浙江省英语首考试题和解析备课讲稿.docx

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10月首考书面表达评析
◆题型解读
和以往的高考英语命题作文不同，读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络和关系。续写这篇短文时，考生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用英语表达出来。同时，在组织语言时，切记使用5个以上给出的提示词。
◆故事主线
已知线索：
吵架——出走——迷路——失联——自救——思念——寻路——直升机——飞离……拂晓……
可续写线索：
失望？坚信？曲折？直升机？Tom？自救？获救？
◆续写词汇
已给提示词汇：
Jane, Tom, lake, walk, climb, at a distance, to her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse
话题激活词汇：
环境：forest, stream, rock, berry, valley, steep, cave, lake, waterfall (人口、环境与自然)
困难：hunger, starve, thirsty, injure, broken, blood, panic, shelter, survive (survival), suffer,  cold, severe (天气与自然灾害)
活动: walk, climb, fall, crawl, taste, attempt, struggle to one’s feet, make one’s way to, pick  up  (人体与动作)
情绪：to one’s great joy, break down
救援：rescue team, doctor, search for, spot  (天气与自然灾害)
意志品质：calm, courage, will (性格与行为特征)
评价：amazing, make it
Possible versions: 
1.
Paragraph 1:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. Although she felt a little sad, she didn’t get fearful. She thought about Tom. “He must have called for those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and will come back again! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom. 
Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a huge flat rock in an open area at a distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. To her great joy, the helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she flagged the yellow blouse. Luckily, the helicopter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane. She broke down and burst into tears.     
(续写词数：154)
2.
Paragraph 1:
    But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane tried to find shelter from the night cold. But unfortunately, she slipped over and broke her leg. With the extreme pain, Jane managed to make her way to a rock for shelter. Under the rock, Jane stayed wide awake, knowing she might not be able to get to the lake with a broken leg. “Don’t be afraid. Tom must be searching for me. And the helicopter will come back tomorrow,” she thought to herself. After quite a while, Jane fell asleep.

Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She struggled to her feet and headed for the stream. After having some berries and stream water, Jane walked slowly to an open area to wait for her rescue. To her great joy, she soon heard the helicopter. Jane madly waved her yellow blouse when it came into sight. Sadly, the helicopter flied away again. However, soon came the rescue team, together with Tom, who had found Jane’s location from the helicopter. Jane was saved.
(续写词数：163)

附：2016浙江书面表达应用文分析
第一节 应用文写作
1. 真题回顾 
假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生 (exchange student) 去加拿大一所高中学习，住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件，内容包括：
    1. 介绍自己；
    2. 告知到达时间；
    3. 询问应做何准备。
注意：
    1. 词数80左右；
    2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考范文
Dear Lynn,
    I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with your family in the next few months while I’m studying at the local high school. Thank you for having me! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.
    Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes,
Li Hua

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