高三写作两原则.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,Company Logo,*,Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,结课后安排,1.务必记住：,家长会暨学期颁奖典礼,时间：1月9号下午1：00-3：00,地点：新东方新区202教室,2,.,到老师这边考3个重要文件：,.模块一到模块八重点单词和短语汇总,.模块一到模块八黄金句型汇总,98-09年高考试题汇总、高中语法讲义、11套09年各省市听力 mp3格式汇总以及江苏省2009届模拟试卷汇总21套,3.有问题及时联系老师,手机号：[phone],邮箱：gonglu430,Standing inside were,lots of white-skinned,strange-looking,creatures with large black eyes.,闪亮登场句式,Coming out,be(is/am/are/was/were)a()()(括号里填形容词)person with+n.,Coming out,一语未了，只听后院中有人笑声，说：,“,我来迟了，不曾迎接远客！,”,黛玉纳罕道：,“,这些人个个皆敛声屏气，恭肃严整如此，这来者系谁，这样放诞无礼？,”,心下想时，,只见一群媳妇丫鬟围拥着一个人从后房门进来。,这个人打扮与众姑娘不同，彩绣辉煌，恍若神妃仙子：头上戴着金丝八宝攒珠髻，绾着朝阳五凤挂珠钗；项上带着赤金盘螭（ch）璎珞圈；裙边系着豆绿宫绦，双衡比目玫瑰佩；身上穿着缕金百蝶穿花大红洋缎窄裉（k,n）袄，外罩五彩刻丝石青银鼠褂；下着翡翠撒花洋绉裙。一双丹凤三角眼，两弯柳叶吊梢眉，身量苗条，体格风骚，粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,一语未了，只听后院中有人笑声，说：,“,我来迟了，不曾迎接远客！,”,黛玉纳罕道：,“,这些人个个皆敛声屏气，恭肃严整如此，这来者系谁，这样放诞无礼？,”,心下想时，只见一群媳妇丫鬟围拥着一个人从后房门进来。,这个人打扮与众姑娘不同，彩绣辉煌，恍若神妃仙子：头上戴着金丝八宝攒珠髻，绾着朝阳五凤挂珠钗；项上带着赤金盘螭（ch）璎珞圈；裙边系着豆绿宫绦，双衡比目玫瑰佩；身上穿着缕金百蝶穿花大红洋缎窄裉（k,n）袄，外罩五彩刻丝石青银鼠褂；下着翡翠撒花洋绉裙。,一双丹凤三角眼，两弯柳叶吊梢眉，身量苗条，体格风骚，粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,well-dressed,beautifully-dressed,fairly-dressed,decently-dressed,一语未了，只听后院中有人笑声，说：,“,我来迟了，不曾迎接远客！,”,黛玉纳罕道：,“,这些人个个皆敛声屏气，恭肃严整如此，这来者系谁，这样放诞无礼？,”,心下想时，只见一群媳妇丫鬟围拥着一个人从后房门进来。,这个人打扮与众姑娘不同，彩绣辉煌，恍若神妃仙子：头上戴着金丝八宝攒珠髻，绾着朝阳五凤挂珠钗；项上带着赤金盘螭（ch）璎珞圈；裙边系着豆绿宫绦，双衡比目玫瑰佩；身上穿着缕金百蝶穿花大红洋缎窄裉（k,n）袄，外罩五彩刻丝石青银鼠褂；下着翡翠撒花洋绉裙。,一双丹凤三角眼，两弯柳叶吊梢眉，,身量苗条，体格风骚，粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,a pair of,Phoenix,eyes,willowleaf-like eyebrows,a pair of slim eyes,the order of phoenix,一语未了，只听后院中有人笑声，说：,“,我来迟了，不曾迎接远客！,”,黛玉纳罕道：,“,这些人个个皆敛声屏气，恭肃严整如此，这来者系谁，这样放诞无礼？,”,心下想时，只见一群媳妇丫鬟围拥着一个人从后房门进来。,这个人打扮与众姑娘不同，彩绣辉煌，恍若神妃仙子：头上戴着金丝八宝攒珠髻，绾着朝阳五凤挂珠钗；项上带着赤金盘螭（ch）璎珞圈；裙边系着豆绿宫绦，双衡比目玫瑰佩；身上穿着缕金百蝶穿花大红洋缎窄裉（k,n）袄，外罩五彩刻丝石青银鼠褂；下着翡翠撒花洋绉裙。,一双丹凤三角眼，两弯柳叶吊梢眉，,身量苗条，体格风骚，,粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,slender,graceful/elegant,一语未了，只听后院中有人笑声，说：,“,我来迟了，不曾迎接远客！,”,黛玉纳罕道：,“,这些人个个皆敛声屏气，恭肃严整如此，这来者系谁，这样放诞无礼？,”,心下想时，只见一群媳妇丫鬟围拥着一个人从后房门进来。,这个人打扮与众姑娘不同，彩绣辉煌，恍若神妃仙子：头上戴着金丝八宝攒珠髻，绾着朝阳五凤挂珠钗；项上带着赤金盘螭（ch）璎珞圈；裙边系着豆绿宫绦，双衡比目玫瑰佩；身上穿着缕金百蝶穿花大红洋缎窄裉（k,n）袄，外罩五彩刻丝石青银鼠褂；下着翡翠撒花洋绉裙。