朗声UNIT写作人物写作改变自我4市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,写作训练（,unit1),基础写作：人物写作任务型写作：改变自我,第1页,第1页,基础写作：人物写作,第2页,第2页,第一节：基础写作,假设你是学校英文网站通讯员，最近该网站准备简介一些优秀学生，请你用英文为卢燕同窗写一篇简介。,请依据下列中文提纲，简介卢燕同窗基本情况。,姓名：卢燕,职务：高二（,2,）班班长,特点：严于律己，乐于助人，健康、活泼,兴趣：体育、歌唱、跳舞,事迹：她各科成绩都较好，但刚进校时，在英语学习方面有困难，通过努力，成绩提升了。不久前参与了英语演讲比赛并取得一等奖。,第3页,第3页,1,卢燕是高二（,2,）班班长，严于律己，乐于助人。,5,不久前参与了,英语演讲比,赛并取得一等奖。,2,她健康，活泼，兴趣体育、唱歌和跳舞。,3,她各科成绩都较好。,4,进校时，在英语学习方面有困难，通过努力，成绩提升了。,信息排列参考,:,按照题目内容顺序,第4页,第4页,人物简介普通环节：,1,、概况,age,sex,birth-place,background,2,、外貌,性格,character appearance,3,、教育,education,4,、生平事迹,big events in his her life(in order of time),5,、评估,价,evaluation,第5页,第5页,be born in.,Born into a family,.,writer,athlete,professor,journalist,physicist,scientist,1,概况,：,第6页,第6页,a,ttractive,a,ctive,b,rave,c,aring,c,areful,e,asygoing,h,umorous,l,ovely,l,ively,o,ptimistic,o,utgoing,2,、性格、特性,第7页,第7页,f,rank,h,onest,m,odest,p,atient,p,opular,r,esponsible,s,traightforward,s,elfless,t,alented,t,olerant,w,arm-hearted,第8页,第8页,g,entle,smart clever,courage,ous,ambiti,ous,gener,ous,hardwork,ing,dilig,ent,learn,ed,educat,ed,knowledge,able,第9页,第9页,bright,intellig,ent,independ,ent,confid,ent,curi,ous,consider,ate,posi,tive,devot,ed,determin,ed,energet,ic,pain,ful,第10页,第10页,receive little education,receive further education in,go abroad for further education,major in,graduate from,be admitted to.,win the first prize,receive a doctors degree,3,、教育,第11页,第11页,be interested in,be fond of,Her hobbies are.,do well in all ones subjects,be good at,have a gift in be gifted in,perform well in,behave oneself,4.,生平事迹,第12页,第12页,devote oneself to sth.,be strict,with,sb.,in,sth.,have difficulty in(doing)sth.,manage to do sth.,make(good/great/significant)progress,overcome the difficulties,第13页,第13页,be capable of(doing)sth.,be bent on(doing)sth.,make up one,s mind to do sth.,be determined to do sth.,take up sth.,be enthusiastic about(doing),sth.,be active in doing sth.,第14页,第14页,be determined to do sth.,be absorbed in(doing)sth.,make contributions to,be ready to do sth.,be willing to help others,take delight in doing sth.,第15页,第15页,(in)doing sth.,complain about sth,.,take an active part in(doing)sth.,on sth.,spend one,s spare time,第16页,第16页,be thought highly of,be famous/known for sth.,be admired respected by,One of the best most famous,Set an example to,第17页,第17页,有用短语,熟读背诵：,be admitted into a key university,考上重点大学,major in law,主修法律,get a masters degree,取得硕士学位,graduate from Harvard University,毕业于哈佛大学,win the first prize,取得一等奖,win a gold medal,赢得一枚金牌,win the Nobel Prize,取得诺贝尔奖,become a world champion,成为世界冠军,set a good example to us,给我们树立了良好榜样,(10)be highly thought of,受到好评,(11)be awarded a medal for,因,而取得奖章,(12)be awarded the title of,取得,称号,(13)devote.to.,把,专用于,/,奉献给,第18页,第18页,Lu Yan,the monitress of Class2,Grade 2,is,very,strict with,herself,in,her study and daily life,and,is,always ready to,help others.She is,healthy and lively,and is fond of sports,singing and dancing.Not only is she very,kind and active,but she also,does well in,all her subjects.Although she,had quite a lot of difficulty in learning,English when she first came to school,she,managed to,make significant progress,with great efforts,.Whats more,she,took part in,an English speech contest not long ago and,won the first prize,.,第19页,第19页,任务型写作,改变自我,第20页,第20页,第二节 读写任务,阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇,150,词左右英语短文。,There is a story telling of a religious master who is said to be capable of moving mountains.A man came to him and asked him to show how to do it.The master sat in front of a mountain for a moment,then went to the other side of it and declared that he succeeded.All the audience were greatly puzzled and begged him for an explanation.He said,“There has never been a way of moving mountains.What you can do is to go to the mountain if it doesnt come.”,One of my friends,though having the qualities needed to become a businessman,was bent on,being a painter.He,resigned from office,and devoted himself entirely to painting at home.Several years,however,saw no progress,in this regard,.,A painful reflection over the past,brought him to his senses,.He made up his mind to,take up business,in place of painting.It took him only a few years to become a rich businessman.Meanwhile,he spent his spare time,exchanging experience and skills,in painting and,calligraph,y.His works finally won approval of expert painters and were on sale in art galleries and grand hotels.He had his collections published and his dream of becoming a painter came true at last.,第21页,第21页,写作内容：,请就以上文章写一篇读后感，内容包括：,以约,30,个词概括这段短文内容；,然后以约,120,个词就“改变自我”为主题发表你见解，内容包括：,当所面正确事实无法改变时，是否应当改变自己？,举例阐明你观点；,总结你见解。,第22页,第22页,存在问题,概括：信息不全；语言不够简练,过渡：概括与主体部分过渡生硬或无过渡句，过渡词。,例子不妥，无法表示“改变自我”,时态,总结见解，点题不到位。,对主题理解不充足；,中式表示,第23页,第23页,概括,记叙文:1）单独讲述一件事一个故事,2）讲述一件事一个故事+写作目,故事寓意,主题,1,）,The passage tells us the a story of.,sbs experience,主题句（大意）,+,细节（时、地、人、事）,2）The passage tells us+主题 寓意目+by showing the example of+故事大意。,The passage tells us the story experience ofIt points out that+寓意 写作目,第24页,第24页,The story tells us,emphasizes,focuses on,the importance,advantages,disadvantages,reasons,ways/ideas,that,By telling us the story of.,the passage tells us.,The passage tells us the story of in order to,The passage points out that.by showing the example of,第25页,第25页,The passage tells two stories about a religious master and a painter respectively,both of whom changed themselves when facing something unchangeable and eventually achieved their goals.,概括部分参考答案,(1),：,The passage tells us two stories,one of which is a religious master,who moved the mountain by going to the other side of it.Another one is a painter who realized his dream by changing his career.,第26页,第26页,By telling,two stories about a master who went to the mountain when it didnt come and a man succeeded by changing himself,the passage tells us that,we should change ourselves if something else cant be changed.,The author mainly shows us a story of,a master and his friends experience,in order to,make us understand that if we cant change the situation,we can change ourselves to achieve our goals.,概括部分参考答案,(2),：,第27页,第27页,当所面对事实无法改变时，是否应当改变自己？观点+论述,（范文）,I cant agree with story more.,There are so many difficulties for us to overcome in life.Once we can not change the situation,try to change ourselves instead.Things will turn out to be fine,and we may even get unexpected reward.,（,2,）,There is no denying that everyone will face some facts and even difficulties which are unpleasant to us but cant be changed.,In this case,it is necessary for us to change ourselves instead of being negative.Those who can succeed at last are good at making some changes to overcome the difficulties,.,第28页,第28页,试举例阐明。,（,1,）,For example,I disliked studying in school at first,for it was too boring and dull.But when I found that lots of people couldnt find jobs or even making a living because of their poor education,I realized that life is cruel,and without great education,I will not have a good future and all things will be hard.So I changed my mind and studied hard.Surprisingly,I found learning enjoyable and my grades were improved.,第29页,第29页,试举例阐明。,（,2,）,For example,I once failed in the final exams,which made me sad and upset at first.But after thinking a lot,I realized that this was the fact I must accept and it was no use crying any more.Therefore,I made up my mind to work harder and became more confident about myself.As a result,I got good marks in the exams the next term with my great effort.,第30页,第30页,试举例阐明。