2025年英语中考英语初中英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧分析及练习题含答案.doc

（英语）中考英语初中英语英语书面体现汇编解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)

一、中考英语书面体现汇编
1．（·天津中考模拟）假设你是 Susan，在家里你父母总是对你有诸多规定，你与否有时感到厌烦？你是怎样处理？请你根据下列要点提醒用英语写一篇短文。
（1）父母规定你每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉
（2）你觉得父母虽太严厉，但理解他们。
（3）你决定与父母多交流，为父母做些家务。
（4）你认为……。
My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family.____________________________________________________

【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，针对父母对你规定过多你感到厌烦这一问题，你是怎样处理。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, communicate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出、明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

2．（·湖南中考模拟）假如你是李华，请你根据如下提醒用英语写一封保护大象倡议书。
提醒：陆地上最大哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少，由于：
1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；
2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。
3）应怎样保护它们（不少于三条）。
规定：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。倡议书结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参照词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory
Dear classmates
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I believe everyone's contribution （奉献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua
【答案】Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone's contribution （奉献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面内容，首先描述大象想在所处现实状况，然后阐明出现这种状况原因，最终为了保护大象我们应当怎样去做。时态重要为一般目前时。提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better表达提议句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以合适使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料规定，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且某些连词使用，例如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错文章。

3．（·扬州市梅岭中学中考模拟）
假如你是Liu Bin，请用英语给笔友Bob答复邮件。
注意：1.文中不得出现你真实姓名和学校名称；
2.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范；
3.词数100左右，邮件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I’m very glad to know that you will come to our school.

Yours,
Liu Bin
【答案】Dear Bob,
I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school. Let me tell you something about it. Our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. We go to school five days a week and have six classes every day. There is also an activity class in the afternoon. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too.
My classmates are very nice. We often help each other. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Liu Bin
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，listen to the music，five days a week，so that，prepare for，for a while，of course，at the weekends，help each other，look forward to等。而固定句型it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.和I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4．（·江苏赣榆试验中学初三） 初中三年即将过去，这三年里你一定学会了不少东西。假如你是Jack，你想给老师写一封感谢信，体现你感谢之情。请根据下列提醒，完毕这封感谢信。词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
1. 学会了怎样学习：课前预习；课堂认真听讲，记笔记：课后认真完毕作业，及时复习；懂得了读书重要性，养成了好阅读习惯，为后来学习做好准备。
2. 懂得了怎样做人：在家里，爱父母和家人，帮父母做力所能及事：在学校，尊重老师，关爱同学，做文明学生；在社会，遵守交通规则，爱惜花草树木，…（合适补充）
3. 后来打算：……（合适补充）
Dear teachers,
How time flies! Nearly three years has passed. I will graduate from the school. I want to say "Thank you, dear teachers." It is you who have taught me a lot of things.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear teachers,
How time flies! Nearly three years has passed. I will graduate from the school. I want to say "Thank you, dear teachers." It is you who have taught me a lot of things.
First，I learn how to learn. I preview before class, listen carefully in class and take notes. I finish homework carefully after class and review in time. I understand the importance of reading and develop good reading habits to prepare for future learning.
Secondly, I know how to be a person. At home, I love parents and family and help parents do what they can. At school, I respect teachers, care for classmates, and try to be civilized students. In society, I obey traffic rules, love flowers and trees. I try to be a civilized teenager.
I am going to study harder in high school. I will meet new challenges and enter my dream university. I will make greater contributions to society in the future.
Yours,
Jack
【解析】

5．（·山东初三）

你懂得 年最受欢迎、最新潮健身方式是什么吗？“Plogging”，一边捡垃圾，一边慢跑， 正逐渐走进我们生活。拾荒（clean up trash）、慢跑 （jog），不仅增进环境卫生，并且有益身体健康，可谓一举两得。
请结合自已平常生活经历，用英语写一篇 100 词左右短文。
内容包括：1、身体力行，保护环境事例；坚持锻炼，增强体质事例。
2、结合事例，谈谈你对目前最环境保护运动方式 （plogging） 认识，以及怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国践行者。
注意：1、可以围绕主题，根据规定，进行合适发挥。
3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。

【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my community. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，规定结合自已平常生活经历，谈谈你对目前最环境保护运动方式 （plogging） 认识以及怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国践行者。
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文规定以第一人称，谈谈自已对目前最环境保护运动方式 （plogging） 认识以及结合自已平常生活经历，谈谈怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国践行者；陈说现阶段事情用一般目前时。书写时要注意题干所给提醒材料，成文时要文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文构造严谨，层次分明。开篇紧紧围绕主题，简介自已最喜欢运动是跑步；正文部分顺理成章简介plogging这种运动方式以及自已怎样身体力行地做到锻炼、环境保护两不误；结尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.点题，总结全文。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .
高分句型：
1.I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. 2.Plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running .
3.Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river；
4.To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.
【点睛】
本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题，确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般目前时）；关注题材格式（记叙文），注意文章篇章构造；书写时要紧紧围绕主题，做到中心突出，内容完整、连贯；成文后要检查人称、时态与否一致、单词拼写与否对、短语和句式使用与否得当。

6．（·河南中考模拟）书面体现

生命就像是一种回声，你送出什么它就送回什么，你播种什么就收获什么，你予以什么就得到什么。因此，人们常说“协助他人就是协助自已”。请以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 为题写一篇短文。
规定：1. 思绪清晰，观点明确，语法对，有说服力；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右。
Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves
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【答案】Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves
Nobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into trouble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.
All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，重要讲述“协助他人就是协助自已”。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其合用某些亮点词句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出、明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

7．（·宁夏银川二中中考模拟）假设你是李华。上周末你和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩很开心。请你通过e-mail将此活动过程告知你好友Tom，并简要谈谈你感受。要点如下：
The trip to the Green Farm
When
4月22日早上8:00出发。下午5:00返回。
Where
学校大门口集合。绿色农场效游。
How
乘坐校车。
What
野炊、摘西红柿，放风筝等（至少提及三项活动）。……
Safety tips
不要到河里游泳；不要单独行动……:

参照词汇：get close to the nature（亲近大自然）
写作规定：1、词数60－80；（开头和结尾已给出）
2、文中不能出现真实校名或人名；
3、所给要点必须都用上；
4、紧紧围绕主题，合适发挥。
Dear Tom,
How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom
How’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my classmates.We set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd April.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We met at the school gate.We went there by school bus . We had a picnic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so on.The teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything alone.We had a chance to get close to the nature.We had a good trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表，规定简介自已上周末和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩很开心。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用对英语句子把这些内容体现出来，在此基础上亦可合适发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出要点。根据材料可知本文重要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间逻辑关系，语意连贯。

8．（·浙江中考模拟）书面体现
假如你是Li Ming, 近来你英国笔友Susan要来温州体验中国老式文化，请你为Susan设计温州一日游活动，协助她体验温州文化习俗。请根据如下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件：
1.计划去地方；
2.一日游活动安排；
3.论述安排理由
规定：1. 不能出现真实个人身份信息；
2. 词数：110词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou._______________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Susan,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou soon， where there are lots of places of interest． To experience traditional Chinese culture better， We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along Wenzhou Road． I bet you will be attracted． Along the Wenzhou Road．not only can you watch the wonderful scenery， but also you will find many historical relics， from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture．
Sincerely waiting for your coming!
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇书信作文。根据如下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。文章时态用一般目前时，人称重要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做就是用对英语把这些内容体现出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可合适发挥。在写作时，注意紧紧围绕主题，连句成篇，要层次清晰，要点分明，中心突出。同步要注意语言表述应当符合语法构造，造句应当符合英语体现习惯；尽量使用自已熟悉单词句式，最佳不要写太长复合句；尽量选用简单易拼写单词，保证对率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最终要细心复核检查，保证对无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中规定和要点；然后根据提醒内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中也许要用到体现；然后紧紧围绕要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，词数与否符合规定。

9．（·吉林省试验中考模拟）（B） 《朗诵者》第五期节目中，主持人在开场白中说道：“我们毕生，会经历诸多第一次，难忘而又宝贵，它意味着我们成长。”请谈谈你人生中最难忘“第一次”，或许是第一次做家务、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并说说你从中学到了什么或有哪些收获。不少于80词。（文中不得出现真实人名和校名）
【答案】The First Cooking
Last weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabb