2025年英语中考英语书面表达题集锦1.doc

【英语】中考英语书面体现题集锦1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”消息引起了学生和家长们讨论。你们学校English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提醒内容，用英语写一篇征文。
学生们认为
1.不需要背沉重书包去上学
2.很新鲜，学习更感爱好
3.……
家长们认为
1.影响孩子视力
2.增长家庭承担
你观点
1.……
2.……

注意：
1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有有关信息，观点可作合适发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
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【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.
However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】根据题目规定，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此不一样观点和态度。文章需要使用一般目前时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段体现支持这种行为做法原因和好处，第三段描述反对人观点及原因，最终一段体现自已观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。
点睛：对立观点式    
 第一段：提出现象。
第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.  
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 第一种原因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 另一种原因。  
  第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground.  
They consider it harmful to do X.  
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 第一种理由。  An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一种例子。   
  第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.  
But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.  
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 有一种害处。

2．书面体现
初三学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提醒，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”短文，简介九年级学校生活，并提出但愿和提议。
在校
老师
工作认真负责，充斥爱心
学生
…… （至少发挥两点）
周末
作业
作业多．舍弃爱好
其他活动
锻炼，电视
愿望
…… （发挥一到两点）

规定：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供所有信息，并合适发挥：
2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.
As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.
At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．书面体现
“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创立文明都市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城,让人点赞行为随地可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自已努力。请根据如下所 给要点,写一篇 100 词左右英语短文。
1.种植花草树木；
2.遵守交通规则；
3.公共场所不大声喧哗；
4.公交车上积极给有需要人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）
参照词汇: civilized 文明 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守

【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.
As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For
example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.
Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（并且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4．书面体现
根据下列表格提醒，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
过去
目前
1旧房
1高楼
2河水肮脏
2河水清澈（clean and clear）．
3步行、骑自行车上班
3乘公交车、小汽车上班
4道路狭窄（narrow）．
4街道宽阔（wide），洁净整洁
5居住条件（living conditions）差
5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适．

6你感想…（写两到三句）

Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．

【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

5．书面体现
难忘初中三年学习生活已经靠近尾声，你一定既有收获又有局限性，也有许多对自已未来期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面思维导图，写一篇短文简介自已难忘校园生活并描述对未来期盼。

注意:1.词数90左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充有关信息，可合适发挥。语言连贯、通顺;
3.短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.
Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面体现以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题，结合本题所给写作信息，论述自已难忘中学生活。根据内容提醒可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般未来时态，注意某些常见句式应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富语句，注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系，最终最佳要体现出自已感想和见解。
写作亮点：本文构造紧凑，要点齐全，语言简洁。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章最终I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 体现了自已愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。

6．书面体现
假设你将代表你校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言
稿，发言稿内容要点如下：
回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同
学协助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。
注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of .
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!
Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提醒用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回忆漂亮校园、生动有趣教学、三年来收获；感谢老师培养、父母支持、同学协助；祝愿，在写作中合适发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿格式，没有出现自已真实姓名。

7．环境保护人人有责， 假如我们每一种人都能珍爱漂亮地球 保护自然资源，相信我们家园会越来越美好。
某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临重要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你期望。
提醒词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action
提醒问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?
Now there are many environmental problems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.
I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.
I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于阐明文写作，写作时要把我们面临重要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你期望所有包括。
例文点评：例文采用是三段式；用第一人称来论述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用是一般目前时，描述提议时，描写详细，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。
句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间过渡，必要时可合适运用表达转折、因果、并列、比较等关系连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最终，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

8．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现实状况进行分析并提出提议。
要点：

不重视课外阅读原因

1. 作业太多
2. 没有读书习惯
3. 时间花在电脑或网络上

课外阅读好处

1. 更多地理解世界
2. 学会怎样思考
3. 生活愈加丰富多彩

对学校或同学提议

……（至少一点）

注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中要点，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清晰、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【解析】
略

9．书面体现
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”
----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”
----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克救赎》
“We are all runnin