高中英语 复习书面表达作文课件 浙教版 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高中英语复习书面表达作文课件,City life or country life,人们经常讨论乡村生活和城市生活，一些人喜欢乡村生活而另一人则喜欢城市生活。请你以,Living in the Country or the City,为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。,乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。,城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。,我喜欢的生活和理由。,注意：词数,100-120,，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。,Living in the Country or in the City,People are forever talking about living in the country and in the city.,文体与,时态,。,抓要点,规定内容,开放内容,审题,明晰结构（分段）,考虑连接,(1),乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。,(2),城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。,(3),我喜欢的生活和理由,(1.2.),。,1.,(,To begin with,),Moreover,In addition,Additionally,Furthermore,2.For one thing,For another,3.In the first place,In the second place,4.,First(ly,),Second(ly,)Finally,段落间,连接过渡词,On the contrary;,however;,段落间,连接过渡词,Personally,To be honest,To be frank,As far as I am concerned,段落,内,连接,规划,表达,喜欢,的用语,-,like,prefer to live in,prefer living in,enjoy living in,be willing to,would rather,be fond of,be attracted by,be fascinated by,避免单一,表达,表达,观点,的基本用语,-,Some,think,others,think,believe.,feel,claim,state,stress,insist,maintain,避免单一,表达规定内容,-,空气清新、生活恬静,The air is fresh/clean.,Life is quiet/peaceful.,enjoy gentle way/,pace,of living,交通便捷、购物方便,Its easy to go around/here and there.,People can go from one place to another without much difficulty.,People can buy anything they want.,Shopping is convenient,准确灵活,语义不充分不连贯,Some people like to live in the country.The air is fresh and clean.Moreover,Life is quiet and peaceful.,Others,however,prefer to live in the city.They can go from one place to another without much difficulty.In addition,shopping is much more convenient.,下面段落有什么问题？,要点,适当拓展,-,添枝加叶,1.The air is fresh.,Obviously,the air there is much fresher,than,that in the city.,They claim,that the air there is fresher,as,there is less pollution.,They think,that the air there is fresher,so that,they can relax themselves both physically and mentally.,2.Life is quiet and peaceful.,They insist,that life is quiet and peaceful,which,is beneficial for good health.,尝试适当拓展以下,要点,Its easy to go around.,They feel,its easy to go around,as,.,They believe,that its easy to go around,so that,They claim,that its easy to go around,which,They can buy anything they want.,They,think(),they can buy anything they want,Have a try,表达开放部分,-,learn more social skills,(getting along with different kinds of people),broaden our views,(),make my life more colorful,(),receive medical care more easily,(),get better education,(),brainstorm ideas,富有思想,精选能表达好且出彩的两到三点,抄写,字迹清楚，卷面,零涂改,。,不用改正液、透明胶带。,注意大小写，注意分段。,不超边框，不随意换行。,课堂小结,审题,规划,表达,相同语义,表达,规定部分内容,表达,开放部分内容,抄写,抓要点,段落和连接,避免单一,准确灵活，适当拓展,富有思想，精选要点,卷面整洁清楚,assignment,Write the passage out and copy it down as neatly and clearly as possible.,段落组织,1,、写好主题句。,Personally,I am fascinated by city life.,2,、围绕主题句展开,2,或,3,点。,两点连接词用：,?,三点用：,first(firstly),second(secondly),finally(,most importantly,),3,、,精选,两点或三点理由。,总,分,1-,分,2,Thanks for your attention,