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专题十九　短文改错
高考试题
Passage 1
(2013新课标全国Ⅰ)
I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.
Passage 2
(2013新课标全国Ⅱ)
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
Passage 3
(2013陕西)
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.
Passage 4
(2013辽宁)
Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
Passage 5
(2013浙江)

Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know I’ll never fall sleep.
　　Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
Passage 6
(2013四川)
Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty,but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the teacher’s office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didn’t cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?

Passage 7
(2012新课标全国)
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“That’s it.No more toys to you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.
Passage 8
(2012浙江)
Two years before,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents,so I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.
Passage 9
(2012辽宁)
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Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you.It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend,Gina.Unfortunate,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on the highway and,for a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona
Passage 10
(2012陕西)
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
Passage 11
(2011新课标全国)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
答案:My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buybuying a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend herethere and after that I would go to Xiamen for ∧a long holiday.I bought my ticket butand turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money onin my pocket,but the only clothes I had waswere those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggagesluggage.When I finally arrived at my friendfriend’s he lent to me lots of clothes.I feelfelt very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
剖析:1.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station是主系表结构的主干句,需要用buying作状语。
2.去看望在杭州的朋友,远指用there。
3.因为holiday是可数名词,去度假习惯上说“go for a holiday”。
4.bought my ticket和turned around两个动作间是并列关系。
5.钱在口袋里,用介词in。
6.be动词的主语是clothes,又因为上下文都用过去时态,所以用were。
7.luggage为不可数名词。
8.arrived at(到达)的应当是朋友的家,my friend’s=my friend’s house。
9.动词lend的用法是lend sb.sth.或lend sth.to sb.。
10.此处表述“我”在当时得到朋友的帮助很高兴,应用一般过去时。
Passage 12
(2011辽宁)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per weeks.When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to making his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remained above the previous level.
答案:In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports werewas steady,around three per weeksweek.When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors tofrom outer space was shown on television,there was thean immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who ∧was/is directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to makingmake his findings known.TheyHe wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.FollowFollowing this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,　 　 　because　 　 　although/though/but/yet the rate remained above the previous level.
剖析:1.因为句子的主语为the rate,是单数,所以谓语动词要用单数形式。
2.因为前面有per(每一),所以用单数形式week。
3.来自外太空的……,所以用from。
4.名词increase为泛指,且其前有发音以元音音素开头的immediate修饰,所以用不定冠词an。
5.who引导的定语从句中缺少谓语动词。
6.不定式to后用动词原形。
7.因为代替的是一个人Wayne Tyler,所以用He。
8.副词naturally作状语修饰动词explained,不需要加介词for。
9.现在分词短语作状语,drop与follow之间为逻辑上的主谓关系。
10.前后句子间为转折或让步关系,所以用表转折或让步的连词。
Passage 13
(2011陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线(　),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
答案:Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew makemaking a new film with one of my favourite actoractors.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time,butso/and I rushed back home to get ∧it.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they havehad finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhereanywhere.I was really disappointingdisappointed and about to leave when he walked out ∧of a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I hadhave my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
剖析:1.a crew与make之间存在逻辑上的主谓关系,用现在分词短语作后置定语修饰crew。
2.“one of+可数名词”结构中,应用可数名词的复数形式。
3.句子的前后之间为因果关系,用so。也可用and表顺承关系。
4.get表示“(去)拿来”时为及物动词,需加宾语,it指代前文中的camera,避免重复。
5.整篇文章以一般过去时为主,finish这个动作发生在got back之前,故用过去完成时。
6.否定句中应用anywhere来表示“到处”。
7.表示人感到失望时应用disappointed。
8.walk out后接宾语时需加of,表示“从……中走出来”。
9.在事物的前面用in front of...,in the front of表示在事物内部的前面。
10.倒装句中did表示过去,已提前,had应用原形have。
Passage 14
(2010新课标全国)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help.As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say:“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s delay,my neighbor picked up the box but announced:“I’ll take them.”
答案:My friend Nick told me ∧a story about his experience back in the US,which was very interestedinteresting.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door comecame by to help.As the old man looked over the things ontheyard　in 或 ground that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ballballs for Christmas trees.On the box was a card saysaying:“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price updown to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s delay,myhis neighbor picked up the box butand announced:“I’ll take them.”
剖析:1.story为可数名词单数,表泛指,应用不定冠词a。
2.主语为物,应用interesting。
3.故事发生时间为one day,句子时态为过去时,故用came。
4.考查固定搭配,on the ground和in the yard。
5.a box of golden balls“一盒金色的球”,应用可数名词复数。
6.saying为现在分词作伴随状语。
7.整篇文章都在叙述过去发生的一件事,故应用一般过去时态。
8.副词用错,语意矛盾。价格从原先的每个25美分降到每个10美分。
9.代词用错,人称不合适。由第一句的his及第二句的he可知用his。
10.此处表并列动作,应用and。
Passage 15
(2009海南、宁夏)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.
I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.
Well,I had better to stop now.I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon,for I’ve got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
答案:
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know whathow things are going.
I’m glad to say that anythingeverything has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they findfound me a comfortable one on ∧the second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friendfriends with them so that we can help each other onwith the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmlywarm here.
Well,I had better to stop now.I’m going to attend minemy first lesson this afternoon,forso I’ve got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
剖析:1.表示让对方知道情况进展如何,应该用how来代替what。
2.“一切进展顺利”中“一切”应该为everything;anything为“任何事情”之意,常用于否定句和疑问句中。
3.考查时态,该句谈论的是在大学的第一周所发生的事,属过去的事情,所以用过去式。
4.序数词second前应该有定冠词修饰。
5.make friends with sb.为固定结构,意为“与某人交朋友”。
6.help sb.with sth.与help sb.(to) do sth.均为固定结构。
7.系动词seem后用形容词作表语。
8.had better do sth.为固定结构,意为“最好做某事”。
9.mine为名词性物主代词,后面不能再接名词lesson,所以必须改成形容词性物主代词my。
10.该句表示结果,而不是原因,应该