高考英语写作提升修改后省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,届高考英语二轮书面表示提升、升格及分类训练,1/35,一、快速升格你作文,2/35,使用高级表示,whats more,in the same way,（一样地）,however,because,of,In addition,furthermore,similarly,equally,in comparison,in contrast,on the other hand,on the contrary,due to,owing to,on account of,thanks to,as a result of,because,in that,for the reason that,the reason for which lies in the fact that,3/35,though/although,in a word/in short/all in,all,today/now,should,despite,in spite of,the fact that,while,in brief,in summary,to sum up,to summarize,to conclude,in conclusion,nowadays,currently,at present,be supposed to,，,be expected to,4/35,sometimes,very good,most of.,if,occasionally,from time to time,at times,fantastic,awesome,amazing,wonderful,excellent,the majority of.,on condition that,as/so long as,suppose,provided that,only if(句首倒装),5/35,as we know,sth.is,very,important,I think,It is universally acknowledged that,It is generally accepted that,sth.should be put in the first place.,sth.should be attached great significance to.,We can not emphasize the importance of sth.too much.,Personally,From my point of view,As far as I am concerned,In my opinion,6/35,If you study hard,you can make progress.,Study hard every day and you can make rapid progress.,Study hard every day or you may fail to achieve your goal.,The harder you work,the more progress you make.,Spare no effort to study,in which case you ll make great progress.,Sparing no effort to study,you ll make great progress.,7/35,grow fast,try ones best to do.,Thank you very much for you help.,Plenty of,hard,work is helpful to English study.,increase rapidly/grow amazingly fast,We appreciate your help very much,.,We owe many thanks to your help.,A large quantity of,hard,work will undoubtedly,contribute to English study.,spare no effort to do.,do everything one can to do.,，,go all out to do.，make every effort to do.,8/35,cant do sth.well,为了,to do.,The day is coming.,in order to do.,for the purpose of doing,The day is drawing near.,The day is around the corner.,The day is on the way.,ha,ve,trouble,difficultya hard time(in)doing sth.,be poor at sth.,The day is,approaching,.,9/35,very,nothing but,The film we saw last night was very interesting.,The film we saw last night was,nothing but interesting,.,The film we saw last night was,anything but,boring,.,10/35,be helpful/useful,be of great help/use;,contribute to,Plenty of memory work is helpful to English study.,Plenty of memory work is of great help to English study.,Plenty of memory work will,undoubtedly contribute to,English study.,11/35,have to do,can not but/can not help but/have no choice but to do,I had to go home for it was dark.,I,could not but go,home for it was dark.,I,have no choice but to,go home for it was dark.,12/35,usually/often,more often than not;as is often the case,Usually,the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.,More often than not,the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.,As is often the case,the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.,13/35,be interested in,be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to,He is very interested in collecting stamps.,He,is caught up in,collecting stamps.,help,do sb a/the favor,Would you please help me to turn down the,radio?,Would you please,do me the favor to,turn,down the radio?,14/35,during,in the course of,During the mountain-climbing,please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.,In the course of,the mountain-climbing,please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.,15/35,使用复杂结构,1.,改变语态,People suggest that,we should protect the environment,.,(,普通,),2.,使用不定式,He is so kind that he can help me.,(,普通,),So kind is he that he can do me a favor.(,高级,),3.,使用过去分词,She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.,(,普通,),It is suggested that the,environment,be,protected,.(,高级,),He is so kind as to help me.(,高级,),Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.,She walked out of the lab with many students following,her.(,高级,),16/35,使用复杂结构,4.,使用,V,ing,形式,When,you,arrive,please give me an email.(,普通,),5.,使用名词性从句,It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.(,普通,),6.,使用定语从句,The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(,普通,),On arriving/,your,arrival,please give me an email.,The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.(,高级,),The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(,高级,),17/35,7.,使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句,Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.(,普通,),Not until 1920 did regular radio broadcasts begin.(,高级,),Though Im weak,I will make the effort.(,普通,),I,am,glad to see the,smile on my teacher face,.(,普通,),It was not until 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began.(,高级,),Weak as/though I am,Ill make the effort.(,高级,),How glad,I am,to see the,smile on my teacher face,!(,高级,),18/35,8.Every day,they have much homework.They are too busy to remember the characters.,（状语从句）,（独立主格结构）,Every day,they have,so,much homework to do,that,they,fail to,remember the characters.,（状语从句）,With so much homework to do,every day,they,have trouble in,remembering the characters.,（,独立主格结构）,Every day,so,much homework,do they have,that,they fail to remember the characters.,（倒装）,19/35,9.It will make people pay attention to,our mother tongue.,It will help students learn Chinese well.,It will,raise the awareness of,our mother,tongue.,（高级词汇）,It will,have a positive effect on,students,Chinese learning.,（高级词汇）,It will,not only,raise the awareness of our,mother tongue,but also,have a positive,effect on students Chinese learning.,（合并）,20/35,二、单句练,习,21/35,翻译以下句子,1,不用说,早睡早起是值得。,_,2,我深信,预防胜于治疗。,_,3,在,各种,运动中，我,尤其喜欢,慢跑。,_,4,时间最宝贵,这是很轻易证实,。