高中英语作文人物介绍省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,高中英语写作之人物介绍类作文,廖 菁,1/29,人物简介,2/29,Learning Aims,：,1.Learn some words expressions and,structures to describe a person,2.Write a passage about Jane Goodall.,3/29,Preparation for writing,1、,Birthday and birth place,1)出生于年月地方,2、,Family background,2)在他父母帮助下,3)当他是一个,小,孩子时候,4)在他童年时代,5)过着幸福/艰难生活,6)在岁时候,1)was/were born onin,2)with the help of his parents,3)when he was a small boy,4)during his childhood,5)live a happy,/,hard life,6)at the age of,4/29,3、,Education,1)从大学毕业,2)当他在大学时候，他主修,3)在方面有天赋,4)取得博士学位,1)graduate fromdepartment,of university,2)When at college,he majored in,3)have a gift for,4)gain a doctors degree,5/29,4.Big events in his life,1)把自己一生时间贡献给,2)做方面研究,3)do sth with great determination and perseverance.,4)win/get(the)first prize,1)devote his lifetime to ,2)do research about/into,3)带着巨大决心和毅力干,4)取得一等奖,6/29,5)赢得一枚金牌,6)取得诺贝尔奖,7)become a world champion,8)因而取得奖章,9)be awarded the title of,5)win a gold medal,6)win the Nobel Prize for,7)成为世界冠军,8)be awarded a medal for,9)取得称号,7/29,5、,Evaluation,1)one of the best(most important),2)被每个人尊重,3)his hard work brought him great success.,4)be regarded as,5)set a good example to us,6)对.评价高,7)把专用于/贡献给,1)最好.之一,2)be respected by everyone.,3)他努力工作带给了他巨大成功。,4)被看做,5)给我们树立了良好榜样,6)speak highly of,7)devote.to.,8/29,Then h,ow to describe a person,?,9/29,一、写作内容,1.age,sex,birth-place,background(概况),2.appearance,character(外表、性格),3.Education(教育背景),4.big events in his or her life(in order of time)(经历、生平),5.evaluation(评价),10/29,1.职位头衔：用,同位语,年纪性别与家境也可用,同位语,。,如：,孙淑伟是来自广东14岁男孩，他是世界跳水冠军。,Sun Shuwei,a world champion in diving,(同位语),is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.,例句仿写：,亚伯拉汗林肯(Abraham Lincoln),于182月12日出生于肯塔基州。(Kentucky),Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.,二、句式模板,11/29,2.介绍出生:介绍出生时间、地点和家境用,分词结构,使文章更简练。,如：,姚明于1980年出生在上海，是一位世界著名篮球运动员。,Yao Ming,born in Shanghai in 1980,(定语),is a world famous basketball player.,例句仿写：,Marie Curie 1867年11月7日出生于波兰，是世界上最著名科学家之一。,Marie Curie，,born in Poland on November seventh 1867,was one of the best known scientists in the world,.,12/29,查尔斯狄更斯出生在贫苦职员家庭，他几乎没有受过什么教育。,Born into a poor clerk s family,(原因状语),Charles Dickens had little schooling.,例句仿写：,1930年袁隆平出生于一个贫困家庭，于1953年毕业于西南农业大学(Southeast Agricultural College),Born into a poor family in 1930,Yuan Longping graduated from Southeast Agricultural College.,13/29,3.描写外貌:巧用with短语。,如：,My,Chinese,teacher is a beautiful lady,with long hair and big eyes,(她长着两只大眼睛,留着长发).,例句仿写：,我老板是一位有着黑色头发，一双大眼睛英俊年轻人。,My boss is a handsome young man,with black hair and big eyes.,14/29,4.生平事迹：尽可能用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。,如：,In his life,he got many honours，,one of which is the CCTV Moving China Award.,在他一生中，他取得了许多荣誉，其中包含取得“感动中国年度人物”称号。,(,定语从句,),例句仿写:Joan Goodall 在猩猩自然环境中研究猩猩，这让她更多地了解了猩猩行为。,Joan Goodall studied the chimps in their own environment,which made her fully understand chimp behaviour.,15/29,In,having broken the world record and got the gold medal,(在他打破世界纪录并取得金牌之后),he became the idol(偶像）of the youth.,(分词短语做时间状语),例句仿写：,对自己生活很满意，他不在意名声和财富。,Satisfied with the his life,he cares little about his fame and wealth.,16/29,Not only,does he show,interest in science,but also he has a gift for music.,他不但对科学极感兴趣，而且他还有音乐天赋。,(倒装句式),例句仿写：,他不但专注自己研究，而且关心社会福利事业。,Not only,is he devoted to,his research,but also,he concerns,himself with the welfare project.,17/29,写成长经历请按时间次序。如when he was a small boy，at(the age of)five，in，a year later等。,名师指津：,18/29,5.评价:尽可能利用短语。,如：,Lei Feng set a good example to us(,给我们树立了一个良好榜样,),so all the people show great respect for/to him(,很敬重他,).,19/29,Next,lets move to practice!,20/29,四.写作,(一)Jane Goodall,1934年出生于英国。她是著名动物学家(zoologist)。毕业于剑桥Cambridge University)大学。,从小就梦想在自然环境中研究动物。1960年来到非洲研究猩猩。,取得成就：,1)在Joan Goodall 之前，没有些人完全了解猩猩行为：吃肉；一起狩猎；像家庭组员一样交流，生活。,2)保护并尊重黑猩猩，反对用于试验和娱乐。帮助建立动物自然栖息地。,3)得到许多荣誉。,21/29,Jane Goodall,born in England in 1934,is a world famous zoologist,who graduated from Cambridge University.Since her childhood she had wanted to work with animals in their own environment.In 1960,she achieved her dream-she arrived in Gombe to study the chimps.,22/29,Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour.Her work changed the way people think about chimps.For example,one important thing she discovered was that chimps hunt and eat meat.She actually observed chimps hunt as a group.She also discovered how chimps communicate with each other.She has argued that wild animals should be left in the wild and not used for entertainment or advertisements.She has helped to set up special places where they can live safely.,23/29,Joan Goodall devoted all her time to studying chimps.She,gained many honours,.She inspires those who want to cheer the achievements of women.,24/29,(二),1)居里夫人(Marie Curie)1867年11月7日出生于波兰一个教师家庭。,2),以第一名成绩毕业于巴黎大学,(,Paris University),物理系。在校期间学习勤奋。,3),居里研究所,(Curie Institute),创始人，新元素钋,(Po),，镭,(Ra),发觉者。被称为镭母亲。,4)1903,年和丈夫同获诺贝尔物理奖。,1911,年取得诺贝尔化学奖。,25/29,Born into a teachers family in November,1867,in Poland,Madam Curie was one of the greatest physicists.In 1891 she went to study in Paris University.When she was studying in Paris,she lived a poor life,but she worked very hard.So she graduated from Paris University winning first.,26/29,Madam Curie devoted all her life to her research.She was not only the founder of Curie Institute,but also the discoverer of two kinds of radioactive matter-polonium and radium.She was regarded as the mother of Ra.In 1903 she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize for physics.She received a second Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 1911.So she became the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes.,27/29,Madam Curie was one of the greatest scientists in the world.She set a good example to us,so all the people show great respect to her.,28/29,Thats all,thank you!,29/29,