2025年英语初中英语英语书面表达汇编试题和解析及解析.doc

（英语） 初中英语英语书面体现汇编试题(有答案和解析)及解析

一、中考英语书面体现汇编
1．（·黑龙江中考模拟）假如你是吴浩，你父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。你们准备坐飞机去，请你给旅行社写封电子邮件，征询有关航班，酒店和旅游景点状况。留下你电话，以便旅行社和你联络。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Wu Hao
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help.
Best wishes!
Wu Hao
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于应用文体，向旅行社问询去北京航班、酒店以及旅游景点。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

2．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提醒，完毕一篇不少于50词文段写作。文中已给出内容不计人总词数。所给提醒词语仅供选用。请不要写出你校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华，明天下午2:00你要去参与“老式文化才艺展示”活动，因此不能上英语课。请用英文给你们外教John写一张请假条，告诉他你要去干什么，为何要参与这个活动以及你保证准时完毕作业。
提醒词语:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help
提醒问题:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?
Why will you take this activity?
How will you finish your homework?

Dear John,
I'm sorry to ask for absence from your English lesson.__________________
______________________________________________________________
Your loring student
Li lHua

题目②
一位好老师，胜过万卷书。在你初中生活中，一定会有一位老师给你留下了深刻印象。
某英文网站正在开展以“Thank you, my teacher”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，让更多人认识你老师，同步体现你对他/她感谢之情。重要内容包括: 哪位老师给你留下了深刻印象，发生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想对他/她说些什么。
提醒词语：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress
提醒问题：Which teacher impressed you most?
What happened to make you impressed?
What do you want to say to him/her?
Thank you,my teacher
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】题目一：
Dear John,
I'm sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I'm going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.
In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.
I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.
Your loring student
Li Hua

题目二：
Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.
last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.
I really want to say"Thank you for helping me. I love you!" to my English teacher.
【解析】
【详解】
、
题目①
本文是一篇应用文，作文规定写一张请假条，因此格式要遵照假条格式。假条内容——时间和事由均给出，结合提醒问题可知假条重要从三个方面写，这三个方面需要作者自由发挥一部分内容。
本例文是一篇应用文，人称为第一人称，时态是以一般未来时为主。例文提成三段，根据提醒问题，每段成一行，这种写法条理清晰，分段明确。
高分亮点：ask for；absence from；一般未来时；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。
题目②
题目二是一篇话题作文，根据话题可知这是一篇感谢老师文章。人称应当为第一人称。注意给出提醒问题，文章要包含这三部分内容。
本例文以第一人称书写，时态重要是一般过去时和一般目前时。文章第一段简介“我”要感谢老师，第二段用一般过去时简介为何“我”要感谢老师，第三段体现 “我”感谢。分段明确，语句简洁不啰嗦，时态运用合理。
高分亮点：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；目前完毕时；want to do sth。

3．（·扬州市江都区第三中学中考模拟）毕业之际，学校规定每位九年级学生给各自家长写封信，简要汇报三年来初中生活收获与存在问题。假如你是Jim,请根据下表提醒，用英文做一种简短汇报。
收获
1. 学到诸多知识…
2. 学会了与人相处：在校...,在家…
3. 遇到困难时…
存在问题
学习压力…
目前想法
1. 感谢 2…

规定：
（1）：体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
（2）：必须包括提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥；
（3）：不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
（4）：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,
I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Jim
【答案】例文Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,
I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it.
However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.
I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.
Yours sincerely
Jim
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文。在毕业之际，学校规定每位九年级学生给各自家长写封信，简要汇报三年来初中生活收获与存在问题。假如你是Jim，规定根据表格提醒内容，用英文做一种简短汇报。首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现；然后紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，注意连句成篇，保持文章连贯性，要层次清晰，要点分明，中心突出。同步要注意语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯；尽量使用自已熟悉单词句式，最佳不要写太长复合句；尽量选用简单易拼写单词，保证对率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最终要细心复核检查，保证对无误。