,_,5,就我所知,，以下方法对我,帮助很大,。,_,It goes without saying that,it pays to keep early hours.,I am greatly convinced that,prevention is better than cure.,Among,various kinds of,sports,I,am fond of,jogging,in particular,.,It can be easily proved that,nothing is more precious than time.,As far as my knowledge is concerned,the following ways are,of great help,to me.,22/35,6,毫无疑问,，近视在我国年轻人中是一个严重问题。,_,7,依据我个人经验,，微笑已带给我许多好处。,_,8,在我求学过程中,我忘不了学习英文所碰到大困难。,_,9,伴随经济快速发展，许多社会问题产生了。,_,There is no doubt that,nearsightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.,According to,my,personal experience,smile has,done me a lot of good.,In the course of my schooling,.I will never forget,the great difficulty I encountered in learning,English.,With the rapid development of,economy,large quantities of social problems,have,come out,.,23/35,10,在这信息年代，计算机饰演非常主要角色。,_,11,世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴。,_,12,我们保持公共场所清洁是应该。,_,13,每当我想到那个时刻，我就忍不住感到激动。,_,In the age of information and communication,computer,plays an extremely important role,.,Nothing in the world can delight me so much as,having,hamburgers in fastfood restaurants.,It is proper that we are supposed to,keep the public places clean.,Whenever I think of,the very moment,I cannot but feel,excited.,24/35,14,人们相信阅读增加我们知识、扩大我们心胸。,_,15,青少年犯罪主要理由是社会环境日益败坏。,_,16,俗话说得好：老实为上策。,_,17,人们学外语有三个理由。,_,18,为了维护健康，我们天天最少可做三件事。,_,It is generally convinced(that),reading,increases our,knowledge as well as broadens our mind,.,The main reason why,t,he teenagers,commit crimes,is that,social environment is becoming worse.,As an old saying goes,“Honesty is the best policy.”,People learn a foreign language,for,three,major reasons,.,In order to keep healthy,there are,at least,three things we can do,every day,.,25/35,19,相反，,多数学生似乎还是对课外活动感兴趣,。,_,20,政府应严格执法，另首先，大众也应该培养降低污染好习惯。,_,21,换言之，我会尽最大努力完成我目标。,_,22,从此之后，我已发觉微笑是日常生活中防止冲突最好方法。,_,On the contrary,a majority of,students,it seems,are,still,keen on,after-class activities,.,The government is expected to,enforce the law strictly,.,On the other hand,the public also should,develop the good habit of reducing pollution,.,To put it differently,I will,spare no effort to attain(achieve,live up to,accoplish)my goal.,Ever since then,I have found smile is,the best way to avoid any possible conflicts,in our daily lives.,26/35,23,更严重是，我们不珍惜野生动物。,_,24,做这些简单之事，我们一定能够高兴出门平安回家。,_,25,唯有通力合作，我们才能期望情况很快有新改观。,_,What is more serious is that,we do not,cherish,wildlife.,By doing,these simple things,we,surely/definitely can,go out of the door happy and come back home,safe,every day.,Only with combined efforts can we,expect the situation to,take on a new look in the near future.,27/35,26,最终但并非最不主要，教育上缺失是助长青少年犯罪原因。,_,27,总而言之，好公民应该恪守交通规则。,_,28,所以我们能够得出结论，那就是世上自由最宝贵。,_,In conclusion,a good citizen is supposed to,observeobeyfollow,traffic,regulations,.,We can,therefore,come to the conclusion that,nothing is so precious as,freedom in the world.,Last but no least,the,deficiency in,education is the cause,contributing to,the crime of the young.,28/35,29,假如我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问，我们就能精通英语。,_,30,当前依据一项调查，中国学生半数以上患有近视，位居世界第一。,_,31,中国在世界上人口最多，占到了,20%,，其次是印度，占到,17%,。,_,China has the,largest,population of the world,which,accounts for,about 20%,followed by,India,making up,about 17%.,Currently,according to a survey,more than half of Chinese school children are,short,sighted,ranking first,in the world.,On condition that,we can do,as mentioned above,there can be no doubt that,we can,acquire a good knowledge of,English.,29/35,写作练习一,假设美国某中学学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文、理科选择。请你用英语写一篇讲话稿，向他们介绍你所做选择，并说明选择理由。,注意：,1.,开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；,2.,词数,120,左右；,3.,短文中不能出现与本人相关信息。参考词汇：文科：,arts,；理科：,science,Good afternoon,everyone.,Welcome to our school!,_,Thanks!,30/35,短文改错,Good afternoon,everyone,Welcome to our school!I feel extreme honored here,on behalf of all the students in our school,to address your guests from America,share with you my experience of choosing the main subject between science and arts.,At present,high school students faced with a choice between arts and science.In terms of me,it was not a easy choice to make.After careful consideration,though,I decided on science as my main subject of study.My reasons are as follow.,31/35,To start,science graduates are in great demand than arts ones in China.Additionally,the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist.Furthermore,my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student.,Last but not least,my physics teacher is my role model,his influence on me had a lot of to do with my decision.,It is for the reasons mentioning above that I finally made my choice.,Thanks!,32/35,Good afternoon,everyone,Welcome to our school,!I,feel extremely honored,here,on behalf of,all the students in our school,to address you guests from America,sharing with you,my experience of choosing the main subject between science and arts.,At present,high school students,are faced with,a choice between arts and science.,In terms of,me,it was not an easy choice to make,.After careful consideration,though,I,decided on,science,as,my main subject of study.My reasons are,as follows,.,33/35,To start,science graduates are,in greater demand,than arts ones in China.,Additionally,the science major can help me,achieve my childhood dream of,becoming a scientist.,Furthermore,my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will,have a brighter future,as a science student.,Last but not least,my physics teacher is my,role model,whose influence,on,me,had a lot to do with,my decision.,It is,for the reasons mentioned above,that,I finally made my choice.,Thanks!,34/35,Thank you for your attending,35/35,