济南留学中介：怎样把握留学文书的留学动机.pptx

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2013-7-16,#,怎样把握留学文书的留学动机,【精彩范文】,Economics,I can still recollect the scene when I followed my parents into their hometown village after almost three hours drive:children running about barefooted,even near winter;the roads,narrower,rougher,were covered in more mud than 1 could ever believethat was totally different from the environment where I grew up.,None of my family lives there right now;they went to the city dozens of years ago.I could hardly believe my parents had lived in such toughness.“But girl，”mom told me,“There are still many people in China living just like this.”,During my stay there,I was once and again surprised by the bad conditions in the village:teenagers at my age couldnJ t afford school,and have no other choice but going to the fields or going to the cities as migrant workers;babies are left behind at their grandparents because their parents have to struggle to keep ends met in the family.My father left some money at his best childhood friend s before leaving.“But that can only sustain his life temporarily,”he said,“They still live in poverty.，,Back home,I started reading books and reports about poverty in China,as well as in the world.I was appalled to find there are still 150 million people in my country living below the poverty line,many people are living in some perilous situations that young people like me could hardly envisage.“Can I help them to live the life they want?”I have asked myself this question for numerous of times.,I can,at least,try to work in that direction.With handfuls of children faced with tough challenges that they would never wish to surmount,I hope I can kindle their hope.Knowledge is power,I firmly believe that,but I can only obtain that knowledge through relevant education in my college years.I m looking forward to a day when I，equipped with what I would have learned at your university,will be able to change the life of those people in a positive way.,【,经济,】,我曾跟随父母驱车将近三小时，回到他们的故土，当时映入眼帘的景象还历历在目：时巳入冬，但孩子们还在赤脚嬉闹，村里的路很窄，坎坷崎岖，飞尘遍野,这和我长大的环境简直是天壤之别。,现在我的家人早已搬离，几十年前他们就都巳在城市中扎根。我真的不敢相信，父母曾在这样艰苦的环境中长大。可妈妈对我说：“孩子，在我们的国家，还有很多人过着这样的生活呀。”,住在村里的那几天，我一次又一次地被那儿的艰苦环境震撼：同龄的孩子们根本上不起学，他们除了回家种地,;,或者进城做农民工，别无选择,;,很多小孩 留守在家，因为他们的父母为维持生计，只能进城打工，而将这些孩子们托付给祖父母。临行时，爸爸给他儿时的伙伴留下了一笔钱，却说：“这只是权宜之计，他 们还是穷啊。”,回到家里，我就开始阅读一些关于中国，关于世界贫困现象的书籍和报道。当我得知在我的祖国，还有,1.5,亿人在贫困线下挣扎，当我知道许多人生活状况之恶劣根本让我们无法想象，真的骇目惊心。我反复问自己：“我能帮他们过上自己期望的生活吗,?”,至少，我能为此努力。许许多多的孩子们面临着难以逾越的困境，而我希望自己能点燃他们的希望之光。我相信知识就是力量，但是要得到相关的知识，我就一定要在大学生涯中学习相关的知识。倘若贵校可以为我敞开大门，我希望有一天我能够用我的努力，让那些孩子们的生活有所改善。,【,佳文精评,】,这篇文章是传记体裁。讲述的是她自己随父母回老家的所见所闻及感悟。语言紧凑，章法严明，叙述逻辑合理。表现出敏感、善于思考的个性。她看到父 母的捐赠，她感受的不是骄傲和虚荣，而是如何能做得更好，真正地长久地帮助别人。她最终的思考点是：“我希望有一天我能够用我的努力，让那些孩子们的生活 有所改善。”这表现了一个有精英意识和利他思想的年轻人。让读者肃然起敬。,这样一篇文章可以用来回答有关学生的学业和留学动机。,