英误专业四级作文模板+练习：环球时代学校版1.doc

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专四作文（一）
练笔题目

1． My Expectation of China’s Economy in 2010
In 2009, a most serious financial crisis in the past 80 years or so since the Great Depression of the early thirties of the 20th century swept the entire globe. However, China, a big emerging, developing nation, has made an economic rebound in the right direction at the teeth of the bitterly "economic cold storm" in a fairly-short period of time. What do you think of China’s economy in 2010?

2． On Drought / On the Haiti's Earthquake
A prolonged drought has left 240,000 people and 110,000 head of livestock without adequate drinking water in south China's Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, local authorities said Saturday. Faced with a natural disaster, what is your attitude?

3. A Successful 2010 Shanghai World Expo
The 2010 World Expo will be planned to hold in Shanghai. As We Chinese know, Shanghai is not only a major financial center in the East, but also a city of culture and the arts in China. What is your hope of its success?

4. On The Railway Peak Transport in China
A migrant worker rushes to catch his train at Beijing West Railway Station in Beijing, China, Jan. 20, 2010. The railway peak transport in Spring Festival season in Beijing started on Wednesday. Millions of Chinese will rush back home for the Spring Festival, China's Lunar New Year, which falls on Feb. 14 this year. What do you think of this special phenomenon in China?

5. On the Animal Protection
The experts who are drafting an Law of Anti-mistreat to animal in China.
According to the draft of this law by experts, eating dogs and cats will be illegal and those who violate it will be held in dentention. What do you think of this law?

6. The Construction of our Green Campus
7. What we need now is low-carbon lifestyles
Beginning this year, Chinese are determined to live a more environmentally friendly life - fewer flights, fewer drives, and fewer luxurious hotels. What do you think of our low-carbon lifestyles.

8. My view on a Multicultural Society
With economic globalization, the blending of different cultures has become inevitable trend of the time. Now China has been entering a multicultural society. What do you think of this issue?

小作文

1. 出题特点
（1）指导语明确（Directions），易于考生理解。英文指导语。
（2）场景留有空间，利于考生发挥。

2. 场景通常包括
（1）应聘信（求职信） （2）辞职信 （3）活动通知 （4）呼吁书
（5）建议信（6）批评信 （7）感谢信 （8）询问信 （9）备忘录
（10）报告 等等

3. 要求
（1）应用性短文，交际性强，实用性强，因此表达要得体（先说好，再说不好） （2）三段式写作。 （3）100字；格式。 （4）句式的套路

4. 分析一
内容得体性（考试不及格，写信安慰）
Example 1
I am sorry that I have learnt that you got 43 points in your final exam. This is really a low score for us students, but please do not worry too much about your failure. Everyone may encounter all kinds of failures and frustration in life. Study very hard and do not give up. I think next time you must succeed. （61字）

Example 2
I am sorry to have learnt that you did not do a good job in the final exam. I know you must be blue now. But that means nothing. You do not really have to think of if all the time. Just let it be. Be delight. I bet your will do it well next time. I am always with me. (61字)

分析二（从结构、句式、时态、词汇、格式等方面）
辞职信
Dear Mr. Wang,

Thank you very much for the opportunity and trust that you gave me 2 months ago. But unfortunately and regrettably, I am now writing to tell you that I will quit the job. I know this might bring you some trouble, and I would like to let you know the reason.

The job as editor of Designs and Fashions fails to provide me with so much chance of applying what I have learnt and does not carry such responsibility as I had expected. Also, two months has already passed, and I haven’t got as much pay as you originally promised me. Therefore, I have decided to quit. I hope you can understand.

I apologize to you once again if my decision poses any inconvenience to you. （126字）

Yours sincerely
Li Ming

分析
Para 1: （2<S<4）S=3
S1= Thank you (I am sorry)
S2= I am now writing to you or but
S3= I know this might do

Para 2: （3<S<5）S=4
S1=long sentence; seriousness, importance,解释关键点
S2=in addition, besides, also, 递进，进一步说
S3=CS: therefore, 总结一句或x 2

Para 3: （1<S<3）S=2
S1 or S2: 强调观点，客气表达，重复观点

（1）应聘信（求职信）
写一封应聘秘书工作的求职信。说明你为什么适合这个工作。

I am William Wordsworth, a graduate from the University of Beijing. I am writing to you to apply for the position of an effective secretary you advertised in China Daily yesterday.
To begin with, I have both the expertise and experience required of an effective secretary. I am from the Dept of Management, majoring in accounting and minoring in various subjects. And while studying, I worked part time as a secretary for several companies respectively thus having acquired the valuable experience. Besides, responsibility is my creed. Such an attitude enables me to leave no stone unturned in almost doing everything.
Your decision in my favor will be greatly appreciated and I would like to assure you that I won’t let you down. I am looking forward to hearing from you.（132字）

（2）辞职信
Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Design and Fashion. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use“Li Ming”instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