,一双丹凤三角眼，两弯柳叶吊梢眉，,身量苗条，体格风骚，,粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,rosy cheeks speak of an air of,authority,the still red lips ready to,burst into,laughter,直击高考,22.My English teachers humor was _ make every student,burst into laughter.,(2008年，江西),A.so as to,B.such as to,C.such that D.so that,Octopus,七匹狼,Youth is not a time of life;it is a state of mind.,It is not a matter of,rosy cheeks,red lips,and supple knees.,It is a matter of the will,a quality of the imagination,a,vigor of the emotions,.,I,t is the freshness of the deep spring,s,of life.,英文写作思维1：没有大量的输入就没有自由的输出,粉面,含春威不露，,丹唇,未启笑先闻,rosy cheeks,red lips,一语未了，只听后院中有人笑声，说：,“,我来迟了，不曾迎接远客！,”,黛玉纳罕道：,“,这些人个个皆敛声屏气，恭肃严整如此，这来者系谁，这样放诞无礼？,”,心下想时，只见一群媳妇丫鬟围拥着一个人从后房门进来。,这个人打扮与众姑娘不同，彩绣辉煌，恍若神妃仙子：头上戴着金丝八宝攒珠髻，绾着朝阳五凤挂珠钗；项上带着赤金盘螭（ch）璎珞圈；裙边系着豆绿宫绦，双衡比目玫瑰佩；身上穿着缕金百蝶穿花大红洋缎窄裉（k,n）袄，外罩五彩刻丝石青银鼠褂；下着翡翠撒花洋绉裙。,一双丹凤三角眼，两弯柳叶吊梢眉，,身量苗条，体格风骚，,粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,rosy cheeks speak of an air of authority,the still red lips ready to,burst into laughter,英文写作思维2：复杂的中文简单的中文简单的英文适当复杂的英文,粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,pink,粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,粉红,的面颊里,有着丝丝,威严；,爽朗的笑声仿佛随时会从朱红的嘴唇里,迸发出来,。,The pink cheek has,some authority;,The laughter will come out from her red lips.,The,rosy,cheeks,speak of,an air of,authority;,And the laughter will be,bursted out from,her red lips.,复杂的,中文,简单的,中文,破译,翻译,简单的,英文,适当复,杂的英文,字斟句酌,has,some,come out from,举头望明月，低头思故乡。,I raised my head and,looked out on,the moon,I bowed my head and,thought of,my far-off home.,Looking up,I find the moon bright;,Bowing,in homesickness,Im,drowned.,I raise my eyes to the moon,oh,the same moon.As scenes long past come to my mind,my eyes fall again on the,splash,of white,and,my heart,aches,for home.,Standing inside were lots of white-skinned,strange-looking creatures with large black eyes.,闪亮登场句式,Coming out be(is/am/are/was/were)a()()(括号里填形容词)person with+n.,Coming out is,a,beautifully-dressed,graceful,slender,woman with,a pair of phoenix eyes and willow-leaf like eyebrows.Her ready-to-burst-into-laughter still red lips speak of her authority and her rosy cheeks talk of,her beauty.,Standing inside were lots of white-skinned,strange-looking creatures with large black eyes.,闪亮登场句式,Coming out be(is/am/are/was/were)a()()(括号里填形容词)person with+n.,Coming out is,a,beautifully-dressed,graceful,slender,woman with,a pair of phoenix eyes and willow leaf like eyebrows.Her ready to burst into laughter red lips speak of her authority and her rosy cheeks talk of her beauty.,Standing inside were lots of white-skinned,strange-looking creatures with large black eyes.,闪亮登场句式,Going/Coming/out be(is/am/are/was/were)a,()()(括号里填形容词),person with+n.,Coming out is,a,beautifully-dressed,graceful,slender,woman with,a pair of phoenix eyes and willow leaf like eyebrows.Her ready to burst into laughter red lips speak of her authority and her rosy cheeks talk of her beauty.,Standing inside were lots of white-skinned,strange-looking creatures with large black eyes.,闪亮登场句式,Going/Coming/out be(is/am/are/was/were)a,()()(括号里填形容词),person with+n.,Coming out is,a,beautifully-dressed,graceful,slender,woman with,a pair of phoenix,eyes,and willow leaf like,eyebrows,.Her ready to burst into laughter red lips speak of her authority and her rosy cheeks talk of her beauty.,Standing inside were lots of white-skinned,strange-looking creatures with large black eyes.,闪亮登场句式,Going/Coming/out be(is/am/are/was/were),()()(填形容词),people with,+n,.,Coming out is,a,beautifully-dressed,graceful,slender,woman with,a pair of phoenix,eyes,and willow leaf like,eyebrows.,Her ready to burst into laughter red lips speak of her authority and her rosy cheeks talk of,her beauty.,Standing inside were lots of white-skinned,strange-looking creatures with large black eyes.,闪亮登场句式,Going/Coming/out be(is/am/are/was/were),()()(填形容词),people with,+n.,Coming out is,a,beautifully-dressed,graceful,slender,woman with,a pair of phoenix,eyes,and willow leaf like,eyebrows,.Her ready to burst into laughter red lips,speak of,her authority and her rosy cheeks,talk of,her beauty.,一语未了，只听外面一阵脚步响，丫鬟进来笑道：,“,宝玉来了！,”,黛玉心中正疑惑着：,“,这个宝玉，不知是怎生个惫（b,n）懒人物，懵懂顽童？