英语中考英语书面表达单元测试版附答案12.doc

【英语】 中考英语书面体现单元测试（word版附答案）经典1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1． 如今，诸多都市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环境保护、便捷而备受青睐，但同步也引起了某些问题。请你根据提醒以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，体现自已见解和提议。
要点提醒：
Advantages
Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）
Take exercise…
Problems
Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen…
Advice
Civilized（文明）, follow the rules, take good care of…

注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可合适发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（提议）
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富，体现了所有要点，语言体现精确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。
【点睛】
本文规定以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格内容提醒，写一篇短文，体现自已对共享单车见解和提议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中三个要点：首先，论述共享单车长处；另一方面，列举共享单车带来问题；最终，根据问题给出个人提议。

2．书面体现
根据如下提醒，写一篇简介我朋友张阳短文。
基本状况
张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生
爱好爱好
1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读多种类型书，由于……
2.喜欢观鸟。每年记录两次鸟儿数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面变化。
优秀事迹
上个月把零花钱捐给了但愿工程
未来梦想
1. 但愿成为连接家乡到上海路段高铁总工程师
2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做某些变化。如：…….（举1例）

规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有有关信息，并合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.
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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句构造综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3． 假如你是李华, 你美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想理解你梦想职业。请认真阅读下面邮件, 根据信中内容和你实际状况给他写封回信。
To: lihua@ china. com
From: bill006@ america. com
Subject: Your dream job
Dear Li Hua,
Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.
Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?
◆What is your dream job?
◆ Why do you like the job?
◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?
◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?
Drop a few lines if you have time.
Best wishes,
Bill

规定:1. 参照提醒语, 可合适发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。
Dear Bill,
Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?
Tell me about your ideal job!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本题通过描写梦想中职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提醒词，让学生有话可说。
【详解】
首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为何喜欢该工作，由于可以把自已知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校环境。为了实现自已梦想，正在为此作出努力。最终向Bill提出问题，结束全文。
【点睛】
本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始重要内容，运用多种连接词，例如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

4．环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1.短文应包括表格中所有提醒内容，条理清晰，作合适发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实人名和地名,词数不少于80。
状况
水污染，大气污染......
应对措施
立即制止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）......
感想提议
环境可以变得更好......

Change for a better China
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【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.
【解析】
【详解】
环境保护话题是人们最关怀话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自已家乡变化写一篇英语短文。规定中已经给出了部分提醒，动笔先应先认真阅读提醒，确定写作内容。写作中注意体现观点时常用句式，注意在体现不一样观点时，连词使用。内容上应注意描述全面性；语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯。
【点睛】
本文紧紧围绕规定对家乡做了简单简介，内容完整，用了表格中信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了某些好句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

5．书面体现
假如你是李明，你英国笔友Jack来信问询你家乡与否有雾霾天气，状况怎样。请你按照如下提醒给他回一封e-mail。
内容如下：
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生多次雾霾天气；
2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气危害，正在采用多种措施减少其发生；
3. 你在平常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参照词汇：雾霾haze
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，信件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .
People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.
As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李明身份给自已英国笔友写信，告诉他有关家乡雾霾状况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提醒，来组织语言，充实内容。首先简介去年家乡雾霾状况严重；然后简介为减少雾霾人们采用了某些措施；最终简介一下你自已在平常生活中应当怎么做。因此文章应重要提成三段，一种内容一段。文章内容中论述状况不一，时态不能统一，根据体现需要使用对时态，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时，应注意英语句式体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，应从句子整体考虑，写完整句子，运用简单句基本句型，使用恰当词汇和短语。为提高文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯，体现流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文中作者根据题目规定简介了自已家乡治理雾霾状况，并结合自身实际状况，讲述了自已平常生活中是怎样做。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章构造清晰，提成了三段，每一段中心明确，意思体现清晰、明了。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，作者根据体现需要使用了一般过去时、一般未来时态和一般未来时态，动词形式变化精确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式体现符合英语习惯。句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了某些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中很好句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

6． 书面体现
共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给《二十一世纪英文报》写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
1.随地可见，出行以便
2.有益健康，减少污染
3.费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
1.未及时归还
2.占道挡路
你观点
我认为……（考生自拟，至少2点）

注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.
But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.
I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.
【解析】这篇作文规定我们给《二十一世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自已对共享单车见解。题目中运用表格形式给我们列举了短文重要内容，包括：共享单车优势；存在问题以及你自已对这件事情见解。前两个内容我们需要根据表格提醒用对英语体现，而自已观点则需要学生们自已发挥想象力，组织语言，并体现出来，规定至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应重要使用一般目前时态，第三人称来论述，短文可以提成两段或者三段，一种内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，变化文章句式节奏，使用不一样句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、体现流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目规定所有信息。短文提成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车某些长处；第三段简介了某些问题；最终一段作者提出了自已见解。分段论述使文章构造清晰，主题明确，有层次性。另一方面短文中使用了恰当时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般目前时态为主，语法规范，用词精确，句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几种长句；此外文章中还使用了恰当连接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。对文章行文连贯、语句通顺、体现流畅。

7．自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生到处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信重要性，分享一次使你愈加自信经历，并说说我们怎样愈加自信。
提醒词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提醒问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供所有信息。灵活运用多种句式，采用不一样体现方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力争精确，简洁。最终必须认真查验与否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等运用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同步语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错范文。

8．书面体现
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右短文，内容须包括：对下表中有关（City A和City B）所有信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一种都市作为你暑假旅游目地。

City A

City B

Flying

2 hours

4 hours

Temperature

30℃

18℃

Hotel

★★

★★★★

Things to do

★★★★

★★

Food

★★

★★★★

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
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【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City