英语中考英语书面表达技巧和方法及练习题.doc

【英语】中考英语书面体现技巧和措施完整版及练习题

一、英语书面体现
1．近年来，各大都市雾霾（haze）状况越来越严重，整个国家空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气污染。
要点提醒：
（1）我国空气污染现象。（至少写2点）
（2） 空气污染产生原因。（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染措施。（至少写2点）
规定：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（2） 文中不能出现自已姓名和所在学校名称。
Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中有关信息简介一下整个国家空气污染状况。所提供材料中列举了近年来，各大都市雾霾（haze）状况越来越严重，重要从空气污染现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去简介。时态为一般目前时。注意作文中必须包含材料上所有信息，并合适发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用我们熟悉句子或短语。语法要对，体现要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系，体现具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最佳步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表达最佳，背面跟动词原形，take a bus表达乘公共汽车。
【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用是动词ing形式。

2．书面体现
难忘初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“辞别初中生活”主题班会。假如你是班长，根据如下提醒，用英语写一则告知。要点如下：
1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容：
1） 对老师用话语体现谢意；2）与同学交流自已未来梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。
参照词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注：词数100左右，告知开头已拟好，不计入总数。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。而复杂单句构造In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．书面体现
初三学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提醒，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”短文，简介九年级学校生活，并提出但愿和提议。
在校
老师
工作认真负责，充斥爱心
学生
…… （至少发挥两点）
周末
作业
作业多．舍弃爱好
其他活动
锻炼，电视
愿望
…… （发挥一到两点）

规定：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供所有信息，并合适发挥：
2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.
As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.
At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4． 诚信是中华民族老式美德，也是社会主义关键价值观内容之一。而你朋友Daming近来却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，不过他却由于在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；2、谈谈自已见解，并给Daming某些提议。
注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实校名和人名；
4、文章开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【答案】The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【解析】
【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺事情，谈自已见解。信守承诺是中华民族老式美德，在写作过程中，注意文章构造，先写出大明和玲玲之间事情，然后再说自已对此见解。
【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者观点，大明是出错了。然后仔细论述了事情发生通过。接下来说出自已对此事件见解，不信守承诺会导致失去他人信任，对大明提议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。
【点睛】
文章构造清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自已观点，然后论述事情，提出自已观点和提议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了某些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章愈加通顺。

5．（B）根据规定完毕大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生共同爱好.请根据下面提醒写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 短文,应当包含如下要点:
1,学生参与体育运动爱好不一样,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自已.
3.男孩参与各项体育运动,但愿运动能使自已更强健.
4.女孩也喜欢运动，但愿运动使自已减肥和保持健康,苗条.
5.你对运动观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自已名字和学校名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.
8.参照词语:keep slim （保持苗条）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作重要是谈论自已对运动观点和见解，应当用一般目前时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动不一样见解及原因。2.详细分析（多数学生观点、男生观点、女生观点）。3.提出自已对运动观点。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好地完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

6．近来，美国总统特朗普外孙女由于说一口流利中文而成为“网红”。你美国朋友Sam 看过有关报道之后也很想学好中文,不过不懂得该怎样做。假如你是大明，请你根据如下提醒写一封邮件给他,提某些有关怎样学好汉语提议。
要点提醒 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要胆怯出错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下常常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看某些中文语言类节目;
4.常常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。
注意 :
1.词数80-100;
2.可合适增长细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人有关信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours
Daming
【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions.
First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours,
Daming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以大明身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他怎样学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了提议。通过审题可知，这是规定写一封提议信，内容应包括如下几种方面：首先应和Sam先做一种交流，然后引出写信目；接下来给出详细提议，根据题目中给出这四条，用对英语体现出来，还应注意补充某些内容，使文章愈加充实；最终写一种合适结尾，如但愿提议对你有协助等。文章应使用一般目前时，根据体现需要使用恰当人称。写作时应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体构造考虑，写完整句子。如可以较常见主谓宾构造或主系表构造为主，简单句句型可以使文章论述清晰、简洁。为提高文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他某些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文章意思连贯，体现流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定给Sam写了一封信，对他汉语学习提出了某些好提议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中规定所有信息。文章重要提成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并简介写信目；第二段中是提出详细提议，这是这篇文章主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，论述条理、有层次；最终一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。另一方面短文使用了对时态和人称，句式构造符合英语体现习惯。语法规范、精确，用词得体。文章中语句以简单句构造为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章构造。文章中使用了较为丰富短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

7．共享单车自从在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给二十一世纪英文报写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
随地可见，出行以便
有益健康，减少污染
费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
未及时归还
占道挡路
你观点
我认为------

参照词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，规定给英文报社写一篇投稿，简介对共享单车见解。作文应包括4个重要内容，一种是社会现实状况，第二个长处，第三是存在问题，最终刊登个人观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并合适发挥。要注意上下文连贯，将这些内容有机连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用某些好句型和短语，注意对时态和语态以及谓语动词形式，还需要注意英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，让整篇短文体现流畅。

8．题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做，以及你感受。
提醒词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提醒问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提醒写一篇自已在初中生活中坚持做事；文中写明自已是怎么做并谈谈自已感受。
【详解】
1.本篇规定根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自已坚持做一件事，根据提醒，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般目前时。书写时要紧紧围绕主题，文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自已坚持做事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自已起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到目前比此前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自已影响；文章构造清晰，前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了诸多短语和重点句型。例如：固定搭配、