,”,倒不见那蠢物也罢了。心中想着，忽见丫鬟话未报完，,已进来了一位年轻的公子：,头上戴着束发嵌宝紫金冠，齐眉勒着二龙抢珠金抹额；穿一件二色金百蝶穿花大红箭袖，束着五彩丝攒花结长穗宫绦(to)，外罩石青起花八团倭缎排穗褂；登着青缎粉底小朝靴。面若中秋之月，色如春晓之花，鬓若刀裁，眉如墨画，面如桃瓣，目若秋波。虽怒时而若笑，即瞋视而有情。项上金螭璎珞，又有一根五色丝绦，系着一块美玉。黛玉一见，便吃一大惊，心下想道：,“,好生奇怪，倒像在那里见过一般，何等眼熟到如此！,”,一语未了，只听外面一阵脚步响，丫鬟进来笑道：,“,宝玉来了！,”,黛玉心中正疑惑着：,“,这个宝玉，不知是怎生个惫（b,n）懒人物，懵懂顽童？,”,倒不见那蠢物也罢了。心中想着，忽见丫鬟话未报完，已进来了一位年轻的公子：,头上戴着束发嵌宝紫金冠，齐眉勒着二龙抢珠金抹额；穿一件二色金百蝶穿花大红箭袖，束着五彩丝攒花结长穗宫绦(to)，外罩石青起花八团倭缎排穗褂；登着青缎粉底小朝靴。,面若中秋之月，色如春晓之花，鬓若刀裁，眉如墨画，面如桃瓣，目若秋波。虽怒时而若笑，即瞋视而有情。,项上金螭璎珞，又有一根五色丝绦，系着一块美玉。,黛玉一见，便吃一大惊，心下想道：,“,好生奇怪，倒像在那里见过一般，何等眼熟到如此！,”,well-dressed,beautifully-dressed,fairly-dressed,decently-dressed,一语未了，只听外面一阵脚步响，丫鬟进来笑道：,“,宝玉来了！,”,黛玉心中正疑惑着：,“,这个宝玉，不知是怎生个惫（b,n）懒人物，懵懂顽童？,”,倒不见那蠢物也罢了。心中想着，忽见丫鬟话未报完，已进来了一位年轻的公子：,头上戴着束发嵌宝紫金冠，齐眉勒着二龙抢珠金抹额；穿一件二色金百蝶穿花大红箭袖，束着五彩丝攒花结长穗宫绦(to)，外罩石青起花八团倭缎排穗褂；登着青缎粉底小朝靴。,面若中秋之月，色如春晓之花，鬓若刀裁，,眉如墨画，,面如桃瓣，,目若秋波。虽怒时而若笑，即瞋视而有情。,项上金螭璎珞，又有一根五色丝绦，系着一块美玉。,黛玉一见，便吃一大惊，心下想道：,“,好生奇怪，倒像在那里见过一般，何等眼熟到如此！,”,spotless fairy skin,neat and clean hair,一语未了，只听外面一阵脚步响，丫鬟进来笑道：,“,宝玉来了！,”,黛玉心中正疑惑着：,“,这个宝玉，不知是怎生个惫（b,n）懒人物，懵懂顽童？,”,倒不见那蠢物也罢了。心中想着，忽见丫鬟话未报完，已进来了一位年轻的公子：,头上戴着束发嵌宝紫金冠，齐眉勒着二龙抢珠金抹额；穿一件二色金百蝶穿花大红箭袖，束着五彩丝攒花结长穗宫绦(to)，外罩石青起花八团倭缎排穗褂；登着青缎粉底小朝靴。,面若中秋之月，色如春晓之花，鬓若刀裁,，眉如墨画,，,面如桃瓣，,目若秋波,。虽怒时而若笑，即瞋视而有情。,项上金螭璎珞，又有一根五色丝绦，系着一块美玉。,黛玉一见，便吃一大惊，心下想道：,“,好生奇怪，倒像在那里见过一般，何等眼熟到如此！,”,below the dark eyebrows,there is a pair of watery eyes.,一语未了，只听外面一阵脚步响，丫鬟进来笑道：,“,宝玉来了！,”,黛玉心中正疑惑着：,“,这个宝玉，不知是怎生个惫（b,n）懒人物，懵懂顽童？,”,倒不见那蠢物也罢了。心中想着，忽见丫鬟话未报完，已进来了一位年轻的公子：,头上戴着束发嵌宝紫金冠，齐眉勒着二龙抢珠金抹额；穿一件二色金百蝶穿花大红箭袖，束着五彩丝攒花结长穗宫绦(to)，外罩石青起花八团倭缎排穗褂；登着青缎粉底小朝靴。,面若中秋之月，色如春晓之花，鬓若刀裁,，眉如墨画,，,面如桃瓣，,目若秋波,。,虽怒时而若笑，即瞋视而有情,。,项上金螭璎珞，又有一根五色丝绦，系着一块美玉。,黛玉一见，便吃一大惊，心下想道：,“,好生奇怪，倒像在那里见过一般，何等眼熟到如此！,”,wearing,a yesly-no/noly-yes,smile and expression,直击高考,She rode the rest of the way home(),a happy smile,with the money shed lost,earlier forgotten.(2008年 重庆完形填空),A giving,B wearing,C taking,D forcing,Standing inside were lots of white-skinned,strange-looking creatures with large black eyes.,闪亮登场句式,Coming out be(is/am/are/was/were)a()()(括号里填形容词)person with+n.,Coming out is,a beautifully-dressed,lad,with,spotless fair,skin,neat clean,hair.,Below his dark eyebrow there is a pair of watery eyes and on his face wears a yesly-no smile.,王熙凤,一语未了，只听后院中有人笑声，说：,“,我来迟了，不曾迎接远客！