（范文）,As one of top students in the class,I used to think English was just a piece of cake and thus I ignored it totally.Consequently,I failed in several exams.My English was so poor that it seemed there was no way out.It was not until then that I realized English was not so easy and there was no gain without pain.,Then I developed the right attitude.,I,took an active part in,English classes.In the meantime,I kept an English diary,which helped me think in English.Much to my delight,one year later,I became one of the top ten students,in the class again.,第31页,第31页,你见解,1,Life is tough,and there are too many things we can not change.The only thing we can change is ourselves.People who are stubborn and always complain about life wont be the winners.What we should do is to,take a positive attitude,and create happiness ourselves rather than depending on the God.,第32页,第32页,你见解,2,In my opinion,it is easier for us to succeed if we,change ourselves,if necessary.Since it is hard to change the fact,we can change ourselves.It will really make a difference in our life.So,keep the saying in your mind,“what you can do is to go to the mountain if it doesnt come.”,第33页,第33页,你见解（范文）,In the face of difficulties that cannot be changed,only by changing ourselves and trying hard can we overcome them and achieve what we want.,第34页,第34页,Sample writing,The passage tells two stories about,a religious master,and,a painter,respectively,both of whom,changed themselves,when facing,something unchangeable,and eventually,achieved their goals,.,I cant agree with story more.,There are so many difficulties for us to overcome in life.Once we can not change the situation,try to change ourselves instead.Things will turn out to be fine,and we may even get unexpected reward.,第35页,第35页,Sample writing,As one of top students in the class,I used to think English was just a piece of cake and thus I ignored it totally.Consequently,I failed in several exams.My English was so poor that it seemed there was no way out.It was not until then that I realized English was not so easy and there was no gain without pain.,Then I developed the right attitude.,I,took an active part in,English classes.In the meantime,I kept an English diary,which helped me think in English.Much to my delight,one year later,I became one of the top ten students,in the class again.,In my opinion,nothing is hard to a willing heart.In the face of difficulties that cannot be changed,only by changing ourselves and trying hard can we overcome them and achieve what we want.,第36页,第36页,As the master said,if the mountain doesnt come,what we should do is to go to the mountain.I cant agree more with him.,When we cant change the situation,what we should do is to change ourselves to adapt to it instead of complaining or stopping our steps,.,Because its known to all that only when we adapt to the environment can we succeed.Otherwise,we wont achieve our goals.,Take me for example,.I used to be upset to study in such a noisy surroundings.Since I never thought of how to improve the case,I became crazy and led a terrible life at that time.Finally,it was my parents who advised me to change my study timetable and now I get on well with my study and lead a happy life.,Briefly speaking,I,hold the view that,its important for us to learn how to change ourselves to improve the situation.And its also a good idea to ask others for help when we cant deal with the matter ourselves.,学生习作,第37页,第37页,山但是来，我就过去,有这样一则故事：一天，有些人找到一位会移山大法大师，央其当众表演一下。大师在一座山对面坐了一会儿，就起身跑到山另一面，然后就表演完毕，众人大惑不解。大师道：这世上主线就没有移山大法，惟一能够移动山办法就是：山但是来，我就过去。,我一个朋友非常适合经商，但他却立志成为画家。他辞去公职，躲在家里，一心画画。几年过去却毫无长进。通过痛苦反思，他决定暂时放弃画家梦，下海经商，没几年他便跻身富人行列。闲时与书画家们在一起切磋技艺。几年后，他画竟获行家好评，挂在宾馆和画廊发售，出了画集，圆了当初画家梦。,人生路上，每个人都有自己奋斗方向和生命坐标。假如奋斗方向错了，就应及时调整，人生坐标定位错了，就要移动生命坐标。假如所面正确无法改变，那我们就先改变自己，只有这样，才干最后改变属于自己世界。,第38页,第38页,从前有一个国王，他统治着一个富足国家，但是那个时候还是没有创造鞋子，因此这个国家人都不穿鞋。有一天，国王徒步走去一个离王宫较远地方视察民情，由于是第一次步行出远门，并且路上崎岖不平、沙石遍地，国王感觉脚底十分疼痛，于是国王下令将他要去道路上统统铺上皮革，但是这需要成千上万张牛皮，要花费大量金钱。并且，恐怕把全国牛都杀了剥皮也不够用。于是一位大臣向国王提议说：“英明国王陛下，其实我们不需要花那么多钱，您只需要割下一小块牛皮，包上您双脚，就能够起到同样作用啊。”国王惊讶不已，立刻接纳大臣提议。从此这个国家开始有了鞋子。这个小故事告诉我们，假如强行让外界适应我们话，也许会花费巨大代价，并且还不一定能取得成功。倒不如改变自己来适应外界更容易些。,第39页,第39页,