高三英语提纲写作点拨.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,高三英语提纲写作点拨,高三英语提纲写作点拨高三英语提纲写作点拨,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,糟糕作文 评,1,分,学生考试作文,2,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,学生考试作文,审题不明作文 评,1,分,3,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,学生考试作文,抄袭阅读作文 评,0,分,4,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,学生考试作文,抄袭完型 评,0,分,5,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,学生考试作文,良好作文 评,18,分,6,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,学生考试作文,优秀作文 评,22,分,7,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,学生考试作文,优秀作文 评,21,分,8,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,失分原因,(1),：,审题不认真,-,跑题,审题不仔细,-,要点不全,9,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,失分原因,(2),：,内容不充实，只写要点，没有扩展,10,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,失分原因,(3),：,书写潦草,乱涂乱擦,一段到底,11,失分原因分析之二,可以避免的失分原因（,2,）,内容,失分原因,(4),：,抄袭阅读,-,零分,抄袭完型,-,零分,抄袭改错,-,零分,12,考试大纲：,要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇,120,个单词左右的短文，情景的形式包括,图表、图画、提纲、信函、短文,等。考生应能：,（,1,）根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法，选用适当的词汇；,（,2,）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想。,13,Composition writingseries,写作点拨系列,The outline of composition writing,写作之提纲作文,14,书面表达,2014,年新课标,2,卷书面表达终于有所改变，李华没有再来和今年的高考学生说再见，考了十年的书信也终于换了版本，但是体裁依然是考生非常熟悉的应用文,只不过考了征文的形式。很多学生觉得仿佛回到了小学写语文作文的感觉，仔细分析下来，今年的书面表达可以说是老酒装新瓶，难度及往年持平。旨在考查考生能否正常使用日常语言交际的能力。要求考生以自己为主人公写征文畅想一下十年后的自己，以家庭，工作，业余生活展开，第一次高考跟随了政治的主旋律,中国梦,梦想。,15,真题回放,一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。,家庭 工作 业余生活,注意,:1.,次数,100,左右；,2.,可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；,3.,开头语已为你写好,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.,16,【审题抓准信息,快速推断】,项目,结论,体裁,_,话题,_,时态,_,人称,_,提纲作文,(,说明文）,十年后的我,一般,将来时为主,第一人称为主,17,【,写作指导,】,本文的话题是“十年后的我“，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。,文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。,要点：,1.,十年以后的生活和现在是完全不一样，我会成为一个成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可爱的孩子。,2.,希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一个程序设计师。工作顺利和同事相处融洽。,3.,在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳，登山等等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。,【,一句多译,】,我希望我可以在一家电脑公司里做程序设计师。（,1,）,I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.,（,2,）,I hope I will work in a company which produces computer,and I can design some kinds of very good computer,。,18,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】,第,1段：点明话题,十年后的我,【,引入,3,分,】,【信息】,设想,十年后的生活及现在不同,【点拨】,第一人称,注意文章的逻辑性,【运用】,(1),十年以后的生活和现在是完全不一样。,I often imagine,my life will be like in the future.,I think my life,in ten years.,what,will be very different,19,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】,第,1段：点明话题,十年后的我,【,引入,7,分,】,【信息】,设想,十年后我的生活及现在不同,【点拨】,第一人称,注意文章的逻辑性,【运用】,(,2,),我有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可爱的孩子,。,I will have,，,probably with a lovely child.,my own family,20,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】,第,2段：点明话题,十年后我,的工作,【,引入,7,分,】,【信息】,设想,十年后的工作,【点拨】,一般将来时,【运用】,(,1,),希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一个程序设计师,。,I hope I will work in,as a program designer.,(,2,),工作顺利和同事相处融洽。,I will enjoy my work and,my colleagues,a computer company,get along well with,21,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】,第,3段：,点明话题,十年后我的业余生活,【,引入,8,分,】,【信息】,设想,十年后的我的业余生活,【点拨】,一般将来时,【运用】,(,1,),在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳，登山等等。,In my free time,I will continue to,such as swimming,running and various ball games.,(,2,),假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。