作文闪光点1作文高分指南.pptx

四级四级120-150120-150字；六级字；六级150150180180字；字；是否长短句交叉；是否长短句交叉；用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词.高分作文标志高分作文标志注意事项：注意事项：适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用句子开头不要总是用we/IweshouldpayattentiontoAttentionshouldbepaidto.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。逗号。Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。考试中一般不要出现考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等等等Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.applicable代替代替proper,approaches代替代替ways,implement代替代替carryout,sharpenonescompetitiveedge代替代替enhanceonescompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力提高某物竞争力)ComputerandI Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatIindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationIhadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.exceedingly替换替换verythrilling替换替换excitingsth.exertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换替换sb.beinterestedinsth.google替换替换searchanarmyof替换替换alotofThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；Increasingpopularity替换替换moreandmorepopularCoincidentwith非常地道的词汇，表达非常地道的词汇，表达“与与一致一致”的意思，的意思，替换替换WithAdvancement替换替换developmentPourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换替换enterintoCurrent(currently)替换替换nowAppealtosb.替换替换sb.beinterestedinsth.Growingindividuals替换替换moreandmorepeopleItisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的说某事是毫不夸张的Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.Forastart替换替换TobeginwithWecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法用了插入语的写作手法ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换替换Inaddition/BesidesDeliver替换替换sendThereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有这个句型，还有however作为插入语，作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换替换doharmtoEmerging代替代替appearing(fading代替代替disappearing)Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词网民，属于精彩用词Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeoplelives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould，therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.Nogardenhasnoweeds替换替换EverycoinhastwosidesComputersdoplay，do强调强调Positive替换替换important/good等等Asliceof替换替换apartofUnfavorable替换替换badImpacts替换替换effects/influencesWeshould,therefore,takeadvantageof使用插入语使用插入语Fruits(而且而且fruits用的非常形象，用的非常形象，merits/virtues)替换替换advantage(defects替换替换disadvantage)Facet替换替换aspect最经典的替换词最经典的替换词individuals,characters,folks代替代替people,personspositive,favorable,rosy(美好的美好的)，promising(有希望的有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替代替gooddreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的有害的)代替代替bad如果如果bad做表语，可以有做表语，可以有belessimpressive代替代替Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof代替代替many.asliceof,quietafew,several代替代替someharbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat替替think(因为是书面语，所以要加因为是书面语，所以要加that)affair,business,matter代替代替thingshared代代commonreaphugefruits代替代替getmuchbenefitformypart,frommyownperspective代替代替inmyopinionIncreasing(ly)/growing代替代替moreandmore(注意没有注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.beneficial,rewarding代替代替helpfulbebeneficialofshopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替代替customerexceedingly,extremely代替代替verysthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替代替sbtakeinterestincaptureonesattention代替代替attractonesattention.facet,dimension,sphere代代aspectbeindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代代indicate,suggest,feargiveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替代替cause.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替代替.reasonsforsthdesire代替代替want.pourattentioninto代替代替payattentiontobearinmindthat代替代替rememberenjoy,possess代替代替have(注意注意process是过程的意思是过程的意思)interaction代替代替communicationfrownonsth代替代替beagainst,disagreewithsth并不一定并不一定It doesnt follow that 结果是结果是 It turned out to be/that 可以肯定可以肯定It is positive that 有迹象表明有迹象表明There are indications that 毫无疑问毫无疑问There is no doubt/no denying the fact that很可能很可能It is very likely that 常见套语句型常见套语句型令人感到欣慰的是令人感到欣慰的是To ones relief,简单回顾简单回顾能够使我们能够使我们A brief review of enables us to Considering it in detail,we may find that 普遍认为普遍认为It is a common sense that 做做没意义没意义There is no use/good/point/fun/sense in doing sth.人们有可能忽视人们有可能忽视Some people may neglect that 人们越来越重视人们越来越重视We tend to attach more importance to 在在方面传统观念仍然根深蒂固方面传统观念仍然根深蒂固Many old traditions and customs are still rooted in 另一个类似的例子可以被引用来另一个类似的例子可以被引用来A very similar story can be cited to 最令我们最令我们的是的是What really disturbs/surprises/interests/matters to us is that 当涉及到当涉及到When it comes to