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DescriptiveEssaysDescriptionofaPerson第1页DescriptiveWritingTheprimarypurposeofdescriptivewritingistodescribeaperson,placeorthinginsuchawaythatapictureisformedinthereadersmind.Capturinganeventthroughdescriptivewritinginvolvespayingcloseattentiontothedetailsbyusingallofyourfivesenses.第2页HowdoesaTeddybearlook?第3页第4页Cuddly（想拥抱）,soft,lovely,brown,furry,fuzzy（毛绒绒）,adorable第5页CharacteristicsofDescription1.Gooddescriptivewritingincludesmanyvividsensorydetailsthatpaintapictureandappealstoallofthereaderssensesofsight,hearing,touch,smellandtastewhenappropriate.第6页(1).The roses fragrant perfume filled up the entire room,driftingintoourwelcomingnostrils.Iimagineitcanonlybemanufacturedinnaturesflawlessgarden.(2).Therosemusttastebetterthanthesweetestofnectars(花蜜).Atleastthebumblebees(大黄蜂)thinkso.第7页2.Gooddescriptivewritingoftenmakesuseoffigurativelanguagesuchasanalogies,similesandmetaphorstohelppaintthepictureinthereadersmind.第8页Simileandmetaphor(1)Herheartislikeafire,blazingwithpassion.(2)Hishairisasmessyasabirdsnest.(3)Thechildisasnaughtyasacuriousmonkey.(4)Hervoiceisasymphony.(5)Thefatherisastubbornbear.第9页APoemMy Luve Is Like A Red,Red Roseby Robert BurnsO,my luves like a red,red rose,哦我心爱人就像一朵红玫瑰，一朵红玫瑰Thats newly sprung in June.它在春天六月初绽O,my luves like the melodie,哦我心爱人就像那段旋律Thats sweetly playd in tune.它是如此甜蜜As fair art thou,my bonie lass,我淑女，我漂亮人儿So deep in luve am I,我如此地迷恋你And I will luve thee still,my dear,我会永远爱你，亲爱Till a the seas gang dry.我爱你直到大海干涸第10页Till a the seas gang dry,my dear,我爱你直到大海干涸，我亲爱And the rocks melt wi the sun!我爱你直到太阳融化岩石And I will luve thee still,my dear,我将永远爱你，我亲爱While the sands o life shall run.我爱与我生命同行And fare thee weel,my only luve!再见，我唯一爱And fare thee weel,a while!再见，不论多久And I will come again,my luve,我会再次回到你身边，我爱Tho it were ten thousand mile!哪怕我们分别天涯第11页3.Gooddescriptivewritingusespreciselanguage.Generaladjectives,nouns,andpassiveverbsdonothaveaplaceingooddescriptivewriting.Usespecificadjectivesandnounsandstrongactionverbstogivelifetothepictureyouarepaintinginthereadersmind.第12页Examples:Abstract:Itwasaniceday.Concrete:Thesunwasshiningandaslightbreezeblewacrossmyface.Abstract:Thetrafficwasheavy.Concrete:Ouroldcarpuffed（冒烟）asMainStreetbecameclogged（堵塞）withalineofclamoring（喧闹）motorists.Abstract:Mr.Smithwasagreatteacher.Concrete:Mr.Smithreallyknewhowtohelpusturnourthoughtsintogoodstoriesandessays.第13页4.Gooddescriptivewritingisorganized.Somewaystoorganizedescriptivewritinginclude:chronological(time),spatial(location),andorderofimportance.Whendescribingaperson,youmightbeginwithaphysicaldescription,followedbyhowthatpersonthinks,feelsandacts.第14页DescriptionofapersonThinkingifthedescriptionissuccessfulintellingthereaderswhatapersonlookslike.Tobespecific,thedescriptionshouldanswersomeofthefollowingquestion.1)Whatclothesisthepersonwearing?2)Howoldisheorshe?3)Howtallistheperson?4)Whatishisorherfigurelike,bigorsmall,slimorstocky?5)Whatishisorhercomplexion?6)Whatarehisorherfacialfeatures,e.g.featuresofhair,eyes,nose,lips,teeth?7)Whatmakesthispersondifferentfromothers?8)Doesthispersonhaveanyfeaturesthatstandout,suchasascaronthenose?第15页Height(1)Heisverytall.(2)Heisquiteshort.(3)Heisrelativelynormalheight.第16页BuildSheisskinny.(negative)Sheisanorexic.(medical)Sheisunderweight.(negative)Sheisthin.(negative)Sheisslim.(positive)Sheisslender.(positive)第17页Sheisfat.(negative)Sheistubby.(negative)Sheisoverweight.(negative)Sheisplump.(neutral)Sheisstocky.(neutral)Sheisbonny.(positive)第18页ComplexionCharacteristicsDarkLightFairOlivePaleTanPimply（疙瘩）Freckles（斑点）SpotsPimples（粉刺）第19页Whats the difference?第20页第21页CharacterandPersonalityambitious,confident,dependent,passionate,vigorous,aggressive,sensitive,patient,prudent,cautious,polite,rude,reckless,optimistic,humorous,sociable,easygoing,diffident,broad-minded,narrow-minded,proud,arrogant,conceited,hesitant,sentimental,pessimistic,insensitive,rigid,insolent,considerate,queer,self-important,self-centered,vain第22页My Boyfriend by Sang Hee ParkLetmedescribemybestfriend.HisnameisJohn.Imethim7yearsagoforthefirsttime.Ifoundoutabouthimfromaflyerpostedinthestreet.Areyouanxiousabouthim?Firstofall,helookslikewhitecake.Hishairiswhitelikefreshcream.Hiseyesareliketwoblackpearls.Hisnoseisalwaysmoistenedlikedewyflowers.Hisearsareasbigastherestofhisface.Wheneverheruns,hishairisglossyandhisearsflutter.Ialwaysembracehim.Atthattime,Ihaveasensationofgoingbehindtheclouds.Inaddition,hissmellissweetlikecandy,exceptwhenhedoesnttakeabathforalongtime.However,Ialwayslikehimanyway.第23页EachtimeIsay,Letseat,herunsalongpanting.Asaresult,hestrainshisears,andhelollsouthistongue.Maybe,theglitterofhiseyesisthemostpurethingintheworld.However,ifhemakesamistake,herunsunderthesofaandstaysasstiffasice.Then,hehangshishead.Inaddition,hestepsoutfromunderthesofawhilehiseyesswimwithtears.Also,heliesdowntoshowhisbelly.Imustforgivehismistake.Maybeyoucanguess.Heismydog!Heislivinginmyhometown.Asaresult,Imisshimnow.Heteachesmeabouthowtoloveanimals.Inaddition,hemakesfriendswithmewhenIamlonely.Ilovehimsomuch.Asaresult,Iwanttolivewithhimforever.第24页PhysicalAppearanceDescriptionMr.Bingleywasgoodlookingandgentlemanlike;hehadapleasantcountenance（面容）,andeasy,unaffected（自然，不矫揉造作）manners.Hissisterswerefinewomen,withanairofdecided（果断）fashion.Hisbrother-in-law,Mr.Hurst,merelylookedthegentleman;buthisfriendMr.Darcysoondrewtheattentionoftheroombyhisfine,tallperson,handsomefeatures,noblemien（风采）;andthereportwhichwasingeneralcirculationwithinfiveminutesafterhisentrance,ofhishavingtenthousandayear.第25页第26页第27页Hischaracterwasdecided.Hewastheproudest,mostdisagreeable（厌恶，难相处）manintheworld,andeverybodyhopedthathewouldnevercomethereagain.第28页SpeechDescription“Whatishisname?”“Bingley.”“Ishemarriedorsingle?”“Oh!Single,mydear,tobesure!Asinglemanoflargefortune;fourorfivethousandayear.Whatafinethingforourgirls!”“Howso?Howcanitaffectthem?”“MydearMr.Bennet,”repliedhiswife,“howcanyoubesotiresome!”youmustknowthatIamthinkingofhismarryingoneofthem.”“Isthathisdesigninsettlinghere?”“Design!Nonsense,howcanyoutalkso!Butitisverylikelythathemayfallinlovewithoneofthem,andthereforeyoumustvisithimassoonashecomes.”第29页第30页“Oh!MydearMr.Bennet,”asheenteredtheroom,“wehavehadamostdelightfulevening,amostexcellentball.Iwishyouhasbeenthere.Janewassoadmired,nothingcouldbelikeit.Everybodysaidhowwellshelooked;andMr.Bingleythoughtherquitebeautiful,anddancedwithhertwice.Onlythinkofthatmydear;heactuallydancedwithtwice;andshewastheonlycreatureintheroomthatheaskedasecondtimeIwassovexed（焦虑）toseehimstandupwithher.Iamquitedelightedwithhim.Heissoexcessivelyhandsome!第31页ActionDescriptionMr.Bingleyhassoonmadehimselfacquaintedwithalltheprincipalpeopleintheroom;hewaslivelyandunreserved,dancedeverydance,wasangrythattheballclosedsoearly,andtalkedofgivingonehimselfatNetherfield.Suchamiable（和善可亲）qualitiesmustspeakofthemselves.Whatacontrastbetweenhimandhisfriend!Mr.DarcydancedonlyoncewithMrs.HurstandoncewithMissBingley,declinedbeingintroducedtoanyotherlady,andspenttherestoftheeveninginwalkingabouttheroom,speakingoccasionallytooneofhisownparty.