2025年英语英语中考英语书面表达20附带答案解析1.doc

【英语】 英语中考英语书面体现20(附带答案解析)1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1． 近来一份学生体质健康调查成果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提醒内容，用英语写一篇短文，并刊登自已观点。
现 状
大概70%学生眼睛近视
重要原因
1. 睡眠局限性
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
防止措施
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成对用眼习惯
你观点
… ….（至少一条）

参照词汇：近视 shortsighted
规定：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
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【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干规定可知，本篇文章重要使用一般目前时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠局限性（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视措施：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成对用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应当理解保护眼睛重要性，尽最大努力保护我们眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。
常用重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

2．（B）根据规定完毕大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生共同爱好.请根据下面提醒写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 短文,应当包含如下要点:
1,学生参与体育运动爱好不一样,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自已.
3.男孩参与各项体育运动,但愿运动能使自已更强健.
4.女孩也喜欢运动，但愿运动使自已减肥和保持健康,苗条.
5.你对运动观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自已名字和学校名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.
8.参照词语:keep slim （保持苗条）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作重要是谈论自已对运动观点和见解，应当用一般目前时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动不一样见解及原因。2.详细分析（多数学生观点、男生观点、女生观点）。3.提出自已对运动观点。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好地完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

3．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列要点写一篇100词左右文章（文章开头已给出）。

学会对自已微笑

1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试败北、被他人误解等）。
2、使你自信，击败你人有时就是你自已。
3、有益于身心健康。

学会对他人微笑

1、便于与他人之间交流。
2、给他人带来快乐,自已也快乐。

微笑是一种语言

人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

1、参照词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand
2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯穿顺。
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
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【答案】Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”
Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.
【解析】
这是一篇表格式作文，要点是一表格形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要体现要点，然后加以整合，也可以合适增长使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能遗漏。写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语影响，要用地道英语体现，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，合适用复杂句。可以用某些高级词汇。还要注意句子关联。

4．书面体现（原创）
今年春节，诸多人加入了抢红包游戏，但也有人表达担忧。学校英语校刊《英语天地》对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就本次调查成果进行总结，并谈谈你自已观点。

Grabbing red packets on line
Agreement
（75%）
1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun
2.bring people closer, make more friends
Disagreement
（25%）
spend too much time.
not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely

Your opinion
1.
2.

提醒词：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文章应包括题中所提所有要点，可合适发挥，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中请勿提及你真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
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【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonely
Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.
【解析】这篇作文规定我们对学校进行有关春节抢红包这件事调查成果进行总结，并谈谈自已对这件事情见解。题目中给出了一种表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏人们观点以及反对这个游戏人们观点和理由，只给了某些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用对英语体现出来，并使文章内容愈加丰富、完整。最终还要加上自已见解。因此文章内容应重要包括三部分：支持人们理由；反对者们理由；自已见解，可以提成两段或者三段来论述，这样可以使文章构造清晰，有层次。写作时，应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体构造出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提高文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、体现流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整、构造清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出，因此了文章话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏人们各自理由；第三段中作者刊登了自已见解。另一方面短文中语言得体，句式精确，符合英语体现习惯。文章以一般目前时态为主，尤其注意了谓语动词对形式，语法规范、精确。短文中使用了较丰富句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。文章中也出现了某些语法上小错误，总来说，不影响整篇文章质量。

5．共享单车自从在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给二十一世纪英文报写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
随地可见，出行以便
有益健康，减少污染
费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
未及时归还
占道挡路
你观点
我认为------

参照词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，规定给英文报社写一篇投稿，简介对共享单车见解。作文应包括4个重要内容，一种是社会现实状况，第二个长处，第三是存在问题，最终刊登个人观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并合适发挥。要注意上下文连贯，将这些内容有机连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用某些好句型和短语，注意对时态和语态以及谓语动词形式，还需要注意英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，让整篇短文体现流畅。

6．自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生到处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信重要性，分享一次使你愈加自信经历，并说说我们怎样愈加自信。
提醒词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提醒问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供所有信息。灵活运用多种句式，采用不一样体现方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力争精确，简洁。最终必须认真查验与否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等运用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同步语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错范文。

7． 中国老式文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国老式文化活动。某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国老式文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，简介你校上周举行“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你收获与感受。
提醒词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient
提醒问题： ● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?
● What did you learn from the activity?
● What do you think of it?
【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.
In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.
I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面体现，只给了某些要点提醒，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提醒都体现出来外，还要进行合适拓展，使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来论述讲成语故事活动；由于活动已经举行，因此时态采用一般过去时；对参与活动过程描写完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。
句型：被动句型。

8．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应当读什么样书，以及读书意义。
提醒词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提醒问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua

【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生倡议。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，写是阅读好处，时态采用是一般目前时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

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