定语从句与写作公开课定.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,全国卷英语作文评分标准最高档,（,21-25,分）,1.,完全完成了试题要求任务；,2.,覆盖全部内容关键点；,3.,准,确应用,较为复杂语法结构,和高级词汇；,4.,全文结构紧凑，有效使用语句间连接成份；,5.,完全到达了预期写作目标。,6.,卷面洁净整齐。,1/21,Attributive clause,Grammar and writing,2/21,合作探究：高考,满分作文中定语从句观赏：,年全国高考新课标,As you,know,my uncle Li Ming is going to,the city,where you live,to attend an international meeting,.,Ive,asked my uncle to bring you,the Chinese painting,which you,have asked for before,.,As we all know,cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.,3/21,写作,中定语从句主要作用,1.,增加,词数（,100,词左右）,能够连接两个包含同一事物句子，防止单词重复和句式单一。,补充细节，以丰富文章内容。,4/21,定语从句在写作中,应用,合作探究,:,怎样写出定语从句,用,5/21,(1)The,reason _he was late was that he got,up late.,(2)I,still remember the day _I first came to Beijing.,(3),It is an important day _ I will never forget.,(4),The park _ they paid a visit to is beautiful,.,(5)Visiting the new Amber Room is a good way _ people can know more about the history.,why,when,(Which/that),(Which/that),复习导,学：用适当关系词填空。,(in which/that),6/21,2.,合并句子。,（,1,）,A plane is a machine.It can fly.,_,（,2,）,M,y uncle bought a car last week.It was stolen.,_,（,3,）,The man is walking on the playground.He is my old friend.,_,(4)I saw a woman.Her bag was stolen,.,_,A plane is a machine,which/that,can fly.,The car,（,which/that,）,my uncle bought last week was stolen.,The man,who,is walking on the playground is my old friend.,I,saw a woman,whose,bag was stolen.,7/21,合作,探究,:,怎样写出定语从句,题干中出现两句包括同一事物简单句。,Solution:1,找出这两个简单句中都出现同一个事物。,2,将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外,一个句子中那个相同事物（注意关系词选取）,8/21,达标练习,:,1.,众所周知，,琥珀,屋,有着,一段令人惊奇,历史，,它,用黄金和珠宝装饰。,2.,琥珀屋闻名,世界,原因,是它非常宝贵。,3.,人们不会忘记,那,个时期,，,琥珀屋被德国纳粹党人偷走。,4,.,现在人们能够去,夏宫,（,the Summer Palace,）参观，新琥珀屋已经在,这里,建成。,9/21,众所周知，琥珀屋有着一段令人惊奇历史，它用黄金和珠宝装饰。,As is known to all,，,the Amber Room,has an amazing history.,The Amber Room,was decorated with gold and jewels.,As is known to all,，,the Amber Room,which,was decorated with gold and jewels,has an amazing history.,10/21,The Amber Room is famous in the world.,The reason is that it is valuable.,The reason,why,the Amber Room is famous is that it is valuable.,琥珀屋闻名世界，原因是它非常宝贵。,11/21,人们不会忘记那段日子，琥珀屋被德国纳粹党人偷走。,People will never forget,the,time,.,The Amber Room was stolen by the German Nazis.,People will never forget the days,when,the Amber Room was stolen by the German Nazis.,12/21,现在人们能够去夏宫参观，新琥珀屋已经在这里建成。,Now people can visit the Summer Palace.,A new Amber Room is built,here,.,Now people can visit the Summer Palace,where,a new Amber Room is built.,(,注意此处不再有,here),13/21,2.,题干中只有一个孤立简单句,Solution:,找到这个简单句中中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。,For example:,汉语是一门受欢迎语言。,Chinese is a popular language.,Chinese is a popular language,which is now spoken,and used by,more and more people all around the world.,怎么受欢迎？为谁所欢迎？,14/21,Practice:,派对将于十二月二十五号举行。,李明是一个热心肠人。,The party will be held on December 25th.,The party,，,which is designed to welcome the foreigners from other countries,，,will be held on December 25,th,.,(,派正确目标,),15/21,李明是一个热心肠人。,Li Ming is a warm-hearted man.,Li Ming is a warm-hearted man,who always,help others when they are in trouble.,(,详细化,),16/21,质疑,提升,Which:,这,(,用,定语从句增添做这些事情,原因或结果,),In this summer vacation,I,would like to do a part-,time job,，,which will help me gain money and working experience.,You looked upset in class yesterday,w,hich made me worried.,I would like to do voluntary work,which,will help those who are in need.,17/21,进阶练习：依据以下句子，完成短文。,今天,我们班就“文化遗址应不应该向公众开放,（,open,）,”进行了一次辩论会，同学们,观点,不一。大部分学生赞成这种观点。他们认为这是一个很好,方式,，人们能够经过,这种方式,了解中国历史、传统文化、习俗,（,custom,）,和建筑格调。开放文化遗址有利于当地旅游业,（,tourism,）,发展，,这,能,提升当地人生活水平。,反对这种观点,学生认为太多,游客会破坏珍贵文物。,众所周知，,毫无疑问为了赚取更多钱，当地人忽略了对文化遗址保护,（,protection,）,。在我看来，文化遗产应该,/,不应该向公众开放,Today we had a heated debate in our class about whether the cultural relics should be open to the public or not.,18/21,Different people have different opinion.Most students agree with the idea.They think that it is a good way that people can know more about Chinese history,traditional culture,custom and building style.Besides,opening the cultural relics will be good for the development of the local tourism,which can improve the livelihood of the local people.Students who are against the idea believe that too many tourists will destroy the valuable cultural relics.As we all know,there is no doubt that the local people will ignore the protection of the cultural relics in order to make more money.In my opinion,I believe that,19/21,Homework:,1.Polish the article we have written in the class.,2.Review the attributive clause.,2.Recite the new words.,20/21,Thank you!,21/21,