初三中考-writing省名师优质课赛课获奖课件市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢您,Writing,第1页,中考英语作文评分标准,第2页,Standard,1.包含全部关键点（人物，时间，地点，内容，目标等等）,2.不能逐字翻译汉字提醒，适当发挥，内容详细，丰富,3.词汇，句型丰富，行文流畅，几乎没有语法错误,4.字迹清楚，整齐，大小写分明，标点符号使用正确。,第3页,英语写作必备 九字真言,整齐,三段论,套话,翻译,第4页,第5页,整齐、洁净,fall in love at first sight,阅卷老师一天要批阅？份试卷,印象分数很主要,假如你写作文整齐、洁净，,你英语书法又很漂亮，即使有一些语法错误也会得到不错分数。,第6页,三段论,中考最流行结构就是三段式,记叙文：背景起因、经过、结果启发、感悟,议论文：观点分析总结,说明文：提及事物描述事物总结,书信：提及话题讨论话题结语,看图作文：背景起因、经过结果,第7页,套话:,通常指逻辑词和习惯表示。,WHY,帮助拓展思维，让逻辑清楚,又能增加写作字数，简化英语写作,first，second，third，finally firstofall,inthesecondplace,whatismore,书信中惯用,“gladtoreceiveyouletter.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou”等等。,第8页,假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你美国朋友Jack来信向你问询讨论情况，请你用,英语,写封回信，简单参考,作文,地带介绍以下讨论结果：,1.节水节电；,2.垃圾分类；,3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；,4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。,参考,词汇,：低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue,手帕handkerchiefs,第9页,参考范文：,Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it.,We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life.,First,wed better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet.Saving water,also,matters much.,Besides,we should sort out the rubbish,hoping that we might recycle some,which will surely benefit us a great deal.,In addition,we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down.,More importantly,when we go out,walking,riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice,which contributes to a cleaner world.,第10页,翻译,实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!任何题型英语作文都能够用翻译技巧整理出要表示关键点，然后填充到三段论和套话组成模式中去。,了解关键点翻译关键点扩充句子写作整理，就是内容不丢分四大步骤。,第11页,假如你是Tony Li ，在英国一所中学就读大约一年，需要找一位家庭教师，条件要求以下表所表示，请你像你老师Mr.Roger Fike写一份邮件，请他帮忙。,性别，年纪，外貌,女，,20-25,岁，漂亮,职业,中小学英语老师或大学生,性格,热心助人，有耐心,兴趣,读书，旅游,专长,说标准英语，熟悉英国历史，地理,要求：1.文体格式正确，信息完成，内容合理2.句子结构准确，篇章结构连贯，,字数不少于80个单词。3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。,提醒语：家庭教师：tutor 标准英语：standard English,第12页,Dear Mr.Fike,Ive been here for almost a year and I find the life is not easy for me.I think I need a tutor.Would you please help me fine one?,First,the tutor should,be a beautiful girl or woman,20-25 years old.,She can be either a,college student,or an English,teacher from middle school or primary school,.Second,I hope the tutor is,patient and helpful,who loves,reading and,tavelling.,Third,most importantly,she should be able to speak standard English and be familiar with the English history and geography.,With best regards,Tony Li,第13页,内功修炼,一、善于思索 勤于积累要想在中考作文中拿到高分，这需要考生在日常生活中善于观察，不能两耳不闻窗外事，而应主动关注当今社会热点，如人口问题、污染问题、世界和平等一系列现象；要善于思索，勤于把自己思想用英语正确地表示和统计下来，只有经过不停积累和磨练，才能练就良好写作基本功。提议大家在考前把今年相关重点问题，热点问题回顾一下。积累一些相关词汇，有备无患。,二、认真审题 写好提要考生在拿到试卷之后，当听力题做完，能够先看一看作文题目与类型，对它有一个大致印象和准备，在做语法和阅读题时对自己作文能有一个初步构思。应尽可能地留出20分钟时间来写作文。在正式写作文时，可参考以下步骤：1、认真审题，确定题目中关键词。2、展开一次“Brain Storm”即头脑风暴，对该题引申出各种联想和论点。3、依据自己已经有经验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握方面和论点来写作。4、确定基本写作时态，如记叙文通惯用普经过去时。（时态利用错误是考生们大量失分主要原因。）5、对于有能力同学，注意不能通篇均用简单句型，可适当引入初中语法重点如状语从句、宾语从句和被动语态等。这会使考生作文有质提升。6、当整篇作文写完，一定要进行仔细检验，注意使句子流畅，时态利用准确，单词拼写正确，冠词利用正确，名词大小写正确。,第14页,审题,Before outline you need to know whats the purpose you are writing,Explaining,Persuading,Telling a story,Describe,明确写作目标，确定文章体裁，人称，时态,第15页,outline,Brainstorming,Think in English,三段论,第16页,随堂练习outline,许多学习生活中烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更加好地发觉及处理同学们中存在心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure,Better Life为主题英语演讲比赛,请你准备讲话稿,谈谈你一些缓解压力好方法,与同学分享,内容包含:,同学们中普遍存在压力是什么；,我压力是什么；,我是怎样成功缓解我压力。,第17页,Less Pressure,Better Life,Hello,boys and girls!,Pressure is a serious problem in todays world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students cant get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.,Im always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.,Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.,Thats all.Thank you!,第18页,(二)应用文写作,应用文主要包含信函、电邮、日志、通知、广告、电话等形式，它要求考生不但能表示题中主要内容，还能够正确地利用各种文本格式进行规范书写，这也是考生对于英语传统文化了解多少反应。所以，考生应在临考前系统地复习各种文本格式以及规范用语，以做处处变不惊、百战百胜。,第19页,书信套话 开头部分：,How nice to hear from you again.,Let me tell you something about the activity.,Im glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.,Im pleased to hear that youre coming to China for a visit.,Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.,第20页,结尾部分：,With best wishes.,Im looking forward to your reply.,Id appreciate it if you could reply earlier.,第21页,NOTICE,开场白部分：,Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.,正文部分：,All the teachers and students are required to attend it.,Please take your notebooks and make notes.,Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups.,Please come on time and dont be late.,结束语部分：,Please come and join in it.,Everybody is welcome to attend it.,I hope youll have a nice time here.,Thats all.Thank you.,第22页,举例:,Q1:What are the important things in,your life?,Q2:Which one do you think is the most,important thing?,Q3:Why do you think so?,learning to be brave,learning to be confident are the important things in my life.,I think learning to share is the most important.,It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others.It also shows that we have the ability and willing to help others.,“Share”is another word for“exchange with each other”.,There are always many important things that may happen in our life.,Among them,As a famous saying goes“One flower makes no garden”,so we should learn to share with others.,(共90字),第23页,