,”,黛玉纳罕道：,“,这些人个个皆敛声屏气，恭肃严整如此，这来者系谁，这样放诞无礼？,”,心下想时，只见一群媳妇丫鬟围拥着一个人从后房门进来。,这个人打扮与众姑娘不同，彩绣辉煌，恍若神妃仙子：头上戴着金丝八宝攒珠髻，绾着朝阳五凤挂珠钗；项上带着赤金盘螭（ch）璎珞圈；裙边系着豆绿宫绦，双衡比目玫瑰佩；身上穿着缕金百蝶穿花大红洋缎窄裉（k,n）袄，外罩五彩刻丝石青银鼠褂；下着翡翠撒花洋绉裙。,一双丹凤三角眼，两弯柳叶吊梢眉，,身量苗条，体格风骚，,粉面含春威不露，丹唇未启笑先闻,1.穿着,2.五官,3.身材,4.气质,贾宝玉,一语未了，只听外面一阵脚步响，丫鬟进来笑道：,“,宝玉来了！,”,黛玉心中正疑惑着：,“,这个宝玉，不知是怎生个惫（b,n）懒人物，懵懂顽童？,”,倒不见那蠢物也罢了。心中想着，忽见丫鬟话未报完，已进来了一位年轻的公子：,头上戴着束发嵌宝紫金冠，齐眉勒着二龙抢珠金抹额；穿一件二色金百蝶穿花大红箭袖，束着五彩丝攒花结长穗宫绦(to)，外罩石青起花八团倭缎排穗褂；登着青缎粉底小朝靴。,面若中秋之月，色如春晓之花，鬓若刀裁,，眉如墨画,，,面如桃瓣，,目若秋波,。,虽怒时而若笑，即瞋视而有情,。,项上金螭璎珞，又有一根五色丝绦，系着一块美玉。,黛玉一见，便吃一大惊，心下想道：,“,好生奇怪，倒像在那里见过一般，何等眼熟到如此！,”,1.穿着,2.面与发,3.眉与眼,4.性情,英文写作思维2：复杂的中文简单的中文,简单的英文适当复杂的英文,将文章内容划分层次,盐城市2009年高三第三次调研测试,古人云:笑福,开,来.微笑是和谐的开始.是沟通的通行证,;,可以冰释前嫌,;,可以舒缓窘境,;,可以感化灵魂,;,可以增加自信,;,可以增添魅力.,请你以微笑为主题，写一篇长为150字的文章。,盐城市2009年高三第三次调研测试,古人云:笑福,开,来.,微笑是和谐的开始.是沟通的通行证,;,可以冰释前嫌,;,可以舒缓窘境,;,可以感化灵魂,;,可以增加自信,;,可以增添魅力.,请你以微笑为主题，写一篇长为150字的文章。,1.主题句,As the old saying goes:happiness goes hand in hand with a smile.And smiles can help us in many ways.,盐城市2009年高三第三次调研测试,古人云:笑福,开,来.,微笑是和谐的开始.是沟通的通行证,;,可以冰释前嫌,;,可以舒缓窘境,;,可以感化灵魂,;,可以增加自信,;,可以增添魅力.,请你以微笑为主题，写一篇长为150字的文章。,2.促进人际关系和谐,盐城市2009年高三第三次调研测试,古人云:笑福,开,来.,微笑是和谐的开始.是沟通的通行证,;,可以冰释前嫌,;,可以舒缓窘境,;,可以感化灵魂,;,可以增加自信,;,可以增添魅力.,请你以微笑为主题，写一篇长为150字的文章。,3.促进个人魅力,的提升,全文范例：,As the old saying goes,happiness goes hand in hand with a smile.And smiles can help us in,bringing good personal ties with others,and,promoting ones spiritual well-being.,To begin with,a smile can ease a tense situation and eliminate misunderstaning between people,and thus making people open to each other and communicate with each other.In this way,individuals relation will be more harmonious and our society will become a better place.,What is more,a smile can inspire other people and boost your confidence,therefore makes you more attractive and charming.,Hence,as is mentioned above since smiles can bring us so many benefits to people,I call upon all of us smile to each other whenever we meet and wherever we are.It will definitely make the world a better place to be.,