,On my holidays,I will travel around the world.,my life will be much richer and more colorful.,take regular exercise,In a word,22,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.,I think my life will be very different in ten years.,I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family.Probably with a lovely child.,I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.I will enjoy my work and,get along well with,my colleagues,I will do a good job in whatever I do.,In my free time,I will continue to,take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I will travel around the world.,In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.,四,.,范文赏析,23,I often imagine which my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very difference in ten years.I will be twenty-eight year old by then.I will have my own family.Probably with a lovely child.,I hope I will work in a computer company as program designer.I will enjoy my work and got along well with his colleagues,I will do a good job whatever I do.,In my free time,I will continue to take regularly exercise,such as swimming,run and various ball games.On my holidays,I will travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and much colorful.,五,.,短文改错,what,different,years,a,get,my,in,regular,running,more,24,I often imagine,my life will be like,in,future.I think my life will be very different in ten,（,year,）,.,I will be twenty-eight years old by then.,I,（,have,）,my own family.,Probably,a lovely child.I hope I will work in a computer company as a program,(design).I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues,I will do,good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I will continue,(take)regular exercise,such as,(swim),running and various ball games.On my holidays,I will travel around the world.In a word,my life will be,much,(rich)and more colorful.,六,.,完形填空,what,the,years,swimming,Will have,with,designer,a,To take,richer,25,(2012山东高考),假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：,1.参加英语角的益处；,2.坚持写英语日记的作用；,3.英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。,注意：1.词数120150个；,2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,26,1.,Xinhua Middle School,2.,the first place,3.,the English contest,4.,experience in learning English,5.,First of all,6.,Secondly,7.,Thirdly,8.,English Corner,9.,EnjoyReading,10.,enlarge o,nes,vision,11.,develop a good habit of,12.,achieve a goal,27,【审题抓准信息,快速推断】,项目,结论,体裁,_,话题,_,时态,_,人称,_,提纲作文,(,说明文）,介绍你课外学习英语的经验,一般现在时为主,第一人称为主,28,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】,第,1段：点明话题,参加英语,竞赛,【,引入,3,分,】,【信息】,假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖,【点拨】,转化人,十年后的我,称,注意文章的逻辑性,【运用】,(1)我是新华中学的一名学生,名字叫李华。在不久前学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。,29,My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I _ in the English contest _ not long ago.,got the first place,held by our school,30,第,2段：列举学习英语的经验,【,作文重点,18,分,】,【信息】,参加英语角的益处；坚持写日记的作用,英文阅读网站对你的帮助,【点拨】,增加细节,使文章条理,【运用】,(,1,)首先,参加英语角有助于提高英语口语,所以无论什么时候有机会我都会把握它。,一般表达：First of all,attending English Corner is helpful to improve my oral English.Whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.,31,高级表达：,(用连词so合并句子),First of all,attending English Corner is of great help to improve my oral English,_,_,so whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.,32,(3)其次,我坚持写英语日记,这使我把发生在日常生活中的事情表达出来,通过这种方式能训练我的英语写作能力。,一般表达：Secondly,I keep writing English diaries.It enables me to express what happens in daily life and in this way I can practice my written English.,高级表达：(用非限制性定语从句连接成一个句子),Secondly,I keep writing English diaries,_,_ and in this way I can practice my written English.,which enables me to,express what happens in daily life,33,(4)再次,我也浏览英文阅读网站。,Thirdly,_.,(5)众所周知,我们需要泛读来开阔我们的视野,所以我们最好养成每天阅读的好习惯。,_,we need extensive reading to enlarge our vision,_reading English materials every day.,I also surf,EnjoyReading,on the Internet,As we all know,so wed better develop a good habit of,34,第,3段：学习英语的体会,【,结尾,3,分,】,【信息】,对课外学习英语的经验的总结,【点拨】,适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑,【运用】,(6)只有坚持我们已经决定要做的,我们才会达到,目标。,_we achieve a goal.,Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will,35,【注意事项】,这是一篇提纲作文。在写作时要注意以下几点：,1.认真审题和分析所给出的提纲,认清题目和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、大致内容以及文体。,2.每一个要点可以作为文章的一个段落层次。段落的展开应围绕提纲的中心和内容。,3.提纲只是对文章的提示和概括,不是主题句。考生需要根据提纲的性质,写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子,使之成为主题句,然后围绕主题句进行扩展。