2019届高考英语大一轮复习-写作必备-写作基础技能提升-二并列句写作导练讲义-外研版.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,二、并列句写作导练,写作要领,名师指导,即时演练,写作要领,并列句是指在一个句子中含有两个或两个以上互不依从的主谓结构构成的句子。并列分句通常由并列连词来连接。根据并列句中的前后两个分句的逻辑关系,可以分为以下几种,:,1.,添加关系,前后两个分句在意思上是顺连和添加,往往用并列连词,and,besides,等,连接。,我打算暑假期间在我市的外企中申请一份兼职工作,我刚刚写完申请信,和个人简历。,I,m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer,vacation,and,I have just completed my application letter and resume.(,2016,全国,),努力学习是我们的本分,要得到更高的教育和提高自己是我们人生的,目标。,To study hard is our own,business,and,to get a higher education and improve ourselves is our aim in our life.,(2015,重庆,),至于说普通话,更要注意的是发音。此外,你必须注意书写。,As for speaking,Mandarin,it,s,better to pay much attention,to the,pronunciation,.Besides,you,must take notice of the handwriting,.(2015,四川,),2.,转折关系,多用连词,but,yet,while,等连接。,我想去博物馆,但我的大多数同学都想去野餐。,I would love to go to a,museum,but,most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic,.(2015,浙江,),它对有些人有益,然而却让另外一些人陷入有关是否投票的两难,境地。,It is beneficial to some,people,while,it puts others into,a dilemma over whether to vote or not.,(2016,江苏,),3.,选择关系,主要用,or,either,.or.,neither.nor.,等连词连接。,她必须动手术,要不然就没命了。,She had to have the,operation,or,she would die.,不是你疯了,就是我疯了。,Either,you are,mad,or,I am.,4.,因果关系,多用连词,for,和,so,连接。,for,表示原因,对前面的情况加以解释,;so,表示结果,意为,“,因此,所以,于是,”,。,我向她道歉了,因为我错怪了她。,I apologized to,her,for,I had wronged her.,那个小男孩穷得连一根蜡烛也买不起,于是他就在墙上钻了一个洞,在晚上,“,偷,”,邻居家里的光看书。,The,boy,being,poor,couldn,t,afford even a,candle,so,he bored a hole in the wall,to,“,steal,”,light,from his neighbor,s house to read at night,.(2015,福建,),名师指导,在并列句的使用中,我们还应该注意以下事项,:,1.,连词,not only.but also.,在连接两个分句时,如果把,not only,放,在句首,该分句需用部分倒装语序。,这些捐赠的书籍不仅将使您更加熟悉中国,而且它们也有助于提高您的汉语。,Not only,will these donated books make you more familiar with,China,but,they,also,help enhance your Chinese.,(2015,天津,),他们不仅提供给我们喜悦和兴奋,而且也鼓励我们审慎地思考。,Not only,do they offer us joy and,excitement,but,they,also,encourage us to think critically.,2.,表示,“,虽然,但是,”,这一转折关系时,连接词,but,不能与,though/although,同时连用。,虽然我当时很累,但是我感到非常幸福。,Although I was very tired then but I felt very happy.,(,错误,),Although I was very tired,then,I,felt very happy.(,正确,),I was very tired then but I felt very happy.(,正确,),3.,表示因果关系的连词,so,不与,because,as,等表示原因的连词连用。,因为他生病,所以他那天没去上学。,Because/As he was ill so he didn,t go to school that day.(,错误,),Because/As he was,ill,he,didn,t go to school that day.(,正确,),He was ill so he didn,t go to school that day.(,正确,),即时演练,用并列句翻译下列句子,1.,所有的同学都非常友好和善良,因此你没必要担心有什么困难。,(,表,示因果关系,),2.,书籍不但增长我们的见识,而且也开阔我们的视野。,(,表示递进关系,),3.,地震中有,10,人死亡,3 000,多人无家可归。,(,表示添加关系,),答案,:,1.All the classmates are friendly and,kind,so,you don,t need to worry about the difficulty.,2.Books not only enrich our knowledge but(also)widen our minds.,3.Ten people were killed in the,earthquake,and,more than 3,000 people were left homeless.,4.,兄弟俩很不同。一个喜欢看书,另一个喜欢运动。,(,表示对比关系,),5.,她自己过着简朴的生活但对需要帮助的人如此慷慨。,(,表示转折关系,),答案,:,4.The brothers are very different:one likes reading while the other is crazy about sports.,5.She herself lived a simple or rather poor life but she was so generous to the people in need of help.,