第32页第33页MentalDescriptionThemannerinwhichtheyspokeoftheMerytonassemblywassufficientlycharacteristic.Bingleyhasnevermetwithpleasantpeopleorprettiergirls;everybodyhadbeenmostkindandattentivetohim,therehadbeennoformality,nostiffness,hehadsoonfeltacquaintedwithalltheroom;andastoMissBennet,hecouldnotconceiveanangelmorebeautiful.Darcy,onthecontrary,hasseenacollectionofpeopleinwhomtherewaslittlebeautyandnofashion,fornoneofwhomhehadfeltthesmallestinterest,andfromnonereceivedeitherattentionorpleasure.MissBennetheacknowledgedtobepretty,butshesmiledtoomuch.第34页第35页第36页ScenedescriptionItwasbeautifulspringweather,butneitherdogsnorhumanswereawareofit.Eachdaythesunroseearlierandsetlater.Itwasdawnbythreeinthemorning,andtwilightlingeredtillnineatnight.Thewholelongdaywasablazeofsunshine.Theghostly（幽灵，可怕）wintersilencehadgivenwaytothegreatspringmurmurofawakeninglife.Thismurmurarosefromalltheland,fraught（充满）withthejoyofliving.Itcamefromthethingthatlivedandmovedagain,thingswhichhadbeenasdeadandwhichhadnotmovedduringthelongmonthsoffrost.Thesap（树液）wasrisinginthepines.Thewillowsandaspens（山杨树）wereburstingoutinyoungbuds.Shrubsandvineswereputtingonfreshgarbs（服装，打扮）ofgreen.(takenfromThe Call of the Wild)第37页第38页MovieWritingPleasewatchthemovieIfYouaretheOne,andthenwriteadescriptiveessayaboutthemaincharacters.第39页Marriage SeekingAprettyyoungladywassittingtherequietly.Withthesunshiningcharminghair,asenseofdesolation(忧伤)flashedthroughthebeautifulfacebelow.Awakingfromtheimaginationafewsecondslater,QinFenwenttowardsherandsaidhellotoher.Atthismoment,Qingotachancetoobserveheratsuchaclosedistance.Shewaswell-shapedindeed.Thewhiteshirtwithwell-designedV-neckband（衣领）showedherattractivechestandherlongandstraightlegsunderablackminiskirtaddedamaturesenseoffemininitytoher.Howcanthisprettycharmingladybeleft?AquestionoccurredtoQinsmind.第40页True LoveQinFendidntloveher,eventhoughshewasbeautiful.Shehadanarrestingface,pointed（尖角）chin（下巴）,square（颚）jaw.Hereyeswerepaleblackwithoutatouchofhazel（淡褐色）,starred（点缀）withbristly，（短而硬）blacklashes（睫毛）andslightlytilted（翘起）attheends.Abovethem,herthickblackbrows（眉毛）slanted（倾斜）upward,cuttingastartlingoblique（倾斜）lineinherwhiteskin.第41页ABlindDateShockedbythefirstsightoftheairhostess,QinFenadmiredthebeauty:shewasdressedinawhiteshort-sleevedshirtwithV-collar,ablackknee-lengthskirt,andapairofsimplehigh-heeledsandals.Especiallyherslenderlegs,henoticed,weremuchmoreattractive.Shewassittingonsofaelegantly,withherlegscrossed.Whenshespoke,thewordsfromhersexyplumplipsweremelancholy(忧郁).Andhereyesconveyedthatshewasinadeeptrance（恍惚，发呆）.第42页Oneday,hewrotedownhismarriagepersonal:“Lookingforhotguys?Dontbother.Nogold-diggerseither.To avoid mutualdisappointed.PhDs need no reply,womenentrepreneurs need no reply(except tradeswomen andpeddlers).PerfectmenlikeAndyLauandTomCruisewontbeseekingyouhere.NordoIexpecttofindJuliaRoberts.Evenifyouwereagoddess,Icouldnthandleyou.Iamnotexpectingacover-girltoblowmeawaywithyourbeauty.Justasane,healthywoman,modernoutside,andtraditionalinside.Slightly demure(怕羞,忸怩)would be ideal.Dont be tooyoung.Dontbetoocomplicated”第43页Wearing a pair of sunglasses and white shirt,a manwriggled（扭动）hishipandwalkedslowlytowardshim.Witharuddy（红润）face,helookedmuchlikeawoman,especiallyhisdressingstyle.Therewasastrangesight（眼神）inhissunken（凹陷）eyestowardsQinFen.第44页Farfromhissightwasagirlwhohadslenderlegsandgood-lookingface.Walkingnearby,QinFentookalookatherfromhead-to-feet:longcurledblackhairbeautifullytwisted（扭曲）,baby-likeskinandasexymouth.Fromheruniqueclothesand temperament（气质）,we all knew she was an airhostess.第45页