,4.收集材料支持主题句。,36,【,书面表达范文,短文改错,新型完型填空（三位一体）,】,My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I got the first place in the English contest held by our school not long ago.Here Id like to share my experience in learning English with you.,37,First of all,attending English Corner is of great help to improve my oral English,so whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.Secondly,I keep writing English diaries,which enables me to express what happens in daily life and in this,way I can practice my written English.Thirdly,I also surf,EnjoyReading,on the Internet.As we all know,we need extensive reading to enlarge our vision,so wed better develop a good habit of reading English materials every day.,Of course,Rome was not built in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.,38,【,书面表达,短文改错,新型完型填空（三位一体）,】,My name is Li Hua,student from Xinhua Middle School.I got the first place in the English contest h,o,ld,ing,by our school not long ago.Here Id like to share my experience,s,in learning English with you.,a,held,experience,39,First of all,attend English Corner is of great help to improve my oral English,so whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.Secondly,I ke,pt,writing English diaries,that,enables me to express what happens in daily life and in this,way I can practice,your,written English.Thirdly,I also surf,EnjoyReading,on the Internet.As we all know,we need extensive reading to enlarge our vision,but,wed better,to,develop a good habit of reading English materials every day.,Of course,Rome was not buil,ding,in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.,attending,keep,which,my,so,To/,built,40,【,书面表达,短文改错,新型完型填空,（三位一体）,】,My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I,1,（,g,e,t,）,the first place in the English contest held by our school not long ago.Here Id like,2,(,share,),my experience in learning English with you.,got,to share,41,First of all,attending English Corner is,3,great help to improve my oral English,so,4,there is an opportunity,Ill grasp,5,.Secondly,I keep writing English diaries,which enables me to express what happens in,6 (,day,),life and in thisway I can practice my,7,(,write,),English.Thirdly,I also surf,EnjoyReading,on the Internet.As we all know,we need extensive reading to,8 (,large,),our vision,so wed better develop a good habit of reading English,9 (,material,),every day.,Of course,Rome was not built in,10,day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.,of,whenever,it,daily,written,enlarge,materials,a,42,(,贵阳一中第五次,),“中国梦”已经成为一个社会热点话题，根据最近央视的社会调查，不同的人群有不同的梦想。请结合个人经历或感想。用英语写一篇关于“中国梦”的演讲稿。,注意：词数,100120,个，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。,43,1.“Chinese Dream”,2.a hot topic,3.a survey by CCTV,4.be admitted by a good university,5.make great contributions,6.reform the current education system,7.the burden of Chinese students,44,【审题抓准信息,快速推断】,项目,结论,体裁,_,话题,结合个人经历或感想,时态,_,人称,_,提纲作文,(,运用文）,一般现在时为主,第一人称为主,45,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】,第,1段：点明话题,我的中国梦,【,引入,3,分,】,【信息】,设想,自己的中国梦,-,被一所好大学录取,【点拨】,第一人称,注意文章的逻辑性,【运用】,(1),我能被一所好大学录取。,1.my“Chinese Dreams”is,that,I,can be admitted by,a good university.,46,第,2段：,结合高中学习经历,【,作文重点,18,分,】,【信息】,设想中国学生学习负担很重，呼吁改革目前的教育体制，学生有足够的时间休息和锻炼。,【点拨】,增加细节,使文章条理,【运用】,(,1,),中国学生学习负担很重，呼吁改革目前的教育体制，学生有足够的时间休息和锻炼。,Our country can take great measure,to reform,the current education system.,I think,the burden of Chinese students,is too heavy.,Students have,enough time to sleep,and exercise.,47,第,3段：,只有努力才能实现自己梦想,【,结尾,3,分,】,【信息】,自己的感想,【点拨】,适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑,【运用】,(6)只有坚持我已经决定要做的,我才,能实现我的“中国梦”。,_we achieve,my“Chinese Dream”,.,Only when,I,stick to what,I,have decided to do,can,48,【,书面表达,-,短文改错,-,新完型填空三位一体,】,Chinese Dream,“Chinese Dream”has become a hot topic among Chinese people.According to a survey by CCTV,different groups of people have different dreams.,As for me,my“Chinese Dreams”is that I can be admitted by a good university and after that,I can make great contributions to my country.Besides,I also dream the day when our country can take great measure to reform the current education system can come sooner.Because of so many tough years of study,I think the burden of Chinese students is too heavy.I hope high school students have enough time to sleep and exercise.,Only when,I,stick to what,I,have decided to do,can,we achieve,my“Chinese Dream”,.,49,【,书面表达,-,短文改错,-,新完型填空三位一体,】,Chinese Dream,“Chinese Dream”has become hot topic among Chinese people.According to a survey by CCTV,different groups of people have different dream.,As for me,my“Chinese Dreams”is that I can be admitting by a good university but after that,I can make greatly contributions to my country.However,I also dream the day where our country can take great measure to reforming the current education system can come sooner.Because of so much tough years of study,I think the burden of Chinese students is too heavy.,I hope high school students has enough time to sleep and exercise.,a,dreams,admitted,and,great,Besides,when,reform,many,have,50,【,书面表达,-,短文改错,-,新完型填空,三位一体,】,Chinese Dream,“Chinese Dream”,1,become hot a topic among Chinese people.According to,2,survey by CCTV,different groups of people have different dreams.,As for me,my“Chinese Dreams”is,3,I can be admitted by a good university,4,after that,I can make great,5,(contribution),to my country.Besides,I also dream the day when,6 (,we),country can take great measure,7,(reform),the current education system can come sooner.Because of so many tough,8 (,year),of study,I think the burden of,9,(China),students is too heavy.,I hope high school students have enough time,10 (,sleep),and exercise.,has,a,that,and,contributions,Besides,our,to reform,years,to sleep,Chinese,51,(,云南省,第,二,次,统测,),作文讲评,每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。,某英文报社正在举行以,“文明出国旅游”,为主题的,讨论,。假定你是李华，请给报社专栏编辑,写一封信,，,呼吁大家做文明游客,。要点如下：,1.,尊重习俗；,2.,不高声喧哗,；,3.,其它。,注意：词数,100120,个，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。,52,1.many holidaymakers,2.go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation,3.behave rudely,4.causes a big concern,5.How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic,6.respect and follow local customs,7.not talk loudly in public places,8.queue jumping is unacceptable,9.only in this way can we,53,【审题抓准信息,快速推断】,项目,结论,体裁,_,话题,以,“文明出国旅游”,为主题,时态,_,人称,_,书信（给编辑一封信）,一般现在时为主,及情态动词的应用,第一人称为主,54,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】,第,1段：点明话题,出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为,【,引入,6,分,】,【信息】,每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。,【,英语,】,Every year,a great many holidaymakers,go abroad,for sightseeing and relaxation,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them,behave rudely,which,causes a big concern,.,55,第,2段：,针对不文明行为三条建议,【,作文重点,12,分,】,【信息】,1.,尊重习俗,；,2.,不高声喧哗；,3.,其它。,【点拨】,扩充要点,使文章条理,【运用】,(,1,),建议注意自己的行为。首先，,尊重习俗,；其次，,不高声喧哗,，再次，插队是不被接受的。,In my opinion,it is necessary to,watch our manners,.,First,we must,respect and follow local customs,Besides,wed better,not talk loudly in public places,to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that,queue jumping is unacceptable,in many countries,。,56,第,3段：,【,结尾,6,分,】,【信息】,呼吁大家做文明游客,【点拨】,适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑,【运用】,我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。,more importantly,we should bear in mind that we are,representing our country,while abroad,so we need,to be cautious about how we act,only in this way can we enjoy our trips,abroad and have beautiful memories as well.,57,【,书面表达,-,短文改错,-,新完型填空三位一体,】,Dear Editor,Ive read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them behave rudely,which causes a big concern.How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.In my opinion,it is necessary to watch our manners.First,we must respect and follow local customs,Besides,wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries,more importantly,we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while a