4．（·四川中考模拟）旅行是学习最佳方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题，根据如下思维导图提醒，写一篇短文，并刊登你见解。
注意：
1. 要点齐全，合适发挥；
2. 从思维导图Sayings部分，选择恰当格合理运用在短文中；
3. 词数：100词左右；

【答案】例文
Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one of the best ways，learn much，an exact picture of，a careful observer，seeing is believing，no matter，a lot等。而非谓语动词构造Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends.和If you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

5．（·天津中考模拟）手机在生活中饰演着越来越重要角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔，例如你好友Miller.请根据如下提醒点写一篇短文：
1. 去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，并且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；
2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦急；
3. 昨天还由于走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；
4. 你提议……
参照词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦急be crazy about对……入迷规定：
1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，合适发挥
Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was

【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.
In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现；再紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作，可合适发挥。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章连贯性，要层次清晰，要点分明，中心突出。同步要注意语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯；尽量使用自已熟悉单词句式，最佳不要写太长复合句；尽量选用简单易拼写单词，保证对率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最终要细心复核检查，保证对无误。

6．（·江苏中考模拟）书面体现
你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校利和弊；读走读学校利和弊；你选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容反复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥。
A hoarding school or a day school
We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________
【答案】
We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.
If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.
As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校选择。第二段要写详细论述读寄宿学校利弊；读走读学校利弊。第三段要表述作者自已选择和理由。
【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些规定？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？阐明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定期态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用合适句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落构造句型及关键词句完毕文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增长了文章亮点。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

7．（·北京中考模拟）年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京楷模优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充足体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做意义。
提醒词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提醒问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，详细写出怎样做以及这样做意义。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，人称用是第一人称复数形式，时态重要用是一般目前时，描述详细怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。
句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

8．（·山东初三）

你懂得 年最受欢迎、最新潮健身方式是什么吗？“Plogging”，一边捡垃圾，一边慢跑， 正逐渐走进我们生活。拾荒（clean up trash）、慢跑 （jog），不仅增进环境卫生，并且有益身体健康，可谓一举两得。
请结合自已平常生活经历，用英语写一篇 100 词左右短文。
内容包括：1、身体力行，保护环境事例；坚持锻炼，增强体质事例。
2、结合事例，谈谈你对目前最环境保护运动方式 （plogging） 认识，以及怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国践行者。
注意：1、可以围绕主题，根据规定，进行合适发挥。
3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。

【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my community. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，规定结合自已平常生活经历，谈谈你对目前最环境保护运动方式 （plogging） 认识以及怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国践行者。
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文规定以第一人称，谈谈自已对目前最环境保护运动方式 （plogging） 认识以及结合自已平常生活经历，谈谈怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国践行者；陈说现阶段事情用一般目前时。书写时要注意题干所给提醒材料，成文时要文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文构造严谨，层次分明。开篇紧紧围绕主题，简介自已最喜欢运动是跑步；正文部分顺理成章简介plogging这种运动方式以及自已怎样身体力行地做到锻炼、环境保护两不误；结尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.点题，总结全文。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .
高分句型：
1.I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. 2.Plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running .
3.Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river；
4.To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.
【点睛】
本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题，确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般目前时）；关注题材格式（记叙文），注意文章篇章构造；书写时要紧紧围绕主题，做到中心突出，内容完整、连贯；成文后要检查人称、时态与否一致、单词拼写与否对、短语和句式使用与否得当。

9．（·徐州市西苑中学中考模拟）书面体现
一日之计在于晨。同学们，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上学路上，当我们有充足时间安排一天学习生活时，你会发现每天早起一点点会给我们带来许多好处。请你以“ It’s good to get up early”为题，写一篇90词左右短文。
规定：
1. 包含所给信息，并合适发挥。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写整洁。
3. 词数90词左右。开头已给，不计入总词数。

It’s good to get up early
Getting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.
______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】It’s good to get up early
Getting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh