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1、4独立写作开头段的写 法-September-啕婷一RequirementT OG:T Score 5T An essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following:T Effectively address the topic and task.T Is well organized and well developed,using clearly appropriate explanations,exemplifications,and/or details.T Displays unity,progression,an
2、d coherence.T Displays consistent facility in the use of language,demonstrating syntactic variety,appropriate word choice,and idiomatically,though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors.2Paragraph II.Paraphrase the argument 改述原题(背景)II.Counterargument 反方观点III.Main Idea发表自己的观点a What the tonic
3、 isT Displays consistent facility in the use of language,demonstrating syntactic variety,appropriate word choice.1./oHc一般就在题目中;2.为体现句法的多样性和用词的准确性,不能照抄原题;3.需要对原题进行恰当而准确地改述,即paraphrase.4.What is paraphrase?A paraphrase of something written or spoken is the same thing expressed in a different way.-柯林斯英
4、汉双解大辞典4e.QDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.5How to paraphrase the topic?1.形式与内容的严格对应a)词与词的替换;(synonym)b)词类替换;(word-phrase)c)词T生替换(noun-verb,a
5、djective-noun)2.意义的对应形式与内容的对应a)词与词的替换(synonym)133.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?A persons childhood years(the time from birth to twelve years of age)are the most important years of a persons life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Brainstorming:a persons
6、-ones,someonesimportant significant,momentousof a persons life-in ones lifetimeParaphrase:Ones childhood years are the most significant years in his lifetime.7词与词的替换(syncnym)9.Some people prefer to live in a small town.Others prefer to live in a big city.Which place would you prefer to live in?Use s
7、pecific reasons and details to support your answer.Brainstorming:prefer to do sth-would rather do sthlive-reside,dwellsmall-littlebig city metroplisParaphase:Some people prefer to reside in a small town.Others would rather live in a metroplis.8词类替换b)word-phrase11.Do you agree or disagree with the fo
8、llowing statement?Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their university libraries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.Brainstorming:should do-be required to do,be supposed to dothe same amount of money the equival
9、ent moneyParaphase:Un versifies are supposed to render the equivalent money to their students sports activities as they do to the university libraries.9词性替换c)noun-verb,adjective-noun35.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Attending a live performance(for example,a play,concert,or sp
10、orting event)is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.Brainstorming:attend sth-attendance in sthbe more enjoyable have/bring/produce more joy/delight/pleasureParaphase:Attendance in a live performance brings more pleasure
11、than watching the same one on televison.10意义的对应9.Some people prefer to live in a small town.Others prefer to live in a big city.Which place would you prefer to live in?Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.Paraphrase:Nowadays,people seldom agree with each other even in such trivial
12、 issues as preferance between living in a big city and a small town.133.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?A persons childhood years(the time from birth to twelve years of age)are the most important years of a persons life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.P
13、araphrase:When looking back upon his lifetime,one may regard his childhood as the most significant period in his lifetime.11Sentence Ii.在形式与内容对应的改述中,一般格式较为固定:Nowadays,people often consider/regard/hold that.Nowadays,people tend to/would like to.In most cases,people argue/contend that.In modern societ
14、y,there is a tendency/phenomenon/controversy that.Nowadays,some people/while others.2.在只有意义对应的改述中,格式较为自由、开放,可以 展示更多的语法可能性与表达的多样性。12ExamplesDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
15、.Sentence I:Nowadays,people often consider that only the ones who earn a large amount of money are successful.Nowadays,people would like to hold the view that only those who earn much material wealth can be viewed as the successful ones.Nowadays,many people believe that a large income equals success
16、.Practice:175.Some students like classes where teachers lecture(do all of the talking)in class.Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking.Which type of class do you prefer?Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.13b.Shcwycur personal cpinicn要求:观点鲜明,简明扼要。
17、Sentence II常用句型:前半句:As far as I am concerned/In my point of view/As for me/For my part/In terms of me/Personally speaking,.后半句:I would say/assert that.I tend to agree/disagree thatThere is something certain/wrong to say/consider that.It is no doubt that.完整的句子:It seems to me that 14Examples27.Do you
18、agree or disagree with the following statement?People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Sentence II:In my opinion,there really is something wrong,nevertheless,to think we could be finally successful by only doing things t
19、hat we do enjoy doing.As far as I am concerned,it is no doubt that in some cases,people should do what they in fact do not enjoying doing in order to be successful.For my part,I tend to agree that under some circumstances people ought to do what they are not glad to do.Practice:175.Some students lik
20、e classes where teachers lecture(do all of the talking)in class.Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking.Which type of class do you prefer?Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.15C.Suppcrtvcurcpinicn对接下来中间段要展开的两至三个分论点用一个原因状语 从句或名词短语简要地提及一般接在Sentence
21、II后作状语,不另成句。Why?使作者清楚文章的框架,便于预期和理解加深读者对文章内容的记忆限制思维的广度,使作者能深入思考理由和例证显示语言变化能力增加文章字数16常用句型I.名词短语:.,because of/due to/on account of/in view of/in regard to/in terms of/considering/given/forII.原因状语从句:.,given that/considering(the fact that)/for/since/seeing that/now that/as/in view of the fact that/in tha
22、t/for the reason that.17SampleSample 1Nowadays,people often consider that.As far as I am concerned,I would say that.,because of.Sample IINowadays,people tend to.For my part,I tend to agree/disagree that.,for the reason that.18Example话题:电视已经成为书本更有效的学习方式观点:完全同意理由1:电视画面和声音结合,吸引人,注意力集中,学习效率高。理由2:电视节目丰富多
23、彩,信息量大,更新速度快。Nowadcys,people often consider thnt television has become a better way to study than a book.As far rs I am concerned,I tend to agree with the argument because 0f the benefits on its vivid combination of images and sound,as well as its good renewal of information they bring to our study.
24、19Example话题:学校应当要求学生去上课观点:同意理由1:学生上课能够和同学互相学习,学习他们的思维方式,团队精 神有所提高理由2:学生上课是责任和纪律要求,如果学生想上课就上课,那么学 校将无法管理Nowadays,people often argue that whether universities should require their students to attend their classes.In my point of view,I would say that attending classes is quite indispensable for the stu
25、dents,for the reason that it would enhance their ability of teamwork and facilitate the better official administration on them.20其他高频句架T教育与校园生活I 1了大学里的作弊现象已经变得越来越严重,原因是,目前 教育体系的目标不是提高学生的素质,而是提高他们的 考试能力。I 高分句架:is becoming a serious problem.This is because.21其他高频句架T教育与校园生活12T现在,除了学习以外,还应鼓励学生们在其他很多方面 培
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