读《哈利波特》-仿地道英语3-学案--高三英语写作专题.docx

读《哈利波特》，仿地道英语3
Chapter 3: The Letters from No One（直译：神秘来信/意译：猫头鹰的来信）
Part L各种“说”法对话是故事开展和刻画人物的手段，不同的“说”的背后都蕴含着具体的内涵，既可以避 免重复，又能够展现特定时刻的特定人物的特定情绪和性格。
P34 tell, say, say grufflyAs he looked at Dudley in his new knickerbockers, Uncle Vernon said gruffly that it was the proudest moment of his life.
当姨父看到身穿崭新灯笼裤的达力的时候，他声音都嘶哑地说道这是他最骄傲的时.刻。
P35 ask, snap"Don't be stupid/ snapped Aunt Petunia. zTm dyeing some of Dudley's old things grey for you. It/ll look just like everyone else's when I/ve finished//
〃别犯傻！ 〃佩妮姨妈叱责道，“我正在染达力的旧衣服给你，等我染好后，它就会和别人的 一样。”P38 shout, inform, say suddenly, sneer, gasp 气喘吁吁地说
'Who'd be writing to you?' sneered Uncle Vernon, shaking the letter open with one hand and glancing at it.
〃谁会给你写信？ 〃姨父讥讽道，用一只手把信封抖开，朝它瞥了一眼。
P38 say loudly, say furiously, croak, demand, roar, mutter wildly, say finally'Get out, both of you/ croaked Uncle Vernon, stuffing the letter back inside its envelope.
Harry didn't move.姨父用消沉与沙哑的声音说到，把信重新塞到信封里。
1 WANT MY LETTERJ'he shouted.
'Let me see it!'demanded 命令 Dudley.
'OUT-roared Uncle Vernon, and he took both Harry and Dudley by the scruffs of their necks and threw them into the hall, slamming the kitchen door behind them.
姨父吼了起来，揪住哈利和达力的脖领,把他们扔到走廊里，砰地一声关厨房门。
P39 swear, yell, say angrily, say shortly, snap'No one. It was addressed to you by mistake： said Uncle Vernon shortly. 1 have burned it/
“没有人，它是错寄给了你,”姨父立刻说道。“我已经把它烧掉了。”P40 bawl, scream
From downstairs came the sound of Dudley bawling at his mother: 1 don/t want him in there ... I need that room ... make him get out 楼下传来达力缠着他母亲哭闹的声音。
P41 wheeze'Go to your cupboard-1 mean, your bedroom/ he wheezed at Harry.
“上你的储臧间去，我是说你的卧室。”他气喘吁吁地对哈利说道。
P45 suggest timidly'Wouldn't it be better just to go home, dearP'Aunt Petunia suggested timidly.害怕地建议说。
方法 1： verbs： P42 explainEgl:张三吼道：“日记本给我！"
方法 2： verbs+ adv.； P47 say gleefully 开心地说到Eg2:张三伤心地说道：“你们总是欺负我！”
方法 3： verbs+介词短语：P43 ask...in amazementEg3:张三生气地说到：“我以后再也不和你们说话了！ ”
Part 2:描写微场景细节，动作描写是情节人物刻画的重要环节，多样细致具体的描述将文字可视化，勾勒出 栩栩如生的画面。
1 . “变脸”细节P37：脸色即情绪，不同颜色代表了不同的心情His face went from red to green faster than a set of traffic lights. And it didn't stop there. Within seconds it was the greyish white of old porridge.
他的脸一下子由红变青了，比红绿灯变得还快。事情到这里并没结束。几秒钟之内，他的 脸就变得像灰色的麦片粥一样灰白了。
Scene 1:张三发现自己的日记本不见了。当发现自己的日记本不见时,When finding his diary missing, Zhangsan's face.
2 .偷窥偷听P38：画面感十足Harry and Dudley promptly had a furious but silent fight over who would listen at the keyhole; Dudley won, so Harry, his glasses dangling from one ear; lay flat on his stomach to listen at the crack between door and floor.
哈利和达力两人都火冒三丈，为争夺由锁孔窥视的权利，悄悄地争斗起来。最后达力胜利了。 哈利一只耳朵上挂着他那副破眼镜，只好趴在地板上，贴着门和地板之间的缝隙窥探动静。 Scene 2:当听到隔壁教室的笑声 When hearing the laughters from the classroom next, Zhangsan.争“信”打斗P41：手脚并用的夺信大战，实在精彩
With a strangled cry, Uncle Vernon leapt from his seat and ran down the hall, Harry right behind him. Uncle Vernon had to wrestle Dudley to the ground to get the letter from him, which was made difficult by the fact that Harry had grabbed Uncle Vernon around the neck from behind. After a minute of confused fighting, in which everyone got hit a lot by the Smeltings stick, Uncle Vernon straightened up, gasping for breath, with Harry's letter clutched in his hand.
弗农姨父像被掐住了脖子，喊了一声，从椅子上一跃而起，朝走廊跑去。哈利紧跟在他背 后。弗农姨父只有把达力摔倒在地，才能把信拿到手，可哈利从背后搂住了他的脖子，这 就增加了他的难度。经过片刻的混战，弗农姨父和哈利都挨了达力不少棍子。最后，弗农姨 父直起腰大口喘着气，手里捏着哈利的信。
Scene 3:当发现他的日记本在他们手中When finding his diary in their hands,Zhangsan.
3 .见缝“进信” P42-43无孔不入的信P42: On Friday, no fewer than twelve letters arrived for Harry. As they couldn't go through the letter-box they had been pushed under the door, slotted through the sides and a few even forced through the small window in the downstairs toilet.
星期五，寄给哈利的信至少有十二封。既然不能往信箱里插，只好往门底下的缝里塞，从门 边的缝里塞，有几封信甚至从楼下盥洗室的小窗口塞了进来。
P43: On Saturday, things began to get out of hand. Twenty-four letters to Harry found their way into the house, rolled up and hidden inside each of the two dozen eggs that their very confused milk man had handed Aunt Petunia through the living-room window.
星期六，事态开始失控。二十四封写给哈利的信已设法进入德思礼家中。这些信是卷成小 卷藏在两打鸡蛋下边，由毫不知情的送奶员从起居室窗口递给佩妮姨妈的。
P43: Something came whizzing down the kitchen chimney as he spoke and caught him sharply on the back of the head. Next moment, thirty or forty letters came pelting out of the fireplace like bullets. The Dursleys ducked, but Harry leapt into the air trying to catch one.
他正说着，有东西嗖嗖地从厨房烟囱里掉了下来，狠狠地砸在他的后脑勺上。接着三四十 封信像子弹一样从壁炉里射出来。德思礼一家忙着躲避，哈利却一蹿老高，伸手想抓住一封。
Scene 4:张三十分生气，同学们也纷纷意识到自己的错误，于是纷纷写纸条像向三抱歉。 当他返回教室后,When returning to his classroom,Zhangsan.
Part 3: Consolidation细致生动的描写至关重要，可是能够模仿的场景着实很难设定，于是勉强编成了张三读书的 故事，希望大伙儿尽可能使用我们上述提到的各种“说”法和4个微场景，连句成篇。