高考英语阅卷心得体会.ppt

<p>Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,11/7/2009,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,1,*,高考英语阅卷心得,今年山东卷写作的变化,：,今年我省英语作文题一改沿用多年的书信形式，要求考生从所给的两句谚语中选择一句为题写一篇作文，解释该谚语的含义并讲述能体现该谚语含义的个人经历，形式新颖。题中给出的两句谚语,A friend in need is a friend indeed.Where theres a will,，,theres a way.,都是中学生耳熟能详的，考生在审题时不会有障碍。两句谚语所蕴含的道理浅显易懂，贴近考生生活和经验，能够保证考生有话可说，利于考生展现其语言运用能力。题中给出两句谚语，给考生一定的选择空间，这样做既不会增加考生审题的负担，也有利于避免考生因不熟悉谚语而无话可说的情况出现。,今年山东卷写作的变化,：,2014,年山东卷英语作文题目出炉后，许多考生和老师为之一惊。“李华去哪儿了”是很多考生发出的感慨和疑问。今年的作文题目中，大家没有看到熟悉的李华在写信，也没有看到对社会热点问题的讨论，反而看到了“文艺腔”浓厚的题目要求。“某报社举办 我最喜欢的谚语征文活动，你有意参加”，初读似乎为书信体，但继续往下看，细心的同学会注意到，征文内容要求考生详细阐述对给出的两句谚语中其中一句的看法和理解。因此，该题目实则考查大家用英语表达个人见解，抒发生活感悟的能力。那么，这篇作文该如何构思呢？千万不要因为从来没有见过该题型就慌了手脚。,今年山东卷写作的变化,：,在考场上，大家一定要具备,将不会的内容转变成自己熟悉的内容的能力,，这是得分的关键。事实上，这种谚语题在湖南等省已经多次考过，如果考生平时复习时不拘泥于本省题型，而是广泛研究全国各地考题写法，则对这次的题目必能有备无患。事实上，高考英语作文各省“互换题型来考”的现象常常出现，如今年北京卷就舍弃了开放作文，而考察了全国卷、山东卷爱考的书信作文；福建卷也考察了湖北卷常考的作文类型。可以看到，未来的高考英语作文将更加注重对于,真正的“书面表达”能力的考察，而非对于某一特定类型作文写法的考察。,总之，,对不熟悉的作文题目，大家要想尽一切办法转化为自己熟悉的内容来表达,。还是那句话，,不是题目太复杂，而是思维太固化。,李华不见了,高考英语作文不朽的传奇,神一般的存在,1995,年全国高考卷,-,邀请几个朋友去人民公园野餐,2000,年 美国探亲目击一起交通事故，写一份材料报告,2001,年 澳大利亚朋友,Dick,想通过李华了解,中国中学生关于减轻学习负担的情况；,2003,年 李华写信告诉英国笔友,Bob,找房子的事；,2004,年 描述昨晚邻居看足球比赛影响他学习的情况；,2005,年以后，李华开始在各地高考英语试卷上频频露脸。,2011,年,全国卷一、北京卷、天津卷、重庆卷、,山东卷、江西卷、辽宁卷、陕西卷,李华无处不在,李华的朋友贯穿整个世界，老交笔友，他的那些笔友有说不完的烦恼,李华有回不完的信，提不完的建议，投不完的稿件，支不完的招,最近今年，李华很忙。,对李华的各种调侃,李华 你英语不好还喜欢,交外国笔友,我忍了,你喜欢,出国参加夏令营,我忍了,你喜欢,带老外参观校园,我忍了,你喜欢给老外当导游我忍了 你喜欢,给老外介绍长城,我忍了,你喜欢跟老外讨论,饮食健康,我忍了,你要让老外帮你,卖中国结,我。不能忍了啊！你英语不好你数学也不好吗？你一个中国结寄到国外运费税费你不知道你能不能赚钱的？李华 今天是我最后一次帮你写信了,李华欢迎你,迎接另一个晨曦 李华在这等你 慢点来吧不要着急他每年都留级,英语大门常打开 作文在这等你 红星中学高三一班李华天下无,他有一堆外国朋友人脉广泛的 他是无所不能的，除了学英语,奥运会召开在即李华日理万机 外国朋友都来拜访李华要接待的,故宫北海颐和园全有他的踪迹 不吃小吃没关系，一定看京剧,李华在这里，活地图陪伴你 长城天坛前门大街玩转你,李华在这里，不认路有啥了不起 你照样会有愉快记忆,没有外教别着急李华帮你联系 写信邮件和留言条是他最擅长的,李华还会分身术从高三到初一 凡有作文的地方皆有他印记,2009,山东卷,假设你是李华,，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师,Mr.Smith.,但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学,Tom,写一封信：,1,感谢,Tom,对你英语学习的帮助；,2,询问,Mr.Smith,的近况并索要其联系方式；,3,邀请,Tom,在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。,2010,山东卷,假设你是新华中学的学生李华,，你和在上海上学的英国朋友,Tom,约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：,1.,表示歉意；,2.,解释原因；,3.,另约时间。,历年山东卷写作要求：,2011,年山东卷,假设你是李华,，你的美国朋友,Tom,上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛,(speech contest),，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给,Tom,写一封电子邮件：,1,询问,Tom,的生活和学习情况；,2,谈谈你的困难并请,Tom,帮忙；,3,告诉,Tom,你打算赛后去看他。,2012,山东卷,假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,1.,参加英语角的益处,2.,坚持写英语日记的作用,3.,英文阅读网站,Enjoy Reading,对你的帮助。,历年山东卷写作要求：,历年山东卷写作要求：,2013,山东卷,假设你是新华中学的学生李华,，你的美国朋友,Tom,一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复，请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：,1.,未及时回信的原因；,2.,你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。,2014,山东卷书面表达,某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：,1,该谚语的含义；,2,体现该谚语的含义的个人经历。,A friend in need is a friend in deed,Where there is a will,there is a way,参考词汇：,proverb,Where,is Li Hua,仅代表本届高三毕业生致李华的一封信,Dear,李华，当你看到这封信时我即将离你而去，请不要遗憾，因为我将跟几百万考生一样不能再帮助你了。我只想最后再用汉语给你写封信，让英语不好的你懂得该怎么,坚持下去。,首先，你要记住，不要乱,参加英语竞赛,，要量力而行，因为下次你,求助,的时候我们将不再帮助你。还有，收发,电子邮件,时，要注意收件人要写清楚。日常生活中要,合理饮食,，,多吃蔬菜,。,减肥,的时候要多,锻炼,，不要,节食,。,旅游,时要事先,制定计划,，不要因为下雨和,自然灾害,就大发感慨。不要乱,出国旅,行,，咱一门外语都没学好，还是算了吧。更不要乱,交笔友,最后，我仅代表本届所有你的父母给你也布置一个作业,把这封信翻译成英文，寄给你所有山里的朋友 要求：语句通顺，没有错词，为使行文连贯，可适当增删内容，并祝全体考生金榜题名！,2014,山东卷书面表达,某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：,1,该谚语的含义；,2,体现该谚语的含义的个人经历。,A friend in need is a friend in deed,Where there is a will,there is a way,参考词汇：,proverb,审题之后明确以下几点：,要有题目,涵盖内容,：两大要点,-,谚语含义和个人经历,时态,：含义,现在时；个人经历,-,过去时,人称,：第一三人称为主,阅卷中发现的问题,1.,无审题意识,乱用各种体裁,Hello,I am writing this letter to,Its a great honor to have the chance to,无标题 （以所选谚语为题目）,写名人经历（要写的是自己的经历）,立意混乱：特别是关于患难见真情的阐述，要强调朋友对你的帮助或鼓励支持，而非论证对比真假朋友,时态混乱，一会儿现在一会儿过去，穿越,ing,阅卷中发现的问题,2.,用词不当，不准,On the one hand,the proverb means a lot and tells me friendship is important.,On the other hand,I had a real experience to prove it.(,误用来引出并列的两方面,),To start with,my E was not so,well,（误用来表示“起初”）,its,meaning,（,its meaning,）,a,progress,various of(a variety of/varieties of),come over difficulty (overcome difficulty),you will,success,(succeed),hold on,the dream (hold onto),come true,your dream(realize),accompany with,me(accompany me/keep me company),few,days ago (a few days ago/the other day),have,difficult,(difficulty),to my,surprised,(surprise),insist,doing/,stick on,doing(insist on doing/stick to sth),when,facing with,(when faced with/when facing),Instead,of,(Instead,)_,In addition,to,(In addition,),My English is,badly,and I feel s,adly,but I still work,hardly,阅卷中发现的问题,3.,汉式英语,There are many short but,full of wisdoms,proverb.,Only,we believe ourselves can we succeed eventually.,remember when I was 7 years old,(,记得我,7,岁时,),long time ago,（很久以前）,once a time,（曾经有一次）,阅卷中发现的问题,4.,无视句子结构,Never give up is,the most important thing,There are nothing,is impossible,if you put your heart into it.,in an environment,that with,many people around us,It tells me,that never lose,heart,When we getting,into trouble,He told me,that dont,give up,The experience,made me dont,give up,What my favorite proverb,is,5.,乱用假大空的套话,As far as I am concerned,I really know the importance of the proverb.,Its universally acknowledged that,where there is a will,there is a way.,It is said that,one who,attach,importance to what he does and,work,hard will be,succeed,.,阅卷中发现的问题,6.,详略不得当，重点环节不突出,要么太过具体要么太过笼统,如，劝慰鼓励“,my dear,dont be too nervous,everyone will meet such things.I believe you.Cheer up.Success belongs to the one who can put his heart into it”,再如，描述朋友时过多介绍外在特点，写太多与题无关的语句反而弱化了主题：,I have a friend,who is so cute and tall,with two big eyes and he is ready to help everyone around him.We all like him and will turn to him for help whenever in trouble.,笼统如，,I still remember I once met a difficulty/some trouble,and I was at a loss what to do and at that time,my friend,Tom,found my problem and helped to deal with it.,更有甚者用排比句替代掉了,经历,的描述，貌似一气呵成,Whenever I met difficulty in my study,whenever I felt depressed and whenever I need someone to accompany me,my friend will always appear and help me.He is really a friend indeed.,或者：,The proverb will always occur to me and encourage me to go on when I feel great pressure in my study,when I want to give up my dream or when I find it difficult to finish a task.,阅卷中发现的问题,7,经历不够真实，编造痕迹太明显,如,时间不真实,:,once upon a time,when I was 5,经历选取诸如：雨中送伞，雪中送衣，迷路施救，爬山遇险，作伴送饭，生病送医，遭遇车祸，车子故障，亲人故去，遇歹报警，路见不平，代友罚站，游泳落水等各色文艺范十足的话题。,另外，,2014,小狗很忙（罪魁祸首为阅读,A,：,Anns neighbor Tracy found a lost dog wandering around the local elementary school.She asked Ann if she could keep an eye on the dog.,由此引发而来的一系列的故事情节：帮朋友照看,dog;,帮朋友找,dog;,送,dog,给朋友等等）,对比,2013-14,年高考英语作文评分细则,对比,2013-14,年高考英语作文评分细则,作文评分细则,优秀档,良好档,在实际的阅卷中，极优档是没有的，而我们在写作训练中就应该以极优档的要求进行目标定位，才有可能会拿到优秀档的分数。也就是要突出,-,词汇极其丰富，行文极其流畅，书写漂亮,。而良好档与优秀档的区别就在于这四个“较”上，所以我们的训练目标就是要完成一个从,“较好”到“极好”,的提升,个人观点,针对以上几个问题，我个人认为要教会学生应对和处理高考中可能出现的各种问题，学会怎样把平时储备的知识准确的迁移到高考中去，就像商人要学会交易一样，在商品质量一定的情况下，怎样把手中的商品卖个好价钱。反映在我们英语的书面表达方面，我觉得 在今后的写作教学中应该注重以下几个方面的强化训练,个人观点,写作中的四化建设,审题要细致化,表达能精准化，,话题灵活转化，,卷面务精美化,写作中的四化建设,1.,无审题意识,审题细致化,通过细致的审题，快速清晰地确定人称，时态，体裁等，打好大的框架，为填充内容充实表达地道的主体部分做好外壳包装的准备。（可以拿出几节审题训练课，给学生定准写作方向）,写作中的四化建设,2.,用词不当，不准,3,汉式英语,4,无视句子结构,表达精准化,5,假大空的套话,打好基本功，强化英语表达意识,平时积累的词汇句型必须准确，不能似是而非。,学会进行地道而实用的表达，不说废话,写作中的四化建设,6.,重点环节不突出，,详略不得当。,7,经历不够真实，,编造痕迹明显。,认真背好每一篇范文，合理利用背过的题材，进行灵活的转换，不用现编滥造,话题灵活转化,档次要更上一层楼，要拿下优秀档，千万不要忘了,卷面精美化,就今年写作而言，“不管是有志者事竟成”还是“患难见真情”，完全可以依托于我们所训练过的一些话题,进行一下合理的转化，使其为主题服务。如，,考试失利，情绪低落；无法适应高三生活，压力大；出国留学，无法适应国外生活；英语阅读量增加的困惑；参加演讲比赛前的不安,.,用已经熟练掌握的话题，加上强化训练的一些地道表达，配上漂亮精美的外包装，一篇优秀档的作文就这样产生了。,写作中的四化建设,手抄打印版的,28,分标准卷的内容,when it comes to my favorite proverb,“Where there is a will,there is a,way has,been,inspiring,me,all the way,.,The meaning of the proverb is,inspiring,.It means that when you do something,you will succeed as long as you,insist doing,it.The proverb helped me,overcome many difficulties,.,Here is an example.,When I studied in,Junor,high school,I,had plenty of difficulty in learning,English.,That I cant understand the English grammer worried me a lot.,What worse,I,had a lot of trouble in communicating,well with others in English.The thought of giving up,occurred to,me.,It was the proverb that encouraged me to insist on studying hard,.With the,inspiration,of the meaning of the proverb,I practiced speaking English every day.Finally,I,had a good command of,English as well as being an outstanding English speaker.,In a word,am fond of the proverb.,（紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实，,语法结构多样，词汇丰富,，行文流畅，,显示出较强的语言运用能力,，允许有,个别,语言错误，但不影响意思表达。）,A friend in need is a friend in deed,Its believed that this proverb is familiar with us.It means that when you have difficulties,the friend who gives you a helpful hand is your real friend.,I would like to share an example with you.When I went into Senior high school,my English was terrible.,Not only did I have bad grades in the test,but also,I even didnt understand what the teachers said.However,my best friend,Lily,gave me a helpful hand.She,encouraged me to overcome all kinds of difficulties no matter how hard,they are.She also told me all the difficulties would become my most valuable,treasure,.,Thanks to her help,my English has been improved.,So,having a good friend,is,important for us.Please,treasure,them with your heart.,（紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实，语法结构多样，,词汇丰富,，行文流畅，显示出较强的,语言运用能力,从词汇的丰富度和语言的运用能力上稍逊于,28,分的这一篇文章）,手抄打印版的,27,分标准卷的内容,Where there is a will,there is a way,I am fond of this proverb.It,positively,changed me.The meaning of this proverb is,as follows,.,If people,make their mind,to do one thing,they will make it.Its easy for us to understand this proverb.It tells us that we can finish everything if we decide to do it.,I have experienced one thing which can prove this proverb.My English was not,well,at the,began,of high school.,Because I was not confident,.So I thought I wouldnt learn English well,but I,was superior to,my classmates in other subjects.One day,my English teacher told me that I could learn English well just as my,touge,language.It really,inspired,me.I decided to,spare no efforts,to learn English.With my efforts,I became the best English learner in my class.I did it.No matter how hard the road in front of you is,you should always,stick to,your dream and goal.I understood the meaning of the proverb after that.,（紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语法结构较多样，词汇较丰富，行文较流畅）,.,手抄打印版的,24,分标准卷的内容,掌握阅卷脉搏，了解学生问题，进行针对训练，提升写作能力,字多字好,压迫力,切题点全,硬道理,无错无改,真美丽,虎头豹尾,震撼力,靓词靓句,最给力,</p>