,onto,the,floor,.5.The high fee was,another heart attack,to him.,2.Phenomenon:,The medical fees are very high.,3.Your opinion(Measures),Consequences,people:,society,:,government,:,hospital,:,2.Phenomenon:,The medical fees are very high.,Consequences,people:,society:,People cant afford the heavy medical fees and have to bear the pain of illness.,It wont be beneficial to the building of our harmonious society,.,3.Your opinion(Measures),government:,hospital:,Government should set up effective medical system.,They should put the benefits of the patients in the first place and reduce the fee.,We can see an old man was in hospital for his heart attack.Three weeks later,he was asked to pay his medical fee before he left hospital.When he saw the bill,he got shocked and nearly fell onto the floor.The high fee was another heart attack to him.,Nowadays,the medical fees are high.Many people are in debt to get medical fees.Some people cant afford the heavy medical fees.They have to bear the pain of illnesses.It wont be beneficial to our harmonious society.,I think the medical expenses should be reduced.The government should build up an effective medical system.The hospital should put the benefits of the patients in the first place.,B.Form a draft by joining the sentences,We can see an old man was in hospital for his heart attack.Three weeks later,he was asked to pay his medical fee before he left hospital.When he saw the bill,he got shocked and nearly fell onto the floor.The high fee was another heart attack to him.,C.Polish up your language:,_,we can see an old man was in hospital for his heart attack.Three weeks later,he,was asked to pay,his medical fee before,he left,hospital.,When,he saw the bill,he was,shocked and could,hardly stand on his own feet,.,The high fee was another heart attack to him.,My version:,As is vividly shown in the picture,The moment,leaving,so shocked that he could,The high fee was beyond what he could afford,which was no doubt another heart attack to him.,was,informed of paying,hardly stand on his own feet.,Health,Care,As is vividly shown in the picture,we can see,that the old man suffering from heart attack had to go to hospital for medical care.Three weeks later,he was informed of paying his medical fee before leaving hospital.The moment he saw the medical bill from the hospital,so shocked was he that he couldnt stand on his feet.The high fee was beyond what he could afford,so it was no doubt another heart attack to him.,D.,Form the,final,writing,three paragraphs:,1)describe,the,picture,2)interpret,its meaning:,consequences/reasons,3)give your opinion,about the,phenomenon,Summarize:,Design,Para1,Describe,the picture,The picture is talking about/shows,As is vividly shown/,portrayed,in the picture,Sentence patterns:,Para2,Interpret,the picture,The picture,shows/indicates/implies/describes,that What it describes vividly is a kind of common phenomenon among people who,/,Reasons,:,Several possible reasons,contribute to/,are,responsible for,it.In the first place/To begin with,Next,Then/In addition,Consequences,:,Its consequences can be,so great that,.,Para3 Give your,opinion,As far as Im concerned,some effective measures should be taken.,Only in this way,can.,(used at the end of the composition),网络时代有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通，请根据下面图画，,简要说明图画中所表达的内容，阐述这种现象的原因和你的看法。,写一篇,150,字左右短文。,Step III Practice,Suggested,version:,As is vividly,portrayed,in the picture,occupied in,chatting on the Internet,a boy refuses to talk with his mother.The mother,can do nothing but,stand behind the boy,depressed.,It is the exact reflection of lack of communication between parents and children.,Several reasons,contribute to,it.First,the Internet,provides us with,a place where we can communicate with different people,in which case,we,are addicted to,the virtual world and keep our distance from people around us.Besides,pressure from study,drives us to seek,excitement on the Internet.Also,parents,busy with,their work,spare little time to stay with their children,resulting in,the less communication.,Suggested,version:,As far as Im concerned,some effective measures should be taken by parents and children.,In terms of,children,we should,cut back on the time when,we play computers and,be aware of,the importance of communication with parents.,In addition,parents and children should exchange their ideas and feelings regularly.Interesting topics are recommended so that both parents and teenagers love to talk about.,Homework:,下图描绘的是目前很多孩子们的苦恼。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。,Thank you!,