2023年作文范文之雅思5.5分作文.docx

雅思5.5分作文
【篇一：雅思5.5分作文批改范例】

一． the table shows the total length of high speed train track in three countries
the table presents the information about the total length of high speed train track in china,france and japan in 1990,2010 and the projection for 2010.
it is clear that japan had the longest high speed train track in1990,with 1200 kms,while france ranked second position with 700kmsand china had no high train track at this time .however, the next two decade experienced a sharp increase in high speed train tracks in china, reaching up to 5800kms in 2010, while the length of high speed train track was 2600kms and 2500kms in france and japan respectively in the same year.
it is predicted that china will remain on the upward trend in the next decade . in 2020,the length of high train track in china is expected to reach 13400kms, which is over three times the length of the other countries’ .the length of total high train track in france is expected to increase gradually to 3900,while that in japan, it is predicted to see a relatively slow increase ,reaching only 3600kms in 2020.
overall,since china began the project of high speed train, the total length of high speed train track has increased dramatically in the past few years ,while the industry of high speed train in france and japan rose relatively steadily.
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【篇二：雅思55分难吗】

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雅思55分难吗
摘要： 雅思5.5分难吗 ?很多考生担心自己的英语基础不好，担心自己考不到5.5分，今天大家就以英语四级的为标准比较一下雅思5.5的难度，以及雅思自己备考策略!
基本上可以这样比较， 雅思 5.5-6，相当于四级水平或偏上，雅思6-6.5 相当于六级水平，但并不是肯定的。因为雅思考是听说读写都要考。尤其是口语，属于我们国家大部分人的弱项，所以需要特别注意。基本上如果考过四六级的，复习2-3个月就能达到雅思同等水平。
网友经验：
考前三个月制定系统的复习计划,剑桥456重点做和理解,然后总结出自己的方法,阅读和听力应该都可以保证6分
作文的话去买本慎小嶷的作文指导书,5.5分以上是很轻松的
口语的话短时间提高不是很大,但考试时一定要注意礼貌和微笑,这会给考官留下很好的印象,5.5分也就差不多了
小马 建议：
听力方面，这是个最需要平时积累的 雅思考试 项目，想要在听力上面拿到雅思高分成绩，突击是完全解决不了问题的。从词汇到语音，各种问题都是需要 大家在平时的积累过程当中才能得到解决的。大家不妨可以从看美剧开始，当然如果喜欢看英剧就更好了。从需要字幕到不看字幕，如果愿意参加字幕组那么帮助就 更大。在临近考试的时候突击一下针对 雅思听力 考试的方法，还是有事半功倍的效果。雅思的听力在语速和口音上都很适中，如果平时能够用心多听，问题不大。
阅读方面，很多考生都觉得 雅思阅读 是阻碍大家拿到雅思高分成绩的一大障碍。因为雅思阅读文章很不容易做。这里教大家一个最关键的窍门，就是抓定 位词，材料就是做剑4到剑7的真题。定位词对很多人来说都是一个新的概念，做阅读题的时候不只是埋头阅读，虽然一开始时间总是个问题，也许根据定位词，题 目倒是能大致做对，但总是来不及做完，但熟能生巧后做题速度就提高了许多。
写作方面， 雅思写作 没有什么捷径可走，多写多练可能是惟一的方法。想要在写作上面拿到雅思高分成绩，就必须要贴近英语写作思维，这一点对中国的考生来说是需要一定的时间来练习的，只有经常写，经常观摩一些高分的范文，才能真正找到感觉，写起来也就不费劲了。
口语方面， 雅思口语 是中国考生答得最差的一个考试科目，这和中国的英语教育习惯有很大的关系.想要在口语中拿到雅思高分成绩，就必须要做到敢 说，并且能说得好，说的有条理。花时间练习口语，特别是针对第二第三部分话题的回答思路和模式，好好练习的话是会很有效果的。面试时一定要避免紧张慌乱的 心境，尽量做到有条理有逻辑地答复。
以上是雅思5.5分难吗的回答，总体来说雅思5.5分并不是一个很高的分数，只要考生能够坚持长久的复习就能够达到!
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【篇三：a类5.5分雅思剑桥7test1大作文】