I am much grateful to be employed by you two months ago as an editor for your magazine Designs and Fashions. I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and other colleagues. The experiences will be unforgettable throughout my life.
However, as a young man whose primary interest is in computer science rather than fashion designing, I find my present job doesn’t fall in with my previous training and strength. I therefore decide to quit this job for something else that may conform to former preparation.
Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconveniences my leaving may incur. （100 words）

（3）活动通知
A Notification
The Student Union of your Dept is to hold a benefit fair in effort to raise a fund for children in poor underdeveloped areas of China. Write a notification to tell students to participate in actively.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (10 points)

In order to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken Northwestern part of China, the Students’ Union of the Dept of Law is scheduled to hold a benefit fair on Saturday. The efforts to be made are to support these children to continue their school education.
The procedure goes like this: from now on the student body is kindly asked to donate some of your items temporarily not used by you and that might be of some use to others, such as some school supplies and used textbooks. Donators are welcomed to our office, Room 101, Law Building with donations from 4 pm to 9 pm Monday through Friday.
At 9 AM this Saturday, the benefit fair will start at the conference room of the Dept. Interested students are welcomed to give donations and patronize our fair. And remember，all the money will go to the support of children. （151字）

（4）呼吁书 (Appeal）
1. 一个同学需要帮助，方法是募捐。
2. 募捐的程序。
3.号召同学参加。

In the course of fighting against illness, we humans have won one victory after another. However, we are still faced with certain diseases left unconquered. Leukemia is one of them. Liu Shuang, a student of Dept of law, is bearing this burden and she needs our support.
Since last May, she has been in hospital receiving all kinds of medical treatments. As you know, medical cost is so much that it is already far beyond the reach of her family with her father the only breadwinner. So she needs our donations. The procedure goes like this: from Monday through Friday, the Student Association will put on display a donation box at the students’ canteen at each meal hour.
Your small financial support can be a great help for a person in need. It will enable Liu Shuang to continue her treatment. Please give your hand.
（146字）

（5）建议信
给系学生会写一封信, 就一个以环保为主题的活动提出你的建议.
1. 你的建议 2. 你的理由

I am writing to you to express my suggestions on how we will proceed with an environment protection campaign.
Since our project is intended to enhance the environment awareness of general public, I suggest a clean-up to the Zhongshan Lake because it is closest to our university and particularly popular with tourists. Each day there is an estimated number of 2000 people visiting the place. If such an event is to be held there, and as we are collecting the trash, we can put up some posters and signs to show people what we are doing, of course we can attract a lot of people. This must be a good means to publicize the importance of environment conservation. （118字）

（6）批评信
假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等方面，提出你的意见。
A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I’m afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus.
First, the quality of the dishes should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year, they are the same. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day. Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food. Lastly, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood.
Those presented complaints are not just of my own, but also of many other students. We hope our respectable president will pay attention to them. （132 字）

（7）感谢信
找回丢失的钱包后写一封感谢信。
A thank- you note

Today I’m writing to you to thank you for what you have done for me. It is all the more remarkable of you to have returned my purse to the lost and found desk. I had your address from the attendant who showed me the form you filled in so that I know who you are and where you study.
You may say you have done just what you should and such a small thing is not worth mentioning. But the misplaced purse contained so many important things to me, not only such things as money and cards, but also something quite special, a photo of my parents and me. I so cherish it that I would like to lose anything else.
Finally, I’d like to say once again “thank you from the bottom of my heart.” （143字）

（8）询问信
给边远山区的一个孩子资助，写一封信询问情况并提出自己的想法。

I am writing to you to express my wish to offer financial assistance to a child in a remote area as my limited support for Project Hope. I wonder if you could do me a favor by helping me find a candidate.
I prefer to sponsor a girl at age 9 or 10 living in a remote mountain village in Liaoning Province, my home province. This girl should be a person who shows potentials for development yet cannot further her school education because of family poverty or other misfortunes.
As for my plan, I intend to offer per month 150 yuan to cover the girl’s living and school expenses until she graduates from high school. If she passes the university entrance examination, I will pay her four years’ tuition fee.
Please contact me as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. （149字）

（9）备忘录
货物退换备忘录
Memo
To: the secretary
From: the manager

We have decided to refund the customer who had purchased a flawed product from our company. Please write a letter to him informing him of our decision and arrange for him to get the refund.
Since the quality of our product and service is vital to the well-being of our company, any complaint from our customers must be heeded immediately. You did a fine job by telling me duly. Thank you. （71字）

（10）报告
Write a report showing that the typing machine is broken and applying for buying a new one.

A Report

To: Director, Center of Equipment Service
From: Director, Exchange Center
Subject: Purchase of a printer

Last week, we wrote you a report applying to buy a new printer. This is to remind you of the urgency of our need.
As we said in our last report, there has been a sudden increase in our correspondences with foreign colleges and universities. Our printer, old and unusable, can not meet the increased demand. Therefore, we were applying for a new one.
We hope that you can furnish us with it as soon as possible, so that our work will not be further delayed. Thank you for the trouble（91字）