高考英语作文指导.ppt

高考作文高分卷的特点高考作文高分卷的特点根据高考最新考纲、书面表达的评分标准以及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：外在美外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。卷面整洁。图片图片1.png 结构美结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。主题。1.词汇美词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。志。likeBe fond of,be addicted to/helpdo sb a favor 句式美句式美：运用得当的运用得当的高级句式结构高级句式结构可可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉因此而生辉。衔接美衔接美：使用恰当的使用恰当的连接词连接词，对写一，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很重要，能使文的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。2.对比观点作文(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.有一些人认为。2.另一些人认为。3.我的看法。The topic of-(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of-(支持A的理由一)What is more,-理由二).Moreover,-(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),-(理由二).Thirdly(finally),-(理由三).From my point of view,I think-(我的观点).The reason is that-(原因).As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me,the former is surely a wise choice.3.解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1.问题现状 2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days,we have to face I problem-A,which is becoming more and more serious.First,-(说明A的现状).Second,-(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,-(解决方法一).For another-(解决方法二).Finally,-(解决方法三).Personally,I believe that-(我的解决方法).Consequently,Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because-(带来的好处).a4.说明利弊题型说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First-(A的优点之一).Besides-(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that-(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,-(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis,I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore,I would like to-(我的看法).From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A,we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,-(对前景的预测).)5.议论文的框架(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文题目_.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一_.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,_原因一_.Furthermore,in the second place,_原因二_.So it goes without saying that _观点一_.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that _观点二_.In their point of view,on the one hand，_原因一_.On the other hand,_原因二_.Therefore,thereis nodoubtthat _观点二_.As far as I am concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat _观点一或二_.Itis not only because _,but also because _.The more _,the more _.6.(2)利弊型的议论文 Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)_作文题目_.In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in _题目议题_.Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly,_优点一_.And secondly _优点二_.Just As a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides,_讨论议题_ is no exception,and in another word,it still has negative aspects.To begin with,_缺点一_.In addition,_缺点二_.To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题_ into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the _讨论议题_.7.高考英语开放作文指导 8.Describe a picture Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our lifeGive your own comment/suggestion/solutionStructure9.漫画的漫画的画面画面 细节细节漫画的漫画的夸张夸张 寓意寓意 (与现实的矛盾之处）与现实的矛盾之处）细节细节夸张夸张寓意寓意Dont copy others way of solving the problem.Do everything in the right way.读读图图与与立立意意细节细节10.Describe the picture:As is vividly shown in the picture,As can be seen in the pictureIn the picture,there are/is(are)doingwith the details and for the theme11.3.,a glass bottle,with only a little water in it,is trying to attach a label to its body,to announce to the world it is full.Its expression suggests that its very proud and looking down on the others.1.In the picture we can see a bottle of less water whose label is written full.2.From the picture we can see that there is a bottle.It has two hands and tries to put an label written“full”on its body.A smile is on the neck of the bottle.Inside the bottle is there a little water.12.How To Develop Your Arguments13.ArgumentsInterpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our lifeGive your own comment/suggestion/solutionHow To Develop Your Arguments14.Interpretation and implicationBy providing purpose and reasons or effects/attitude/judgmentBy providing examples/proverbs/explanationBy analyzing the practicalsignificance/reality 15.As a result,it is wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our heads full.