《中考英语专题复习——书面表达》课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,2010,年 满 分 作 文,Writing,中考英语专题复习,书面表达,建设路学校 胡优佳,2009,年中考书面表达：,给,Harry,写一封,E-mail,向他介绍我国主要传统节日的情况，并告诉他你最喜欢的节日以及喜欢的理由。,2010,年中考书面表达：,给,Josh,写一封,E-mail,就如何和父母相处向他说明你的看法和建议。,2011,年中考书面表达：,给,Daniel,写一封邮件，先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点，然后说说你自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由。,说明文,说明文：,英语说明文从结构上看大致可分为三个部分：,第一部分一般是文章的第一段，提出文章的主题，也就是说，,阐述、说明文章的主要内容,；第二部分是文章的主体，可由若干个段落组成，,对文章的主题进行展开说明,；第三部分是结尾段，,对文章的主题作归纳总结,。,在英语中，常见的用来展开文章主题的方法有下列几种：,1,）,.,罗列法（,listing,）,:,常用,first,，,second,，,and finally,加以罗列说明。,2,）,.,举例法（,examples,）,:,常用,for example,，,for instance,，,still another example is,等词语引出。,3,）,.,比较法（,comparison and contrast,）：分为比较相同点（,comparison,）和比较不同点（,contrast,）两种方法。,4,）,.,定义法（,definition,）,:,定义法的基本要素是定义句。例：,English is a language that is used widely in the world.,5,）,.,顺序法（,sequence of time,，,space and process,）：比如按照时间顺序介绍一个科学家的生平，用空间顺序阐述逐渐开发西部的重要意义，用过程顺序法解释葡萄酒的生产过程等等。,6,）,.,分类法（,classification,）：分类法是将写作对象进行分类说明的一种写作手法。,书面表达五步曲四“,K”,和一“,B”,看,（,Look,）,想,（,Think,）,列,（,Rank,）,连,（,Link,）,美,（,Beautify,）,看图片、,图表、,题目要求,想主题、,涉及内容、,语态,列词汇、,短语、,句型结构,用关联词,连接成句，,完成文章,用五星语言、,相关语句,丰富美化文章,Look,Step 1:,Whats the topic?,Campus,Safety,校园安全,Think,Step 2:,Food Hygiene,食品卫生,Student Injuries,学生伤害,Which aspects,（方面）,are about the Campus Safety?,Traffic Safety,交通安全,Fire Safety,消防安全,Rank,Step 3:,should do,cant do,Traffic Safety,Fire Safety,Food Hygiene,Student Injuries,should do,cant do,1.obey the traffic rules,2.walk on walk side,3.look around when cross the zebra,4.walk downstairs in line,1.play football on the road,2.run through red lights,3.ride bikes in the school,4.run fast and chase each other in the hallway,Traffic safety,should do,cant do,1.learn the knowledge of fire,2.understand the fire escape,（火灾逃生）,1.play with fire,2.burn leaves,paper and other things on campus,3.touch the,electricity,with your fingers,Fire safety,should do,cant do,1.wash your hands before eating,2.eat clean and healthy food,3.have a balanced diet,4.keep away from smoking and drugs,1.drink,smoke and eat junk food,2.use the plastic bag to hold the food,Food Hygiene,should do,cant do,1.obey the school rules,2.get on well with others and be polite to others,3.go home at once after school,4.report to the teacher or call 110/120 if youre in danger,1.fight with others,2.climb the windows,3.go swimming alone,4.play outside,5.talk to the strangers,Student injuries,关联词,Link,Step 4:,1.,表示并列或递进,:,and,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor,2.,表示选择,:,or,eitheror,3.,表示转折,:,but,however,though,after all,4.,表示因果,:,because,so,5.,表示条件,:,if,7.,表示解释,:,for example,for instance,such as,8.,表示顺序,:,firstly,first(of all),second,next,later,finally,in the end,9.,表示强调,:,also,besides,whats more,in fact,10.,表示结论,:,in a word,任选某一方面，选用适当关联词连接短语，写二至三句话的一小段文字。,常用,Beautify,Step 5:,（,Its much dangerous for us to,对我们来说,是非常危险的。）,3,、,We cant go swimming alone after school or on holidays.,Its much dangerous for us to go,swimming alone after school or on holidays.,2,、,We cant drink,smoke or have drugs.,1,、,We should,ask the teachers forhelp,when we have troubles.,五星语言：,五星语言：,五星语言：,（,What we should do is,我们应该做的是,）,（,We must stay away from,我们必须远离,）,We must stay away from,drinking,smoking or having drugs.,What we should do is,to,ask the teachers forhelp,when we have troubles.,中考英语作文话题,:,构建平安校园,集体生活人人要遵纪守规，建设平安校园，安全你我他。谈谈你是如何做的？,写作要求：,（,1,）条理清晰，用词准确,书写规范。,（,2,）适当发挥，,80,词左右。,参考词汇：,obey,遵守,chase,追赶，,fight,打架，,keep away from,远离，,pay attention to the traffic,注意交通安全。,例文：,School is our home,we are all live and study here.In order to make ourselves safe,we should obey the school rules.First of all,we should go to school on time and be never late.,Meanwhile,we must pay attention to the traffic,，,obey the traffic rulers on the way to school.,In the school,we shouldnt chase,（追）,each other in the hallway or fight with others;We shouldnt climb the windows,either.,Whats more,when you have troubles,you may ask the teachersforhelp.Especially,when you meet someone ask for money,youd better to report to the teacher or call 110/120.,In a word,I hope we have a good time everyday!,Life is like a candle,you dont cherish it,it will disappear.,生命就像一支蜡烛，你不珍惜它，它就会消失不见。,What is the most precious in life,is safe.,生活中最珍贵的是什么，是平安。,Homework:,书面表达,越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的短文,(80,字左右,),内容包含：,1.,遵守交通规则，如走人行道,/,过斑马线。,2.,别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。,3.,劝父母不能酒后驾车。你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。参考词汇：,sidewalk,人行道,zebra-crossing,斑马线,Thanks for listening!,See you!,谢谢,本课件由,提供,