英语九年级上册英语书面表达解题技巧分析及练习题含答案含解析.doc

【英语】九年级上册英语书面体现解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)含解析

一、英语书面体现
1．每一次变化都伴伴随我们成长，作为初中生你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显变化。
要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?
2. 变化是怎样发生?
3. 变化后有什么感受?
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【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.
Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介我比起小时候有了哪些变化。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我最大个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来简介我小时候不喜欢读书，最终指出目前书籍是我朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2． 诚信是中华民族老式美德，也是社会主义关键价值观内容之一。而你朋友Daming近来却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，不过他却由于在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming道歉。
请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；2、谈谈自已见解，并给Daming某些提议。
注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实校名和人名；
4、文章开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【答案】The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony
【解析】
【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺事情，谈自已见解。信守承诺是中华民族老式美德，在写作过程中，注意文章构造，先写出大明和玲玲之间事情，然后再说自已对此见解。
【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者观点，大明是出错了。然后仔细论述了事情发生通过。接下来说出自已对此事件见解，不信守承诺会导致失去他人信任，对大明提议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。
【点睛】
文章构造清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自已观点，然后论述事情，提出自已观点和提议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了某些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章愈加通顺。

3． 亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你印度朋友Danny收看了大会有关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚爱好，来信向你理解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据如下内容提醒用英语写一封回信给Danny。
要点
内容
历史文化
历史悠久，文化各异；老式节日，多彩习俗（举一例）
文明行为
互相尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟）
身边文明
校园文明（自拟一点）

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 答复必须包括因此要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。
3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等有关信息。
参照词汇: civilized 文明
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文规定给你印度朋友Danny写一篇有关华夏文明回信。
【详解】
文章需要简介下中国文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中规定，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目要明确，要注意内容精确性和严厉性。
【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以合适使用高分句子。本篇文章写好句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一种礼仪之邦。

4． “inspire” 一词汉语解释是“鼓励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以 “The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词短文，向校报英语园地投稿。
要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？
2. How did he/ she inspire you？
规定： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2. 语言流畅，字迹清晰。
【答案】The person who inspired me
Many people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.
Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.
You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以The person who inspired me为题，简介一种曾经鼓励过你人。题目中用问题形式予以了提醒，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分内容：首先简介这个鼓励过你人是谁，他是怎样一种人；然后简介他是怎样鼓励你。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般目前时和一般过去时为主来论述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目规定，包括题目中规定所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以合适发挥，注意上下文衔接。另一方面应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应当从句子整体构造入手，写完整句子。可以简单句构造为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提高文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂构造。同步语句之间使用恰当连接成分使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，简介了一种曾经鼓励过自已人。短文有如下几种长处：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先简介了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上品质以及对自已应选；最终一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。另一方面短文中使用了对人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来论述，重要使用了一般目前时和一般过去时，动词形式变化精确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式变化，语法规范。用词精确，语言得体，句式构造完整，符合英语体现习惯。短文中使用了某些很好句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。

5．书面体现
根据下列表格提醒，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
过去
目前
1旧房
1高楼
2河水肮脏
2河水清澈（clean and clear）．
3步行、骑自行车上班
3乘公交车、小汽车上班
4道路狭窄（narrow）．
4街道宽阔（wide），洁净整洁
5居住条件（living conditions）差
5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适．

6你感想…（写两到三句）

Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．

【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6．假如你叫李华，近来你班里美国互换生Lucy想要感受中国老式文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地会面。
提醒词语：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate
提醒问题：Where are you going?
What will you do there?
When and where will you meet?

【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地会面。
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来简介我们去那里做什么，最终指出我们要在何时何地会面。此处want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

7．书面体现
假设你将代表你校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言
稿，发言稿内容要点如下：
回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同
学协助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。
注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!
Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提醒用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同学协助；祝愿，在写作中合适发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿格式，没有出现自已真实姓名。

8．书面体现
如下图画展现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生事情。请用英语写一篇约100词短文。
规定：1.完整论述图画内容。
2.简要陈说你从中学到了什么。
【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,
“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.
Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.
【解析】
这是一篇看图作文，规定我们仔细观测图片，弄清晰里面发生事情，用英语将这些内容完整地论述出来，并简单陈说自已从中学到东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，理解图片中所发生事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到词汇、短语等，或者列出大概写作提纲。通过度析可知，这篇短文讲述是过去发生事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式变化，尤其是不规则动词过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展先后次序，这样可以使文章条理清晰。还需注意是英语体现和汉语习惯不一样，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句基本句型，如主谓宾构造或主系表构造。在文章中点缀几种并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提高文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达信息，表述精确。作者在短文中论述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生先后次序论述，条理清晰。文章最终两句话也点明了文章主题。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、精确。短文中还使用了较丰富句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。

9．自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生到处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信重要性，分享一次使你愈加自信经历，并说说我们怎样愈加自信。
提醒词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提醒问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供所有信息。灵活运用多种句式，采用不一样体现方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力争精确，简洁。最终必须认真查验与否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等运用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同步语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错范文。

10．你是一位九年级学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你笔友Amy，感谢她对你关怀，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前学习和生活状况。要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比很好，不过你对自已不满意。你认为自已学习上还要多花工夫。
（2）. 你父母对你严格规定，不过也很关怀你。（举例阐明，合适发挥2—3句）……
（3）. 老师很乐意协助你们。他们但愿你们实现自已理想。他们说（合适发挥2—3句）……
注意：
（1）. 规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作合适发挥。
（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
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