(Description)(Interpretation&Implication)(Suggestion)Analysis For the Whole PassageAs is shown in the picture,there is a half-empty bottle is going to stick a label on its body,feeling proud and confident.(details)The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social phenomenon.We might often meet some people who look confident,trying to impress others with their“rich”knowledge.(reality/purpose)However,just like the bottle in the picture,what they really know is just a little.There is no doubt that they need to learn more because what they have in their mind is far from enough.(result)As an old Chinese saying goes,“empty bottles makes the loudest noise.”(proverb)16.评分标准：评分标准：文章是否扣题文章是否扣题-描述与主题一致，自圆其说描述与主题一致，自圆其说结构是否完整结构是否完整-三部分三部分内容是否健康内容是否健康-乐观向上乐观向上逻辑是否清晰逻辑是否清晰-议论要有逻辑性议论要有逻辑性语言是否准确语言是否准确-用词恰当，无语法错误用词恰当，无语法错误交际是否得体交际是否得体-情境，身份等情境，身份等17.在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高 级的词汇级的词汇;Tips 18.The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character.It adds financial burden to their parents.The worlds limited natural resources will be used up.In the first place,the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character.Secondly,it adds financial burden to their parents.Last but not least,the worlds limited natural resources,such as water and electricity,will be used up soon.First of all Firstly,To begin with,In addition,Besides,Moreover,Whats moreFinally,Whats worse,19.在在表达准确、表达准确、保持连贯的基础上保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高 级的词汇级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章使文章 结构紧凑结构紧凑;Tips 20.As far as I am concerned,I think only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved.On the one hand,it is necessary for schools to educate every student not to waste anything in any form and on the other hand every one of us should start with ourselves to fight against waste.It is not until all of us are involved in the activity that we can bring the situation under control.21.在在表达准确、表达准确、保持连贯的基础上保持连贯的基础上,尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较 高级的词汇高级的词汇;恰当使用过渡词或过渡句恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章使文章 结构紧凑结构紧凑;适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇,尽量避免重复和单调。尽量避免重复和单调。Tips 22.养成良好的写作习惯养成良好的写作习惯一、书写规范，卷面整洁；一、书写规范，卷面整洁；二、审清题目，提炼要点；二、审清题目，提炼要点；三、组词造句，组句成篇；三、组词造句，组句成篇；四、仔细检查，认真修改。四、仔细检查，认真修改。23.书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（第五档（21-2521-25分）分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。l准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏l应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇l语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致；具备较强的语言应用能力所致；具备较强的语言应用能力l有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（第四档（16-2016-20分）分）完成了试题规定的任务。完成了试题规定的任务。l比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容l应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求l语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致杂语言结构或词汇所致l应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的。达到了预期的写作目的。24.How to get the highest marks in writing?a good passage(skills)语言第一位 语言高级(词和句)内容第二位 要点齐全结构第三位 文章分段25.一高级词汇-人靠衣装，文靠词装高级词汇四原则避免重复原则地道原则形容词副词修饰原则词组优先原则语言第一位-语言高级26.高级句式-抓住高考英语老师阅卷的心理秘诀四不如四不如27.1 _不如_好With your help I have made progress in English.Without your help,I couldnt have made progress in English双否肯定2 _不如_妙 Students should have the habit of smoking by no means.By no means should students have the habit of smoking.陈述倒装主动被动3 _不如_巧We can borrow five books at most for ten days.Five books can be borrowed for ten days.28.4*从句不如分词傲(难点）口诀；一去；二看；三改一去，去连词；二看，看从句中主语和动词的关系三改，改分词When he heard the bad news,he cant help crying Hearing the news,the young man cant help cryng.29.内容第二位-要点齐全30.structures 1 heading 点点题题两三句概括性两三句概括性 2body 中心中心记述部分记述部分层次分明层次分明 3 ending 小小结结呼应主题呼应主题结构第三位-文章分段结构31.steps审抓扩连查认真审题认真审题把握主题把握主题 抓准要点抓准要点 勾勒大纲勾勒大纲紧扣要点紧扣要点扩写成文扩写成文添加过渡添加过渡确保连贯确保连贯查错补漏查错补漏修饰文章修饰文章二 steps32.对比观点作文(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.有一些人认为。2.另一些人认为。3.我的看法。The topic of-(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of-(支持A的理由一)What is more,-理由二).Moreover,-(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),-(理由二).Thirdly(finally),-(理由三).From my point of view,I think-(我的观点).The reason is that-(原因).As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me,the former is surely a wise choice.33.