2025年英语中考英语书面表达单元测试含解析1.doc

【英语】 中考英语书面体现单元测试(含解析)（word）1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心感动，存在于每个人心中。但诸多人缺乏不是感动，而是一种显示感动勇气。请为你身边人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据如下提醒要点，写一篇文章。
注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实人名及校名。
Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?

【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我要点赞人，接下来简介他状况，最终指出我从他身上学到东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面体现
伴随电子时代到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国老式文化传承面临着巨大挑战。有人认为学校应当开设老式文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设老式文化课见解。
Your opinion
necessary or unnecessary
Your reasons
the root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,
spread, develop
Your suggestion
…

Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Mike
【答案】Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.
First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.
All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!
Yours,
Mike
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设老式文化课见解。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了中国老式文化面对问题，接下来简介我认为开设老式文化课必要性原因，最终号召更多学校开设老式文化课。此处because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面体现
根据规定完毕短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定位置上。
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（lucky money）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？请结合自已实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：
1. 你压岁钱来源和用途；
2. 对合理使用压岁钱提议（至少 3 点）；
3. 呼吁大家节省用钱，把自已压岁钱用在最需要、最故意义地方。
【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.
【解析】
【详解】
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（luckymoney）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容体现出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文重要使用人称就是第一人称，时态为一般目前时态，注意谓语动词变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。
【点睛】
文章使用了很好短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

4．书面体现
假如你是李明，你英国笔友Jack来信问询你家乡与否有雾霾天气，状况怎样。请你按照如下提醒给他回一封e-mail。
内容如下：
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生多次雾霾天气；
2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气危害，正在采用多种措施减少其发生；
3. 你在平常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参照词汇：雾霾haze
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，信件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .
People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.
As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李明身份给自已英国笔友写信，告诉他有关家乡雾霾状况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提醒，来组织语言，充实内容。首先简介去年家乡雾霾状况严重；然后简介为减少雾霾人们采用了某些措施；最终简介一下你自已在平常生活中应当怎么做。因此文章应重要提成三段，一种内容一段。文章内容中论述状况不一，时态不能统一，根据体现需要使用对时态，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时，应注意英语句式体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，应从句子整体考虑，写完整句子，运用简单句基本句型，使用恰当词汇和短语。为提高文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯，体现流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文中作者根据题目规定简介了自已家乡治理雾霾状况，并结合自身实际状况，讲述了自已平常生活中是怎样做。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章构造清晰，提成了三段，每一段中心明确，意思体现清晰、明了。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，作者根据体现需要使用了一般过去时、一般未来时态和一般未来时态，动词形式变化精确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式体现符合英语习惯。句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了某些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中很好句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

5．书面体现
某英文报举行“家乡变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提醒，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。
过去
生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。
污染严重，垃圾遍地。
......（合适发挥一至两点）
目前
环境：政府采用措施来改善污染，都市变得越来越整洁。
生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多人有自已汽车；生活舒适。
交通：新飞机场已投入使用数年。be in use（投入使用）；
旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地游客。
未来
但愿……（两点）

规定：1. 短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并合适发挥，使短文连贯穿顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等有关信息。
Changes my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, _______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题，简介一下自已家乡这些年来发生变化。题目中用表格形式，给我们对比家乡过去和目前，我们应用对英语将这些内容体现出来，并对未来提出两点但愿。审题可知，作文基本框架和大概内容均有了，需要注意是在描写过去时候，需要合适发挥一到两点；尚有对未来但愿也需要学生自已发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合剪发挥，注意要与文章其他部分可以很好结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目规定，合情合理。体现时，需要注意英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译表格中语句，而应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇、短语和句型来体现。注意句式多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用，提高文章档次。语句之间注意使用合适连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者按照题目规定，简介了自已家乡这些年来变化。文章是按照时间次序，先简介了家乡过去面貌，这一部分使用了过去时态，谓语动词都变成了过去式，形式精确。然后是家乡目前样子，这里重要以一般目前时态为主。最终对家乡未来体现了自已愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整，论述清晰、条理，构造合理。文章中语言得体，语句通顺，句式体现符合英语习惯，语法规范、精确。短文里还使用了某些很好短语和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。

6． 书面体现
请将短文写在答题卡对应位置上。
一直以来，同学们对作业持有不一样观点。在你班主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”讨论，请你根据提醒和规定，并结合自已实际经验，刊登你观点。
Yes
No

Help us understand what we have learned；
Practice makes prefect；...

Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...

Your opinion：

规定：
1．80词以上。
2．文中不得出现真实人名、校名。
【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日作业究竟是不是必要。首先需要陈说正反两方面观点，另一方面结合自已实际经验，刊登自已观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑精确，注意对使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自已观点。
写作亮点：首先用一种自然段来阐明写作主题，体现出自已观点（认为作业是很必要），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样句型。另一方面，开始详细陈说观点，陈说时候要合适使用实例，有关用到短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little一点一点地。恰当谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。最终可以用说理方式来简介做作业必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我们技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了作者深度思考，总体来说杰出地完毕了既定写作任务。

7．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应当读什么样书，以及读书意义。
提醒词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提醒问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua

【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生倡议。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，写是阅读好处，时态采用是一般目前时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

8．上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。目前，请你根据下表用英语写一篇简介讨论状况短文。注意：
1.短文须包括写作提醒和表格中所列所有内容；
2.时态运用对，书写工整、规范；3.80-100词。生词提醒：electric adj.电
讨论成果
25人表达同意
35人不一样意
理由
1.这样很以便；2.能节省上学途中时间。
1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥挤，骑电动车也快不起来。

【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to
school.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could take
them less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe for
the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morning
the traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.
【解析】
试题分析：本题规定以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇80-100词左右英语短文，并且要做到体现清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文重要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一种要点都体现出来，不要遗漏任何一种，书写时一定注意时态对使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照规定至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯穿。并且要围绕主题合适发挥。
写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目规定，给我们简介了持不一样观点学生各自理由，构造清晰，要点全面。时态运用对，书写工整规范。该文中如下几种句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.论述各自观点时，理由也很充足。
考点：提纲类作文。

9．写作
某英文网站“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括如下要点:
1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do?
4. Why did it make him/her happy?
5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。
2.文中不得出现也许透考生真实身份任何信息。
【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.
In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunte