2025年英语初中英语书面表达各地方试卷集合汇编.doc

（英语）初中英语书面体现各地方试卷集合汇编

一、英语书面体现
1．近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”消息引起了学生和家长们讨论。你们学校English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提醒内容，用英语写一篇征文。
学生们认为
1.不需要背沉重书包去上学
2.很新鲜，学习更感爱好
3.……
家长们认为
1.影响孩子视力
2.增长家庭承担
你观点
1.……
2.……

注意：
1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有有关信息，观点可作合适发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
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【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.
However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】根据题目规定，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此不一样观点和态度。文章需要使用一般目前时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段体现支持这种行为做法原因和好处，第三段描述反对人观点及原因，最终一段体现自已观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。
点睛：对立观点式    
 第一段：提出现象。
第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.  
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 第一种原因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 另一种原因。  
  第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground.  
They consider it harmful to do X.  
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 第一种理由。  An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一种例子。   
  第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.  
But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.  
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 有一种害处。

2．书面体现
假如你是Amy，德国互换生Sara下周即未来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她来信，在信中，她问询如下信息：1．你家状况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担家务劳动；4. …目前，你就她提出问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！
规定：1. 文章必须包括图片中重要内容，可合适发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息；
3. 字数约110词。
Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________
Love，
Amy
【答案】Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.
I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.
As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.
Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.
Love,
Amy
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。而复杂并列构造In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提提议”。你立即就要毕业了，在初中学习和生活中你一定有诸多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点提议吧！
规定：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。100 词左右。
【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.
As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.
Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.
Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well
I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语运用，既丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4． 近来一份学生体质健康调查成果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提醒内容，用英语写一篇短文，并刊登自已观点。
现 状
大概70%学生眼睛近视
重要原因
1. 睡眠局限性
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
防止措施
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成对用眼习惯
你观点
… ….（至少一条）

参照词汇：近视 shortsighted
规定：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可合适发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
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【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干规定可知，本篇文章重要使用一般目前时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠局限性（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视措施：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成对用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应当理解保护眼睛重要性，尽最大努力保护我们眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。
常用重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

5． 写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom学生家长博客上，你看到如下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和规定，给这位家长答复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自已见解。
2. 陈说自已理由。
3. 提出至少2条提议。
【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite
right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up
mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her
have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长博客进行答复。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头表明自已见解，接下来陈说自已理由，最终简介自已提议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

6．书面体现
假设你将代表你校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言
稿，发言稿内容要点如下：
回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同
学协助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。
注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!
Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提醒用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同学协助；祝愿，在写作中合适发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿格式，没有出现自已真实姓名。

7．题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做，以及你感受。
提醒词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提醒问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提醒写一篇自已在初中生活中坚持做事；文中写明自已是怎么做并谈谈自已感受。
【详解】
1.本篇规定根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自已坚持做一件事，根据提醒，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般目前时。书写时要紧紧围绕主题，文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自已坚持做事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自已起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到目前比此前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自已影响；文章构造清晰，前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了诸多短语和重点句型。例如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句体现多样。

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8．假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参与。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。
提醒词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink
提醒问题： ●When and where are you going to meet?
●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?
Dear Pete,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in Yanqing.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

【答案】
Dear Peter，
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了重要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述全面性，尽量将提醒内容运用上；提醒问题就是写作基本方向，然后围绕要点合适发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采用邮件格式，时态以一般未来时态为主。语言表述应当符合语法构造，语言精确，语意连贯，体现清晰，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：
短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。
句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

9．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，期望已久假期就要到来！请你根据如下提醒，制定出度假计
划，可以结合自已实际发挥。
写作内容：
1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享有大自然美景，放松心情。
2.参与志愿活动，帮家长做家务。
3.读自已喜欢书。
4.远离危险地方。 写作规定：
1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。
2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章构造对、连贯；书写规范。
3.不得出现自已校名和自已姓名等个人信息。
My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.

【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.
I'm sure I'll have