高三英语写作-申请信.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,.,*,书信复习之 申请信,2015年高考作文复习：,How to write a better Application Letter,1,.,近五年全国卷作文,年份,体裁,题材,形式,2015,书信,约美国朋友写稿,提纲,2014,书信,询问英语学习课程,图表,2013,书信,带去中国画，请求接机,提纲,2012,电子邮件,申请参加夏令营,提纲,2011,书信,预约学校辅导中心帮助,提纲,2,.,书信,私人信件等,感谢信,申请信,邀请信,道歉信,祝贺信,推荐信,_,3,.,Useful phrases,1,向某人申请某物,2 n.,申请,3,职位,/,4,对,合格,5 n.,资格,6,有责任心做,7,向某人推荐某人,8,与某人面试,9,与某人联系,10,训练有素的,11,学生会,12,考虑做某事,1,apply to sb for sth.,2,application,3,position/the right person for the position,4,be qualified for/be suitable for/be fit for,5,qualification,6,have/take/shoulder great responsibility to do,sth,7,recommend sb to sb,/that sb(should)do sth,8,have an interview with sb,/sb on sth,9,contact sb,/call sb,10,well-trained,11,the Students Union,12,consider doing sth./take sth into consideration,4,.,13,有利条件,14,工作经历,15,良好的身体条件,16,回复某人,17,擅长于,18,得第一名,19,对生活有积极的态度,20,对某物有热情,21,顶尖的学生,22,尽力做某事,23,有机会做某事,24,对,有兴趣,25,自荐某人为志愿者,13,favorable,condition/advantage,14,work experience,15,good health condition,/be in good health,16,reply to sb/give sb a reply,17,do well in/be good at,18,get the first prize,/rank the first,19,have,/,hold,a positive,/active,attitude towards life,20,be enthusiastic,/passionate,about sth,21,a top student,22,try ones best/do ones utmost,23,have the opportunity/chance to do,24,show great interest in/be interested in,25,promote oneself as a volunteer.,5,.,Form,of an,Application Letter,Dear Sir/Madam,Im Lihua from class one,senior two.I am wri,ti,ng to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxin Hope School with their English.Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation.Meanwhile,I can learn how to get along well with the students and benefit the whole school.,Im kind,easy-going and always ready to help others.I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence.English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests.So I think that I am qualified for the position.,I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need.Besides,Ill try to get them more interested in English by telling stories,singing songs and so on.,I,ll,appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.,Yours Sincerely,Li hua,观摩领悟read and tell,:,self-introduction/,writing purpose,/,reasons for applying,your ability/qualification/strong points/confidence,your,promise,/,ways of contact/,appreciation,6,.,Useful Sentence structures,To show your writing purpose:,我写信来申请,I am writing to apply for,I am writing in response to(your advertisement for),I feel honored to write to you and promote myself as,Beginning,Body part:,To show your interest in the job:,Im quite interested in it and I think I am fit for it.,我觉得我是你招聘的这个工作的合适人选。,I think I am the right person for the job you advertised.,To show your strengths:,我不仅理科好，而且文科也好。,Not only,do I,do well in science,but also,I am,good at arts as well.,7,.,Useful Sentence structures,Ending:,To show your promise:,如果我有机会在贵公司工作，我将竭尽全力做一名优秀员工。,If I have a chance to work in your company，I will try my best to be a good employee.,To show your appreciation:,如果您能给我面试的机会，我将不胜感激。,If you s,hould grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.,如果您能尽早回复我，我将不胜感激。,I would appreciate it if you,can,give me an early reply.,8,.,apply for the assistant to Maggie,Promise what,You will do,Self-introduction,Your strengths,Reasons for,your applying,Writing purpose,Practice:make sentences using sentence structures learnt:,Your appreciation,9,.,假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报社招聘兼职记者，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。内容要点如下：,1）表示感兴趣；,2）说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历；,3）希望得到回复。,注意：1）100词左右,2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Practice writing,Oral practice,10,.,1,Draft,2Polish,&,Refine,3,Output,The Rule,of writing,11,.,Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.Im quite interested in the news that you want some part-time reporters.,I think I am the right person for the job.As a student,Ive read different books.Furthermore,I am good at English and do well in speaking.Besides,Im easy to get along with and like working together with others.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.,I am looking forward to your reply soon.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,(94 words),Possible writing,12,.,How to make it better?,words better words better phrases?,add,good,adj/adv,?,s,entences better sentence structures?,13,.,Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.Im quite interested in the news that you want some part-time reporters.,I think I am the right person for the job.As a student,Ive read different books.Furthermore,I am good at English and do well in speaking.Besides,Im easy to get along with and like working together with others.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.,I am looking forward to your reply soon.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,(94words),Possible writing version 1,_,_,_,_,_,_,14,.,Refine by,using good phrases,Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.I,show great interest,in the news that you want some part-time reporters.,I think I,am qualified for,the job.As a student,Ive read,varieties of,books.Furthermore,I,have a good command of,English and do,well in speaking.Besides,Im easy to get along with and,have a strong sense of coorperation,.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.,I am looking forward to your reply soon.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,(98 words),version2,15,.,Refine by,adding good adj./adv.,Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.I,show great interest in,the news that you want some part-time reporters.,I think I am _ qualified for the job.As a student,Ive read,varieties of,books and know a lot.Furthermore,I,have a good command of,English and do _ well in speaking.Besides,Im easy to get along with and,have a strong sense of coorperation,.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.,I am looking forward to your _,reply soon.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,version3,surely/definitely,particularly/especially,favorable/earliest,(101 words),16,.,Refine by,enriching,sentence structure,s,五种基本句型,复合句：定语从句；状语从句；同位语从句等,倒装句,非谓语,强调句,it 形式主语或形式宾语句型,with 结构.；,so.that.;such.that.,17,.,Refine by,enriching,sentence structure,s,1）As a student,I,ve read varieties of,books,.（,用非谓语扩展信息),作为一个学生,我看过各种书籍，这使得我很容易去处理各种意外情况。,As a student,Ive read varieties of books,making it easy for me to cope with different unexpected situations.,2）Im easy to get along with and have a strong sense of coorperation.,(变为倒装句）,Not only am I easy to get along with but also I have a strong sense of coorperation.,3）,Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting.（,用复合句扩展信息),更重要的是，我曾经参加过关于播报技巧的课程，在那课程里我接受到了专业的训练。,Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting,where I have received some professional training.,18,.,Final version,Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School.I,show great interest in the news,that you want some part-time reporters.,I think I,am,surely,qualified for,the job.As a student,Ive read,varieties of,books,making it easy for me to cope with different unexpected situations,.Furthermore,I,have a good command of,English and do,particularly,well in speaking.Besides,not only am I out-going but also I have a strong sense of coorperation,.Above all,I once attended a course about the skills in broadcasting,where Ive received some professional training,.So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.,I am looking forward to your,favorable,reply soon.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,(119 words),version4,19,.,Look back,Form of an Application Letter,申请信模式,Useful phrases and sentence structures,How to make your writing better:,good words/good phrases/good sentence structures,20,.,