1..作文题目：
discuss both these views and give your own opinion
2.学生原文：
everyone believed that talents is the essential requirement to be successful. however, some famous and successful person always recognize them that they are no any talents but success in the final. so, weather the talents can decide the future is hard to illustrate. and here are my own view.i think that talents is an very important factor to decide the future of a person, because there are lots of examples can also demonstrate it. if someone has unique talents for some sports or music, it must help him progress more than others who not have this talents. and there is another advantage of talents is that they will be saw by more people because gift always can attract people. this feature causes the talents to have more chance to performance. the famous basketball player named curry, who is the famous talents. in 2014, curry showed a sharply increase in his basketball skills. the most surprising thing is that he start to play basketball when was study in university, and it later than the date of all the nba basketball players. curry demonstrate the truth of gifts make a people spend less time and energy to get success.
on the other hand, it is also true that some people who have no any talents but they still success rely on their teachers and endeavor. i also trust that the endeavor can replace the talents. although some children have no innovation to study some kinds of skills, they still can try their best to break out the weakness of without talents. kobe is a famous basketball player too, but experts said that the gift of curry is better than the talents of kobe. however, curry never belong the kobe in basketball. when someone asked kobe why, he answered: have you seen the sun on 5 am. so, kobe told us that the strive and confident is the second key to get success. in the conclusion, the significance of the strive is the same important as the talents. if you want to be a sported or musicals, the talents and strive both can take you to the path of success.
3.老师批改
文中标识： 用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加
everyone believed that talents is the essential requirement to be successful. (这句话说everyone太绝对了一些，可以改为：it is often considered that talent is ...) however, some famous and successful person always recognize them that they are no any talents but success in the final. (这里只是说了一些名人，听上去有点虚，用词改进：there do exist examples where success comes out of those without outstanding gifts.) so, weather the talents can decide the future is hard to illustrate. and here are my own view.
i think that talents is an (a) very important factor to decide (表达在...方面可以用：in terms of deciding) the future of a person, because there are lots of examples can also
demonstrate it (1. 语法上这句话出现了are和can demonstrate两组谓语。2. 用词改进：and lots of
句话没有谓语，改为：one example would be the famous basketball player curry.) in 2014, curry showed a sharply increase in his basketball skills. the most surprising thing is that he start (过去，started) to play basketball when was study(ing) in
university, and it later than the date of all the nba basketball players. (组句不通，改为：this was much later than almost all current nba players.) curry demonstrate the truth of gifts make a people spend less time and energy to get success.
on the other hand, it is also true that some people who have no any talents but they still success
用词和上一句although some born with less gifts), they still can try their best to break out the weakness of without talents. kobe is a famous basketball player too, but experts said that the gift of curry is better than the talents of kobe. however, curry never belong (我想你要说的是打败：defeat, 或者超越：excel)the (去除) kobe in basketball. when someone asked kobe why, he answered: have you seen the sun on 5 am. so, kobe told us that the strive and confident is the second key to get success. in the (不需要，去除) conclusion, the significance of the strive is the same important (语法错误，纠正：of the same importance或as important as) as the talents. if you want to be a sported or musicals, the talents and strive both can take you to the path of success. (用词改进：hence, both the nature and nurture play significant roles in one’s success.)
4.作文总评
批改by will
本次批改严格按照ilets大作文评分标准进行。ilets大作文评分项：tr (论证扣题度), cc (连贯性及一致性), gra (语法范围及精准度), lr (词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。
总评5.5 （tr5.5 cc5.5 lr5.0 gra5.5）
1. 语法上偶尔出现词性问题以及谓语问题，总体不多。但语法变化较少，从句的使用偏少。
2. 用词重复有点多了，练习的时候可以查查同义词再写。
3. 分段正确，连接词使用正确。
4. 例子和内容相对狭隘了，限制在了同一个体育方面。
5.作文范文：
it is possible that genetics as nature and environment as nurture are not mutuallyexclusive. this assumption may explain in part the different levels of personal ability in music,art, sport and so on. in other words, good training is as important as natural talents.
from one point of view, being born with special gifts is certainly an advantage. what tells adifference is the innate talent which may be something that cannot be taught, and somethingmoney cannot buy. that is to say, without such born talent, no matter how good the teacher isor how frequently a person practices, there is little hope for him or her to become an excellentmusician, artist, or sports player. underlying this view is the fact that there is more to anatural skill than a learned technique. indeed, some people do have talents that are probablyinherited via their genes, allowing them to excel in specific fields. in comparison, more hard-working students are likely to find it next to impossible to reach as high a level as desired.
nevertheless, from the other point of view, it seems that in right environment, practice wouldmake perfect. hard work could make a difference in children who are motivated to be aiminghigh in whatever discipline, including music, art or sport. at school, plenty of exceptionalexamples are found as evidence to support the claim that a child can acquire specific skillsthrough continuous training under appropriate guidance. this implies the importance oflearning with natural gifts or without. further, it may be said that gifted persons would remainonly gifted persons if their talents were not developed properly. actually, the currenteducation systems are based on the belief that all children can be taught to learn different skills,however demanding.
as a conclusion, any child can be trained to different degrees to become professionals, but tobe really good in such areas as music, art and sport, then probably certain talents are required.the innate ability is always a plus, but it does not mean that the born talent is itself aguarantee for success. nor does it indicate that, for not being born with certain talents,people should not at all learn particular skills.