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1、大学英语六级写作经典范文及点评大学生自我创业已经不是一个新鲜的话题了。那么自我创业有何利,又有何弊呢?看过本文之后你就知道了。或许这对面临毕业的你还是个不小的帮助呢!Self employmentSelf employment could bring many advantages.One of the advantages of be i ng se I f-emp I oyed i s that the prof i t the bus i ness makes be I ongs to the owner.If the self-employed person succeeds in b
2、usiness,he has the chance to earn a great deal of money.The profit earned is the reward for the owner s effort,ability and creativity.Thus,a second advantage is that a person s intelligence and abilities have a direct effect on the earnings.A third advantage of being self-employed is that a person c
3、an control his working hours.While not al I self-employed people are completely free,most of them have more control over this area than the salaried people.However,be i ng se I f-emp I oyed i s not wi thout prob I ems.First,being one s own boss places the responsibility directly on that individual s
4、houlders.Everyone has some weaknesses in a certain aspects.These weaknesses will affect how successful a self-employed person is.Second,though the self-employed can earn considerable profits with a successful business,Iosses can force them out of bus i ness and somet imes,pI ace them i n debt.A thir
5、d disadvantage concerns income security.Self-employed people have no guaranteed wage.Their earnings can vary greatly,depending on business conditions.Salaried people,however,can generally count on continued earnings.In addition,salaried people often enjoy fringe benefits that mean greater peace of m
6、ind.One of these benefits may be insurance paid for by the employer that continues the employee s salary in the event of sickness or accident while many self-employed people do not have such protection.1253 words行文点评文章结构简单明了。第一段阐述了自我创业的3个好处。第二段分析了自我创 业所存在的问题。两段中“first,second,third”的使用,不仅使文章在句式上显得条理分
7、明,更在内容上体现了连贯性。好文妙译自我创业自我创业的好处之一是商业利润归创业者所有。如果创业者生意成功,他有可 能挣很多钱。这些利润是对创业者努力、能力和创造力的回报。因此,自我创业的 第二个好处是一个人的才智和能力直接反映在收入上。自我创业的第三个优势是自 己做老板能够支配自己的工作时间。虽然不是所有的创业者都有完全的自由,但是 相对于工薪族来说,他们大多数人在这方面拥有更多的自主权。2但是,自我创业并不是一帆风顺的事。首先,做自己的老板把责任直接放到了 个人的肩上。每个人在某些方面都会有一些弱点,而这些弱点会对创业者的成功产 生影响。其次,自己做老板时,虽然生意成功会带来很大的盈利,但是
8、一旦失败就 可能造成破产,有时甚至会负债累累。第三个弊端涉及收入的稳定性。创业者没有 稳定的工资。依据生意的状况,他们的收入浮动很大。而工薪族通常可以依靠持续 稳定的工资。此外,他们通常可以享受着额外福利,这意味着他们的心态可以更加 的平和。其中一项福利就是由雇主为雇员支付保险,以保障他们在生病或遇到意外 的情况下还能继续领到工资。相比之下,很多创业者就没有这种保障了。词汇斟酌in debt 负债count on 指望,依靠fringe a.附加的,额外的;边缘的佳句临摹【注释】in the event of sth 万;倘若【临摹】In the event of his death Shel
9、ia will inherit the money.一旦 他故去,希拉就会继承这笔钱。思如泉涌Something attempted,something done.有尝试就会有收获。Actions speak louder than words.彳亍动月生于语言。有些人并非特别聪明,却能得到大家的认可和支持。我们说这些人有个人魅力。个 人魅力不仅源于聪明、诚实等优秀品质,还源于与他人交往时的态度和技巧。Communicating a Sense of Personal Power3Communicating a sense of personal power comes from a beli
10、ef that you can reach your goals in your own way.Powerful people give others power and encourage others to express themselves openly.You communicate a sense of personal power by developing these traits:Author i tyAuthority is inner confidence a trust in your skills and abilities.It comes from the in
11、side,from an attitude of“I can do that”.I deserve success”.This attitude radiates outward as you assert your right,honestly ask for what you want and need,and develop a wi I I ingness to give to others and yourself.Being self-assuredSelf-assured behavior is active,direct,and honest.It communicates a
12、n impression of self-respect and respect for others.By being self-assured,we v i ew our wants,needs,and r i ghts as equa I w i th those of others.A se I f-assured person wins by influencing,listening,and negotiating so that other people choose to cooperate wi I I ingly.Access i b i I i tyThe powerfu
13、l person is a master net worker.Good networking increases your vi s i bi I i ty and gi ves you a vaIuabIe circle of peopIe from whom you can give and receive support and information.Imagine yourself as the center of a wheel surrounded by spokes of contacts.Image4You communicate power through your im
14、age.Do you project an image cons i stent w i th strong I eadersh i p?Stand ta II and wa I k proud I y,remember i ng that you have value as a person.When you meet others,make direct contact and keep your handshake firm and friendly.Clearly state who you are and what you do.Communication habitsTake a
15、deep breath to project a firm voice.Avoid slang,and jargon,and vocal hesitations that can hinder effective communication.Use only the body movements and gestures necessary to make your point,no more.Learn how to write clearly and concisely.1312 words行文点评文章是总分结构。第一段先说明发挥你的个人魅力的信念来源:你可以用自己 的方式实现自己的目标。
16、接着作者从五个方面介绍个人魅力的通常表现,每个方面 作者都指明了它对发挥个人魅力的重要性,以及如何做到这一点。好文妙译以个人魅力交流5发挥你的个人魅力来源于这样一个信念:即你可以用自己的方式实现自己的目标。有影响力的人赋予他人力量并鼓励他人公开表述自己的意见。发挥个人魅力通常体 现在以下几个方面:威信威信是内在的信心,即坚信自己的技能和能力。它来自于内心,来自于“我能 做好那件事”、“我会成功”的态度。当你维护你的权利,真诚地去寻求你的所需 所想,并愿意为他人和自己做出奉献的时候,这种态度就会外露出来。自信自信表现为积极、直率和诚实。它表达了一种自尊和尊重他人的意愿。通过自 信,我们视自己的需
17、求和权利与他人的需要和权利是平等的。一个自信的人通过影 响、倾听与讨论来赢取他人自愿的合作。亲和力一个有影响力的人是人际交往的大师。良好的人际交往会使你为人所知,使你 周围有一个高层次的人际关系网,从他们那里你可以给予或获得支持与信息。把你 自己想象成轮轴,周围由关系的辐条环绕。形象你可以通过你的形象来施加影响力。你想象过自己具有极强的领导能力的形象 吗?站直,昂首挺胸地前进,记住,作为一个人你自身具有价值。当你与他人会面时,要直接接触,友好而有力地握手。清楚地表达你是谁,是做什么的。交流习惯深吸一口气,说出坚定的话语,避免使用俚语、行话,说话不要吞吞吐吐,否 则会影响有效的交流。在必要时使用
18、身体语言和手势,多则无益。要学会如何用笔 头清晰而简洁地表达自己的思想感情。6词汇斟酌trait n.显著的特点,特性authority n.权威,威信,权威人士radiate vt.放射,辐射,传播assert v.断言,声称negotiate v.(与某人)商议,谈判,磋商,accessibility n.易寸妾近,可至达spoke n.辐条slang n.俚语jargon n.行话佳句临摹【注释】be consistent with一致,相符【临摹】What you said now is not consistent with what you said last week.你现在说的
19、话与你上星期说的话不相符。思如泉涌As a man s heart is,so does he speak.言为心声。A great talker is a great liar.最会饶舌的人也是最会说谎的人。很多人都认为那些身处象牙塔的大学生们过得很安逸,其实不然。他们每天也要面 临着很多压力:高额学费带来的经济压力,父母要求过高所带来的精神压力College PressureI see two kinds of pressure working on college students today:economic pressure,parental pressure.It is easy
20、to look around for rebels to blame 7the colleges for charging too much money,the parents for pushing them too far.But there are no rebels,only victims.The pressure is heavy on students who just want to graduate and get a job.If I were an employer I would rather employ graduates who have this range a
21、nd curiosity than those who narrowly pursued safe subjects and high grades.I know incalculable students whose inquiring minds cheer me.I I i ke to hear the play of thei r ideas.I don t know if they are gett ing A or C,and I don t care.I also like them as people.The country needs them,and they will f
22、ind satisfying jobs.I tell them to relax,but they can t.Nor can I blame them.They live in a brutal economy.Today it is not unusual for a student,even if he works part time at college and full time during the summer,to increase to 5,000 in loans after graduation.Encouraged at commencement to go forth
23、 i nto the wor Id,he i s a I ready beh i nd as he goes forth.How could he not feel under pressure throughout college to prepare for this day of reckoning?AI ong wi th econom i c pressure goes parenta I pressure.Inevitably,the two are deeply integrated.Poor students!They are caught in one of the olde
24、st webs of love and duty and guilt.The parents mean well:they are trying to steer their sons and daughters toward a secure future.But the sons and daughters want to major in history or classics or philosophysubjects with no“practical“value.Where s the payoff on the humanities?It s not easy to persua
25、de such loving parents that the human i t i es do i ndeed pay off.The i nteI IectuaI facu11 i es 8developed by studying subjects like history and classics are just the faculties that make creative leaders in business or almost any general field.Luckily for me,most of them got into their field by an
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