2025年英语九年级下册英语书面表达试题类型及其解题技巧及解析.doc

【英语】九年级下册英语书面体现试题类型及其解题技巧及解析

一、英语书面体现
1．亲爱同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有诸多感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右短文。
提醒：
1.个人基本状况简介
2.校园（校园洁净而漂亮，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,常常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
3.对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。
规定：
1. 文章包含以上提醒内容，合适发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介我初中生活。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我个人状况，接下来简介我们校园，老师和同学，最终对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．假定你是David，来自美国，你QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你理解有关这方面状况。请认真阅读下面邮件，并根据信中内容和实际用英语答复，可以有合适发挥。
To: davidwoodlandschool@
From: limingsunshineschool@
Subject: Volunteering
Dear David，
I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions?
●Why do you want to be a volunteer?
●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students?
●Do you have any problems with volunteering?
●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes，
Li Ming

注意：1.词数90左右。答复信开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;
2.答复中不得提及真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
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I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your
questions.
I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.
It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，简介暑假做志愿者状况。。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I'm glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到快乐，接下来简介我们可以从事志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来某些问题，最终我但愿你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．伴随社会发展，通讯方式从远古时代书信到当今互联网，经历着巨大变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具使用及见解。内容包括：
1. 你喜欢使用通讯方式有哪些？
2. 它们长处和缺陷是什么？
3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？
规定：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,
【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.
Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具使用及见解。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我喜欢使用通讯方式有哪些；接下来简介它们长处和缺陷是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最终呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组 组长，请根据下面表格中信息和提醒，为你组员 Tommy 进行综合素质评价，写一 份素质汇报．
Name
Tommy
Characteristics
聪颖、大方（各举一例）
Hobbies
喜欢看书，认为看书有诸多好处（请列举 2 个好处）
Honour
他在家协助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举 一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student）
Problems
面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足睡眠．
Your suggestions
（根据实际状况提 2 点提议）…

规定：1、体现清晰、语法对、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有有关信息，并作合适发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等
Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.
I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.
【解析】
这篇作文规定我们按照表格里内容简介一下Tommy状况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质评价汇报。在表格中有非常详细有关Tommy各方面内容，我们需要用对英语把这些内容有条理体现出来。表格中波及内容较多，写作时要注意体现条理性。这篇作文应重要使用第三人称来写。在最终要给Tommy提某些提议，这一部分应当用第一人称。同步注意体现精确性，尤其是表格中第五项和第六项内容。
【亮点阐明】这是一篇比较优秀范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中所有内容，没有遗漏要点。体现精确，注意了被动形式使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清晰。短文注意到了长短句结合，并恰当使用了某些连词，使文章体现连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

5．为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀老式文化, 某双语杂志将举行征文活动来简介中国经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一种选题。请你根据下面内容提醒, 用英语写一篇短文参与此活动。
内容提醒：
1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口
2. 通过简介这个故事, 刊登你见解或者观点。
规定：
1. 可以合适增长细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.
2. 不得在作文中出现学校真实名称、老师和同学真实姓名。
【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，重要简介中国经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目是宣传和弘扬中华优秀老式文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词过去式。作文要包含材料上所有信息，通过简介这个故事，刊登见解或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

6． 朋友是我们生活构成部分，他们总是在我们最需要协助时候陪伴我们。你最佳朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们友谊？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据如下提醒写一篇英语短文。
1. 简要简介你最佳朋友外貌和性格;
2. 简介和你朋友之间发生一件令人难忘事；
3. 你是怎样看待你们之间友谊
规定：
1. 语句连贯穿顺，文章衔接紧密
2. 词数80-100
3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.
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【答案】My best friend
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.
My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.
I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.
I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：这是一种提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目规定可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般目前时和一般过去时。我们要做就是用对英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表构造，注意主谓一致关系。简介发生一件难忘事情，要用到一般过去时态。此外在写作时可以合适使用某些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。
【点睛】
人物简介是记叙文中常见一种写作类型。内容可以是简介自已也可以简介他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、爱好爱好，有时也可以包括平常活动。时态为一般目前时态。在简介长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种衣服”来简介某人穿戴。用be good at doing sth.来简介专长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来简介某人最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。

7．假如你是李华，你美国朋友Jack热爱中国唐诗宋词。近来他对母亲节你在博客里发《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感爱好，给你写信想理解该诗，请你根据如下提醒给他回信：
1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱伟大
注意：
1.文中不得出现你真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.
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Yours,
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.
If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。
【详解】
根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般目前时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。
英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：交代写信目——朋友Jack热爱中国唐诗宋词。我将给你简介《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。
第二部分：文章主体部分——详细简介《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。
1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱伟大
第三部分：信结语——假如对方有任何问题，可以继续问自已，并期待收到对方来信。

8．书面体现
我校决定让学生轮番打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强烈反响，请你把下列不一样意见整理成一篇书面材料，汇报给学校。
同意 ：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。
2．学生应当学会做艰苦工作。
3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人劳动。
不一样意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。 2．不是学生应当做事情。 3．打扫教室就足够了。
注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。 生词提醒：respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.
【解析】
【详解】
阅读题干规定，这是一篇见解类作文，那么首先得点明讨论话题，然后分别写出不一样人群对此事见解，时态以一般目前时为主。
重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth协助某人做某事；get sick生病。
亮点句型：
（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场剧烈争论。目前完毕时（have/has+done）。
（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习怎样做困难工作好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。

9．书面体现
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”
----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”
----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克救赎》
“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”
----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。因此在学习和生活中，我们要满怀但愿、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自已观点。
要点提醒：
1.有自已目，并努力让它成为现实；
2.勤奋学习，使自已不停强大；
3.对面对困难，积极参与社会活动；
4.补充自已观点。
写作规定：
1.文中必须包含所有提醒要点，可合适发挥使行文连贯；
2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等有关信息。
Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
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【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot fro