英语中考英语书面表达单元测试题含答案13.doc

【英语】 中考英语书面体现单元测试题 含答案（word）1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
我英语学习
初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多经验与措施，请你向你表弟简介你做法，根据下面表格中内容，按规定用英语写一篇短文，
多听
听收音机，听音乐等，可以放松......
多说
运用英语，增强能力与信心......
多读书
开阔视野，理解英语文化......
语法规则
更好地理解与运用......
写作
写写平常生活......
其他
......

规定：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法对，书写规范；
2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作合适发挥
3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数80－100。
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【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。而感慨句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句构造Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．书面体现
难忘初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“辞别初中生活”主题班会。假如你是班长，根据如下提醒，用英语写一则告知。要点如下：
1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容：
1） 对老师用话语体现谢意；2）与同学交流自已未来梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。
参照词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注：词数100左右，告知开头已拟好，不计入总数。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。而复杂单句构造In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．书面体现
假定你是李华，近来你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你英国朋友Peppa向你来信
问询讨论状况。请你用英语写封回信，简单简介如下讨论成果：
1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕
4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、
参照词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾
词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，向我英国朋友Peppa写信，简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行讨论状况。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头我要简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来简介我们为低碳生活可以做事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4． 近来一份学生体质健康调查成果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提醒内容，用英语写一篇短文，并刊登自已观点。
现 状
大概70%学生眼睛近视
重要原因
1. 睡眠局限性
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
防止措施
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成对用眼习惯
你观点
… ….（至少一条）

参照词汇：近视 shortsighted
规定：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
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【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干规定可知，本篇文章重要使用一般目前时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠局限性（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视措施：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成对用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应当理解保护眼睛重要性，尽最大努力保护我们眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。
常用重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

5．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据如下信息内容提醒，写一篇有关校园安全英语小短文。
提醒：1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
规定： 1. 语句通顺，体现精确，内容连贯；
2．短文可以合适发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提醒，可知本文重要从三个方面进行论述，注意围绕要点组织材料，合适发挥。根据材料内容确定重要句子时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。

6．书面体现
根据规定完毕短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定位置上。
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（lucky money）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？请结合自已实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：
1. 你压岁钱来源和用途；
2. 对合理使用压岁钱提议（至少 3 点）；
3. 呼吁大家节省用钱，把自已压岁钱用在最需要、最故意义地方。
【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.
【解析】
【详解】
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈压岁钱（luckymoney）。伴随生活水平提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该怎样管理自已钱，让自已钱用得更故意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容体现出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文重要使用人称就是第一人称，时态为一般目前时态，注意谓语动词变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。
【点睛】
文章使用了很好短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

7． 假如你是李华，你英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件体现了想参与你校暑期为外国学生举行汉语夏令营愿望，但愿你告知活动举行详细时间地点，活动安排以及你提议。
提醒词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare
提醒问题： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?
● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?
● What is your advice for Jack?

Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our
school this summer holiday .
.
Yours,
Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.
The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:
First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.
Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.
What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.
If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面体现，只给了某些要点提醒，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提醒都体现出来外，还要进行合适拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：该题规定写作体裁为书信格式，因此例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照原则书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般目前时和一般未来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提醒都已体现清晰，并进行了合适拓展，所给单词也都所有用上。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。
句型：被动句型，目前分词作状语，主语从句。

8．伴随网络发展、人们消费观念转变， 购物方式也在悄然发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据如下表格提醒，写一篇网上购物文章。
长处
（advantage）
1.不需要出门；节省时间；避免拥挤、劳累
2.价格一般比较廉价
3.可供选择范围广，品种多
缺陷
（disadvantage）
1.只看到图片， 看不到商品自身
2.容易购置大量不太需要东西， 导致挥霍
你观点
……

提醒词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
注意：1.所表述内容必须包含表格中所有方面，可合适发挥；
2.文中不能出现自已姓名和所在学校名称；
3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.
【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，重要讲述网购长处和缺陷。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
【亮点阐明】这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其合用某些亮点词句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
点睛：写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出、明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

9．根据规定完毕大作文，词数：80-100词．
丰富校本课程可以让你生活更精彩．请根据下图示中所提供特色课程，按内容及规定，用英文完毕写作．
内容包括：
1．Which course（s）do you like？
2．Why do you like it/them？
3．What can you learn from it/them？
写作规定：
1．根据你爱好选择课程（数量不限）；
2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实校名及姓名．

    Of all the courses，I like __________
________________．
【答案】例文
Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.
I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.
I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.
I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读。本题属于材料作文，重要讲述你喜欢学科、原因以及你从你选择学科中学到了什么。注意时态运用，灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。牢记不要遗漏要点。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀文章，很好地完毕了试题中所规定内容。条理清晰。前三段分别讲述他所喜欢学科（体育、剪纸和厨艺），并解释乐意以及收获，最终一段讲述这些学科对他生活意义。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放背面。
高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引导表语从句。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放背面等；然后紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间过渡，必要时可合适运用表达转折、因果、并列、比较等关系连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最终，要仔细